Devouring the Starry Sky on the Tip of the Tongue

The protagonist can leave, everything is a dish, and I am the god of food. Road. The attack from the opposite side was eaten directly. Everything is edible. The laws, energy, and existence on the opposite side are all swallowed up and absorbed. The real swallowing starry sky

The setting here is recognized by readers, so you can just eat as much as you want, and study carefully what to eat to strengthen your physical fitness, improve your level, increase your growth rate, improve your cultivation speed, etc., As well as your own fields, laws and other systems! Fandoms are secondary creations, don't be afraid, write boldly, and you won't die!

I think the author can write more about food and drink, and don't worry about other people's cultivation and so on.

There are demons and bugs that can be eaten, but the machine race is probably doomed

I am the author of the Panlong fanfic, and I am also a fan of Devouring Starry Sky. Your entry point is really good! Don't dislike it if you reward a book friend!

After reading the free chapter, the plot has just passed the earth chapter. Let me briefly share my personal opinions with the brothers: First of all, the setting is very good. The plug-in is a magically modified version of the food system. Although there are prisoners and Chinese little masters who draw on the food, the magically modified version does not conflict with the original settings. In addition, the profession of pharmacist is included in the original work, so it can be seamlessly connected; Secondly, the plot is a bit bloody. In the Earth Chapter, there are not many places that can be written without competing with Luo Feng. Then the author likes to pour chicken soup when he has nothing to do, and he is also very deliberate in the part where he befriends Luo Feng... Finally, in terms of writing, he is sincere. In the exchange with Cheng Xue at the beginning, it was basically Cheng Xue casually advising the protagonist in two sentences and the protagonist came to enlightenment. The subsequent dialogue was also very clear, not to mention the embarrassing naming... Generally speaking, there is no problem with the general direction, the setting is not deviated, the plot has no bad points, but the writing is almost meaningless, but the writing may come up as soon as it is written. Personal evaluation, the future is promising.

This is outrageous. How can I finish this book?

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

It's too bland and doesn't arouse the reader's emotional ups and downs, and the plot doesn't have upward or downward turns, which makes it a bit uncomfortable. In the first few chapters, the protagonist seems like a headless fly flying around with no clear goal. There are too many narrations in the dialogue between various strange characters, which makes it a bit of a drama.

If you are writing about food, I recommend the author to read "Myth Forbidden Zone". The protagonist in it also believes in eating, aspires to become a god of cooking, uses food supplements to enhance the evolution of life, and has created many super cooking skills (super martial arts). For example, if you practice hard on your knife skills, you can do what a cook can do with a cow. You can even go one step further and attach high temperature to the knife to chop a monster into a cooked dish with one knife. Another example is using the force field generated by itself to provide high pressure, coupled with the power of fire, to beat the monster into ball soup with one move. Many cooking techniques allow you to directly turn monsters into dishes that can be eaten directly. Even when the protagonist encounters races that are extremely malicious to humans, he almost annihilates that race...

The names chosen by the author are really embarrassing. I felt like I was going to dig out a room with my feet.

Brother, listen to my advice and don't finish this book! I am about to write a fan novel that spans the world of Coiling Dragons and Devouring Starry Sky, which is the writing idea I learned from you - to achieve enlightenment through eating. As a result... How can I write a novel without facing the problem of sparse subscriptions and venomous comments from book friends? Unless you no longer plan to write a novel, you will always have to face these. Also, it is precisely because there are too many novels about eunuchs that today's book lovers don't like to subscribe to and read more, and are ready to wait until the book is finished or is about to be finished before reading the novel. As everyone knows, this is a terrible vicious cycle. Working hard to finish a book will always bring you some different rewards. Wangyu, the author of "Mortals Cultivation to Immortality", knows that when he wrote "Mortals" hundreds of thousands of words, he still faced the problem of being unable to sign a contract. Who has not come out of difficulties and obstacles? Another example is me. Because I clicked the wrong option on the signing link, for 21 days: the editor couldn't add my contact information, and I complained every day and everywhere. I didn't care about these things and kept updating. Not recommended or favorited. I waited until the second site failure of the system, then added contracted editors and reset the links... In short, it was miserable, miserable, very miserable. I won't go into details one by one. Thousands of words condensed into one sentence, say no to eunuchs! Otherwise, what you are experiencing now will be reincarnated again in the future. Writing a novel is really very long, and it is almost impossible to become a god in one book.

After reading a bit, I would like to make some suggestions regarding techniques. Logically speaking, a chef's knife skills are not bad. He can just learn the "pig-killing knife technique", understand the opponent's weakness, and kill him with one knife. It's impossible for a chef to just write recipes and not cook his own food...

The world view of food is no worse than Devouring, even white ghosts can rival the universe.

The biggest poisonous point in this article is that the ninth-level planet➕the third-level water domain cannot defeat the seventh-level planet with no domains in the water.

There is also a book about swallowing stars and eating food.

Did you write a book similar to this one before, but it turned out to be too cheap? Is this a new one after sorting it out?

I subscribe to all and add monthly tickets. You tell me it's over. Are you worthy of us? 🙂

The anime character of Babata is out. Can you collect it?

Uh... I finally saw a different entry point. After just a few days, I... Bang~ are you happy? ? ? Did this author follow any father-in-law into the East Factory?

When I read the title, I thought it was a novel with the theme of cooking and food, but the result was very different.

What can I eat between the Genius War and Chaos City? I hope there will be a golden finger

Just write this and you're done

If you don't defend yourself, you can't defeat me. If you defend yourself, you will fall into my trap

I just updated to tell you what happened after it was completed.

Not everyone is subscribing and voting monthly, so why don't you do this?

It's on the shelves, and then one chapter a day... Author, do you want to mess it up?

Isn't it bad to write about food? People who are doing all kinds of things in Swallowing Stars have not yet recognized the reality. Who can say no if they are strong enough? Just the general direction of controlling the life span of a thousand years for the planetary level alone is enough. It would be ridiculous to write a lot of miscellaneous information.

Did Shen Nong test poison? ? ?

No wonder he cut off an invincible God of War and left it to pieces. Why did he join some alliance or open some restaurant?