
Desert Eagle Suletan Khan
大漠雄鹰苏勒坦汗
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- 3.3M Words
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- Historical
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- Male
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- Alternate History
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2024 Bookworm Book List Recommendations
This book is set in 2024. It is an interesting and not too cliche novel that I have read.
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I started reading online articles in 2008. Now I am often short of books. I would like to recommend some books that I have liked.
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The biggest poisonous point is to imitate the Ming Dynasty system, Chineseize it, and call me "Zhen". There is no huge base of Han people. If you imitate the hammer, it will look too inconvenient.
There is actually nothing wrong with this theme. It depends on whether you follow the Qing Dynasty style of play, the Mongolian style of play, or the Xianbei style of play after entering the customs. Most people can't accept shaving their hair and changing clothes. The Mongolian style is also difficult to adapt to, but it is still tolerable. Learning from Xianbei's Chinese style and then reforming it is what most people can get out of this kind of theme.
The four Oirat tribes are the most difficult to write. All five tribes made wrong decisions under the tide of modern times. They were bullied, massacred, and their population dropped sharply. They have not yet recovered to one-third of the original tribesmen. I didn't dare to read a little bit of our nation's history. It was such a failure. I felt that apart from the Indians, we were the worst off. At least the Turks have more people and heroes like Kemal. We are left with a vast expanse of white land that is really clean.
Author, please, don't think like a pig who has never seen a woman. Which nun in a temple really disgusts me? Are you writing books to make money or for sexual obscenity? It's so disgusting. I was almost killed by the other party, but here I am again... It's a shame there are no books with similar themes. Otherwise, if you were so vicious, all the readers would be gone.
The subject matter is very novel. Now I see the Ming Dynasty text and I am very annoyed. The next station also has the one about Nurhachi. I am really tired of reading the Central Plains Dynasty.
Support, I am from the Torgut tribe of the Oirat tribe. We have too little history and we need to promote it more.
The reform of the official system was a failure. Without sufficient officials, what was the point of changing to the Ming system? With hundreds of years of accumulation in the Western Han Dynasty, the Eastern Han Dynasty was able to change the rule of the country by military aristocrats to the rule of civilian officials.
This book, when it comes to the protagonist, is written like a silly little sweet novel. You can at best write it for a while after the online novel came out. The audience can only be newcomers who are new to the field of novels. Anyone who has been reading for a long time will not read this kind of novel. That is, when I was in junior high school, a few years ago, about 14 or 15 years old. Except for some information and research, the character creation plot of this book is not interesting.
The first hundred chapters are really vicious and bad. They are not written from the perspective of the protagonist. There are several chapters of macro narrative, here and there. You are writing a novel instead of writing a history book. What are you doing with the macro narrative of the whole chapter? If I want to read a history book, do I need to read yours? The protagonist has no sense of existence at all in the first hundred chapters. I don't know why you wrote this book. When he started to have some presence, he lost his temper. He started to be deceived by women. He felt as if he had never seen a woman in eight lifetimes. Moreover, the protagonist had no brains at all and dared to say that he was a time traveler. The most inexplicable thing is that he was deceived and still comforted himself by saying that he had difficulties. Not only the protagonist is stupid but the author is also writing poison in the same writing style ten years ago. This author is unbelievable.
This article claims to be a time-travel article, but as of Chapter 124, there is no trace of the protagonist as a time-traveler developing productivity. According to the previous chapters of the novel, the time traveler is generally at least an undergraduate. Even an ordinary liberal arts student with a second degree should have at least a little foundation in physics, chemistry, politics, history, right? I don't expect you to invent and create on your own, but at least you can provide some guidance, right? How to build farmland water conservancy and how it gradually becomes better than the current era cannot be seen. There is no collection and cultivation of improved varieties. Iron smelting and steel making are completely absent. As a contemporary of Huang Taiji, the Mongolian protagonists located in the Bayingoleng Grassland, animal husbandry is the main business of the tribe, but there is no sight of the breeding of stallions and sheep, the planting of alfalfa, corn and other crops, the silage used as winter feed, and the development of the wool industry. I really don't know why you, a basic undergraduate student, traveled to the past? I felt that the old Mongolian script was inconvenient, so instead of designing it in Latin letters myself, I just waited for more than ten years for the great monk to come and teach Tote Mongolian script in person. But with this Thothmon script, is it really convenient? Is it good for printing? As of Chapter 124, the protagonist has three major ethnic groups in his name: Mongolian, Uighur, and Han. Their languages are very different from each other, and the protagonist has not made any efforts to reduce communication costs. The protagonist obtains the right to be the leader of the tribe at the age of 13. It stands to reason that talents in various fields will be cultivated from this time on. As of Chapter 124, various fields should have begun to emerge, but they are not visible at all. At the level of productivity development, there is no trace of the intervention of time travellers. What did you wear there for? On the other hand, given the current productivity levels of the various forces in the novel, how logical can it be for the protagonist to develop the tribe to the level of Chapter 124? If there is no major leap forward in productivity in the future, can the protagonist who started as a small tribe really eliminate the major forces that existed in history?
The strengths and weaknesses of this book are equally outstanding. The advantage is that he is relatively sophisticated about history and Mongolian customs, pays attention to details, is a hero, can bend and stretch, and has the potential to be a hero. The shortcomings are even greater. First of all, the strategy is wrong. Where is the core region of Central Asia? Ili River Valley, Fergana Basin, Northern Xinjiang and Tarim River Basin. The protagonist abandons the Ili River Valley and northern Xinjiang, but is obsessed with reaching the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau. It is like giving up watermelons to pick sesame seeds. What is the basis for hegemony? Land and population! There are only two good lands on the Qinghai-Tibet Plateau: around Qinghai Lake and at the bottom of the Yarlung Zangbo River Valley. However, Xinjiang has vast grasslands and tens of millions of acres of arable land. There is no comparison between the two. Let's talk about population. Taking the data of 2024 as an example, the population of Tibet is more than 3 million and that of Xinjiang is more than 20 million! In terms of land carrying capacity, Xinjiang lags behind Tibet. What's more important is that the climate in Tibet is harsh and altitude sickness is severe. If 10,000 people can survive for 5,000, it's very lucky. If you run on the plateau for a few minutes, you will have to collect the body the next day. Strategic mistakes lead to death.
The protagonist advocates equality for everyone. It's really funny. We can't achieve equality for everyone now. How can we do it in a few hundred years? Don't forget the protagonist's status, buttocks are not straight
Two words for the author, haha Why don't you write about indigenous people and time-travelers, don't act like a waste
It's so fucking disgusting, and the main character is a cuckold author, so that's awesome.
Why implement the six-part system?
Speechless, I really took it for granted. In Mongolia, which was still in an absolute feudal system, it began to reform and implement the six-ministry system. This was to dig out the roots of its own rule. How is Mongolia's centralization of power centralized? To take a step forward is to seek death.
It is not easy to publish and write a book with niche subject matter. I strongly support it! Some book friends are discussing whether to enter the Central Plains. Needless to say, if you don't enter the Central Plains, why write this book? Wouldn't that make it more niche? Besides, if you don't enter the Central Plains, you will be surrendered to the Qing army, and you will not be human inside or outside. Since you are a time traveler from the 21st century, you should be confident that you can flexibly use the ideological, political, cultural and technological technologies of later generations to deal with the problems of ethnic, religious and class classes in the ruled areas. There are various mature and good practices out there. There was nothing wrong with the previous approach. It's normal to have support and opposition to anything at any time, as long as the majority of people support it. There is a detail I would like to ask. Allowing the Han people to keep their original hairstyles and clothing is right, and it is also a weapon against the Manchu Qing Dynasty. But do David's officials, soldiers, and servants have uniform clothing? I think official uniforms should be uniform and civilians can wear them as they please.
To be honest, I want to read a novel about the invasion of Zhungeer or the invasion of sand goose. I wander around the Central Plains every day and want to change my taste. Zhungeer reincarnates as the Bodhisattva King or the sand goose emperor kicks the Qing Dynasty and punches the Ottomans. Of course, my idea may be too rare. Zhungeer may be able to write it, but sand goose will definitely not pass the review.
To be honest, although the author's writing direction is relatively niche, the author's writing is quite good. If you look carefully, you can read it, and the logical problems are not too big. The main reason for such poor results is that the rhythm is wrong and the development direction is not designed well. The fourth part of Oirat and Kazakhstan have been delayed for too long. The results of Central Plains will be much better if they are written earlier.
This writing feels mindless
The logic of this book is that it is not all about fighting. The problem is that the most important food and fodder for fighting is never told where it comes from. It feels like this group of people is fighting on air!
Come here because of the fame 6202 and there is an imbecile dream ending
I don't understand why I have to have a Han identity. When writing about Mongolia, just write about pure Mongolians. It's hard to please both sides...
I came here because of the reputation, the author is invincible in the world, but it's a pity that it's just a dream
First of all, I would like to congratulate you on the successful completion of this book. Of course, as a reader who has read all the way, I am very reluctant to give up, because every book embodies the feelings of the author and the reader. The author has a profound foundation in ancient poetry and I admire him very much. Theoretically, there is still a lot to write about in this book, such as the Eastern Japan, Nanyang and beyond, as well as the Industrial Revolution and the Great Navigation. However, the Great Khan is old, and these things can only be realized by the next generation. In this process, the struggle between the prince and the King of Qi and the princes will be the main line. It may be cruel, but it is very real. The author chose to let the story end abruptly. In the story, hundreds of officials, soldiers and people witnessed the Great Khan leaping on his horse and ascending to heaven to become an immortal. However, in reality, it was just a dream of a common boy. It was also cruel and real. The historical background of this book is relatively niche, and some subjects are relatively sensitive. It is not easy to achieve such results. The author is a part-timer and has his own job, so it is good to keep updating continuously. I would like to ask, is there any extra chapter in this book? If so, when will it be released? Does the author have any plans for a new book? If so, when will it be sent? When publishing a new book, please mention it in the comments section of this book. Old book friends must report it. I wish the author good luck with his new book in advance and a happy Spring Festival.
I didn't expect it to end today. Are there any extra chapters?
Publish new book
Can we go out to Mongolia and go on a western expedition? Want to see.
It ended early, and there were too many wars. I could write more, just my personal opinions.
Will there be any new books coming out? Sometimes once you put it down, you really put it down and can't pick it up again.
No update for two days😭🙏
When will the author publish another book similar to this one, but instead of conquering the Ming Dynasty in the east, it will conquer India in the south?
The protagonist is completely an ordinary person, not at all wise, but the enemies are all very wise.