Back in 1985, I Could Get Cash in Advance

How to say it? The story structure is okay, but the specific content is uncomfortable to watch. The way the eldest sister was robbed was handled in a somewhat sloppy manner, and it did not fit the image of a veteran who had been reborn after decades of social experience. The father doesn't say whether he loves the sisters or not, but his son should complain about his attitude. Although it is a characteristic of the times, don't forget that the male protagonist traveled back in time with a lifetime of guilt and heartache for his eldest sister. That kind of anger cannot be explained clearly in a sentence or two. If you put yourself in their shoes, imagine that the emotions that have been accumulated for decades are reflected in the time. The moment Yue was reborn, he must have found an outlet. Not to mention how to treat the Lin family, he should first give his father a slap in the face, because his father's few words after the neighbor left would become a real outlet for venting. However, the way the male protagonist dealt with it did not show the emotional state of guilt and love for his eldest sister for decades. The decision to take the little sister to school, the family's reaction, the little sister's reaction, the change in the family's attitude and the verbal entanglement in the dialogue are not well explained. Therefore, the chronology of this book does not look like a chronology, and the refreshing writing does not look like a refreshing writing.

Even if I really write something wrong, you find the corresponding plot to criticize, instead of saying "what did you write?" Did you spend a penny for me? You just come to criticize me without even reading it. I don't want to say something unpleasant. Do you think people who write books for free are easy to bully?

The first part is the childhood chapter, which mainly tells the story of the male protagonist's growth in his hometown. It belongs to the first chapter and has only about 60,000 to 70,000 words. The second chapter should be a factory business war, conquest and cooperation chapter, mainly about the male protagonist's business start. The number of words for this chapter has not been determined yet, but compared to the childhood chapter, there should be a lot more conflicts, and the plot will be much more exciting. This is a development chapter, and there will be confrontations and slaps in the face! The third chapter is the envisioned modern chapter. The protagonist has fully grown up, probably after 1995, and the protagonist's business achievements have begun to take shape. The early stage of the modern chapter should be a complete climax, and the later stage will be ordinary daily life. If there are any readers who are passing by and are interested, please don't give up on this article! Occasionally, dip in and point out the shortcomings. The previous part was about environment creation and character development, so it wasn't that exciting. Starting from the second part, everything is there, including all kinds of slap-in-the-face accidents! Thank you!

The first wave of climax in Chapter 33 is coming, and as the protagonist ages rapidly, there will be more and more conflicts and fights in the subsequent plot. If there is a living voice, I will scan this comment in a few days...

Read the first chapter, why are you going to school when you can have cash? You already have the start-up capital, so why not do it? Does the relevant department stipulate that you must go to school?