Fighting Phoenix Nine Heavens

The protagonist is so useless. The cubs of the Amethyst Winged Lion King are all third-level. The protagonist's Yitian Demon Phoenix cub is only first-level. Stop writing and find a class.

The author's writing is okay so far. Don't worry about those scum. Medusa, the heroine, is pretty good. Those talking about birds and snakes are funny. Let's go into the animal world. And the heroine Zi Yan is even more funny. If someone is a feud, you have to use love to resolve the hatred. Do you have to transform into a white-eyed phoenix and a white-eyed dragon?

Just put poison at the beginning, create an awesome race and start at level 1, and say there will be an explanation later. How many people do you think will look at the later part?

Are you serious? The Celestial Demon Phoenix clan was born at the fifth level, and then they devoured heavenly materials and earthly treasures to advance to the sixth level, and took the Transformation Pill to transform into human bodies for cultivation. There are still first-level monsters that are thrown away for training. Which family's traitor has sneaked into the top of Tianyaohuang to issue such an order.

Regarding the issue of the Heavenly Demon Phoenix, here is a unified explanation: The original work tells that after the Heavenly Demon Phoenix clan members open their spiritual wisdom, they will jump to the fifth level and start at the seventh level as adults. But there is a problem here, that is, Zi Yan, as the biological daughter of the Nine-Star Fighting Saint, is still at the fifth level after raising her for so many years, so they can't be the same, right? So the author set up the first level of birth. After the bloodline is revived, the infant has at least the third level to the fifth level of cultivation, and also has the ability to transform, and quickly cultivates to the sixth level. This is considered to have been weakened in disguise, and there are many bugs in the game itself. Xiao Yan's age alone is hard to tell. If you are really struggling with this grading issue, then just don't read it, otherwise you will have to rewrite all these dozens of chapters😂 This is also the author's first time writing a novel, so please bear with me*☆( ˘ω˘ )☆*.+

The original work mentions that Tianyaofeng has the strength of a fifth-level fighting king since he was born.

Le, the cubs of the sixth-level Amethyst Winged Lion King all have level 3 and are waiting to devour the accompanying treasures under the protection of their father. However, the cub of the Sky Demon Phoenix, one of the strongest monster clan, only has level 1 and was thrown out for trial.

After reading the first one, I didn't want to read anymore. I left. The top level of Warcraft was only born. Speaking of hammers, you didn't even read the original carefully. You were not in the mood to read the front, so you had to read the back.

Doubi and Diaosi are outdated and a bit serious

If you don't know how to write, don't write. Can you give me a first-level performance for the newly born Sky Demon Phoenix? Those who didn't know thought it was a fried bird.

The character he wrote is too silly. Does the author think the readers will be very happy? It looks so embarrassing

Xiaoxiao has been a fighting sect since he was born, and within two years he has reached the peak of fighting saint. Dou Qi Continent is the plane of fighting.

Why lick, lick the dog! I have nothing to say about licking women, because you are looking for someone else to reproduce. You, a male monster, lick a man (Hai Bodong). What special hobbies do you have? ! ,,😂😂😂😂

It's totally a loser's idea. You think you look funny, but you are one of the embarrassing ones.

The first-level Sky Demon Phoenix persuaded me to quit in the first chapter 🤫

This setting is a bit ridiculous 😥 The reason why Zi Yan was only at the fifth level for so long was because she had no racial blood inheritance and ate the Transformation Grass when she was a minor. The book clearly stated that her growth became extremely slow due to the accidental consumption of the Transformation Grass. To put it bluntly, Zi Yan at that time even used the resources of the entire Black Angle Domain. Even if you swallow them all, you won't be able to meet the requirements of adulthood. Moreover, the biggest advantage of the Warcraft family over ordinary Warcraft is the bloodline inheritance. The starting point of Warcraft with bloodline heritage is higher than the end point of most Warcraft. If you set the starting point to level one, I'm afraid you don't have any blood of the Sky Demon Phoenix in your body.

Together with the Dragon and Phoenix Alchemist next door, they can be called the Crouching Dragon and the Phoenix 🤭

There is indeed a problem with Chapter 55. After all, in a fantasy world of high martial arts, you cannot write a modern marriage proposal in a humble way. By analogy with the identity of the male protagonist and the female protagonist, it's like you, an ancient prince, fell in love with the daughter of a small landlord. How dare the landlord get along with you as an equal? Not to mention the conditions, which is why readers complained about it. In short, the previous stages of birth are just a small problem, and bloodline awakening can barely solve it. But the latter problem is quite serious, and it strongly affects the viewing experience. I suggest you change it! ! !

Can you make Medusa evolve into a colorful sky-swallowing python by making your sixth-grade potion? In the early stage of the original work, Medusa was only set up to break through the Dou Zong. Later, the heroine raised the upper limit. This is equivalent to turning an imperial fish into a genius with an eighth-grade bloodline. If this potion is so good, it cannot be used to mass-produce ancient sky phoenixes. I suggest that the author does not upgrade to a sky-swallowing python. The level of pharmacists increases step by step. After all, the potion is safe. In the original work, it is a narrow escape, and it is also covered by the halo of the protagonist.

Hey, the protagonist is full of dick flavor, it's embarrassing to look at it

Um, I don't understand why it is necessary to be hostile to Xiao Yan. Xiao Yan is bound to become the master realm. In Yuan Zun, Zhou Yuan becomes the first-order god and sees the future. Xiao Yan, Lin Dong, and Muchen are destined to become the master realm. They cannot change it. Even if they seize the opportunity, they will become the master realm. He will also become the master for other reasons, let alone Xiao Yan's luck. Even if it is a fluke to become the Dou Emperor, is it also a fluke to become the master within a few decades? Are the saint-grade heavenly supremes in the world who have lived for tens of thousands of years not stronger than the Dou Emperor's bloodline? Moreover, Xiao Yan's character was quite good, wasn't it better than Tang San?

I read Chapter 7, eh! It makes sense for your grades to drop. I can't bear it anymore, bye bye

The beginning is quite toxic, it smells like a diaosi, and the so-called emotional scenes with Medusa and Feng Qing'er are a complete mess. The author probably doesn't know how to write emotional scenes, so he'd better stop writing and concentrate on his career. Some of the plots in the Northwest Continent are also quite awkward, but the later parts focusing on the career line are pretty good, especially the plot after returning from the Northwest Continent. In addition, I am not very interested in some parts of the different world travel experience, and have basically skipped them, especially Shounen Gexing. I have not watched the original anime at all, so the author should focus on the plot of Dou Qi Continent. In short, the book is a little bit toxic in the early stages, but it's pretty good later on.

I want to complain. The author has really accumulated a lot of entertainment. Forget about Douluo Dalu, I have also watched the TV series "Zhe Tian", "Huo Ying" and "Sweet Honey as Ashes as Frost". I remember a lot of these details, unlike me who forgets after watching them. I am very curious which work will be included in the next one.

If you don't rush into the streets, it's not allowed by nature. The original book clearly states that the Sky Demon Phoenix starts at level 5. It would be better for you. Even the feathered birds are better than the protagonist. Find a class.

After reading one chapter, I was so addicted that I decided to quit. . .

No one likes to read system articles now because they are too brainless.

The emotional line you wrote is really weak and too stiff, so you forced Medusa to have feelings for you? Awesome, really awesome, there are also fantasy ones, either you just stop talking nonsense, there are so many funny psychology, aren't they all decisive in killing? It's written like a child. Even teenagers nowadays are not as childish as what you wrote. There is a reason for poor grades. It's like Wolong was alive.

It's better to change the master, it's so uncomfortable to read, and don't be too out of touch with the writing 😥 No one will read it like this

Fanfics are almost all about Medusa. I'm tired of reading Medusa... I hope there are novel ones.