Traveling Through the Swordsman Jianghu, Starting from Saving Your Life

From the moment Linghu Chong left the Great Wall, we can see that the author's plot arrangement was not very good. How could a person who grew up under the care of his sect and his masters and parents leave so easily? In the original work, Linghu also wanted to return to the sect. You can write that he is depressed, drinks alcohol all day long, and even associates with scum in the world to lower his status, so that the protagonist can get the top spot. Secondly, forcibly writing Yue Buqun to death for the sake of a middle-aged woman is also a big failure, is illogical, and extremely lowers the quality of the work. Yue Buqun can write that serious injuries are difficult to recover from and require long-term treatment. In this way, most of the daily affairs are handled by the master and the protagonist together, and the relationship between them can also be viewed from this perspective. The current way of writing it will make people think that this is a pornographic book wrapped in a serious book cover.