I Will Practice More in the Mountain Village

I think it was quite well written, but it's a pity that it's unfinished.

Your IQ becomes lower as the story goes on 🤔

Two words, "suffering". The protagonist feels aggrieved no matter what he does. Why is he practicing martial arts like this?

WC, spiritual recovery, for this kind of subject, I can only say that the author should work hard

There are hundreds of thousands of administrative villages and millions of villages across the country, and half of them have village tyrants 😂

After reading Chapter 6, the writing is not very good. How can I put it, it feels a little ink-stained. It is good to just mention the common things that are not necessary in one sentence. I have to ink a few sentences. A little awkward! There is also the third floor at the beginning, the second uncle's bungalow, water dispenser, wine cabinet, etc. The former is vaguely written and I don't know who owns the third floor. The latter feels that the second uncle's character needs a wine cabinet and water dispenser? It's not that you can't afford it, but in front of you are dark towels with holes in them, dirty and yellowed walls, and an unpainted stool that you have been sitting on since you were a child. Suddenly you get up in the middle of the night to drink from the water fountain? It looks even more awkward!

The subject matter was chosen correctly, but the writing method was wrong. This type of article now mainly focuses on adding a little bit of invincibility, or being the only one who is extraordinary. Others are basically not popular.

It's still very good, and it has a sense of reality when you look at it. The doctor who starts off as busy but less busy, the second uncle who is honest and kind, and the second aunt who is selfish and emotional. A very distinct character. The protagonist is also well written, expressing his anger at being cheated by the doctor and the attribute points gained. There is a distinct sense of picture.

The writing is quite good, just hold on and don't pay attention to those people in the book reviews who say this is not good and the other is bad. Those words made me angry. These days, your seven-point book review style is getting worse and worse. If there is any conflict, it will be up to the 100th floor. If you feel it is not in line with your own opinions, you will just reject it and disgust others. I'll be honest. If you want to read it and think it doesn't look good, then don't read it. You're all here to read a book. Where does that sense of superiority come from?

Global Meteor Shower, is the author ready for spiritual revival? I hope there won't be any bloody plots, such as conflict plots where rich people or martial arts masters come to visit, so I can just calmly collect martial arts and upgrade to the ancestors. 😀

The first chapter is about feeding poison, right? Revise the first chapter.

When I saw the protagonist taking Chen Juanjuan up the mountain, I couldn't stand it anymore. The author didn't know what was going on, and thought he wrote it very well.

Is this Chen Juanjuan disgusting? Her father demolished the protagonist's house, her mother let the dog bite the protagonist, and the protagonist saved Chen Juanjuan's life and still wants to lick her like a dog?

So why was the protagonist fired?

I felt relieved when I saw my grades were so bad... I ran away. I was poisoned.

It will be released this Friday, which is the day before New Year's Eve. I am grateful that people scold me every day, which makes me grow gradually. I'm also grateful that some people like it. In fact, most people are silent and continue reading silently.

I've read a few books of this type. The first one was good, the second one was okay, and this one, well, be wise.

Don't you always shout "Ha!" When you exert your strength? You keep saying "ah" and it feels weird to look at you.

Please find a novel that is also in this urban genre. But the one where the protagonist is a security guard at the beginning

It's really well written, stick to yourself, I will subscribe to the end

Recently, there have been many similar books on Qidian, 🤫

Chapter 56 Don't care? I feel so stuck that I don't want to read any further. I ordered twenty chapters just for the sake of commenting 🔨

Where is the author from?