Ke Xue's Love Story

A lot of private goods with a strong personal touch. It would be better to stop writing fan fiction and create a world directly.

It's okay, it has its own unique plot. Let me talk about my opinions. First, Anu, her profession and experience do not allow her to see a dead person. Her first reaction is to be scared or scream. Calmly check and contact the police. No matter the protagonist, it should not be this reaction. Fighting monsters does not allow panic. Calmness is first. There are almost no monsters without casualties. She should be familiar with death. It is not uncommon to help rescue the injured and witness death. It is understandable to fight with people, but not her reaction. This is my first reaction after seeing this plot. The second is for the protagonist to learn swordsmanship. Anu's murderous aura stimulates the protagonist, and the dragon bloodline has been activated. Under this stimulating conditioned reflex, it would be more reasonable for the protagonist who has not undergone special training to subconsciously light up the golden eyes. After all, in the setting of the dragon family, dragons and hybrids are at the top, and they are also killing creatures. The instinct is very scary. It is instinct to light up the golden eyes under this instinct, increase physical strength and resist.

After the 170th chapter, the system was updated and the extraordinary appeared. It was no longer interesting, and the protagonist even almost died. I don't understand what the author meant by writing this. The buying point of this novel is mainly daily life, and the protagonist's ability that is different from ordinary people is a guarantee of daily life. But when various extraordinary powers appeared in the world, this guarantee dropped significantly, and the protagonist was injured and almost died. This completely went against the center of daily life, and I had no idea of ​​​​reading it anymore.

It's too literary and youthful, but I don't feel like it if I talk about it. I can't stand it anymore and want to skip reading. I can only say that the book is good but not suitable for me.

Look at what big bastard he is, he has a fever but still has to cook for his bastard girlfriend...

Naiwan looked at the calendar and saw that it has been 3 weeks since I started writing this book. During this time, Naiwan has been updating three to four times a day. I believe that in the future, it can also reach five updates of 10,000 words a day! Thank you all for your continued support of Milk Ball. Many friends have given valuable suggestions, which has made Milk Ball even more motivated. Nai Wan's writing style has always been limited, and I know this, but Nai Wan is constantly learning how to write better. I hope my friends can give Nai Wan some time to improve. Naiwan will be very sad to see some of the messages from friends, but at the same time, he will also leave comments to remind himself to work hard to write better. I wish everyone a happy holiday.

Good guy, you write a Conan fanfic, but it turns out you got all the heroines from other places, so you might as well not write it.

Dear children, take a look. This book, Milk Ball, mainly wants to give some female protagonists a warm home based on their tragic life experiences (such as Eri Yi and Anu-chan, who was abandoned by Master Qi). Therefore, within the first 40 chapters, I will write about warm daily life, plus the plot that is gradually intertwined with the main characters of Conan. Generally speaking, it is relatively slow to gain popularity, but Milk Ball is written with great enthusiasm, so please be patient! And students who want to start from the main plot can watch it from chapter 40 onwards!

Palace clothes! ! !

After the system upgrade, the plot inexplicably turned into a fantasy novel, which feels disconnected from the previous one. The protagonist has also gone from being a strategist in the past to a near-death situation now. I really don't know what the author's benefit is from making the world view change.

Little Monster

I just finished watching it and it feels pretty good. I just wish there wouldn't be more female leads. Too many would be boring.

Talking about a bunch of heroines in Ultraman, but it turns out there is no Ultraman in Conan World, and it's like traveling all the way.

Come on, I'm here to see the cat...

Taking a group photo

Um, Chapter 11 was so confusing that I suddenly lost the desire to read. I had been reading it in the early morning, all because of my desire to read. This chapter was so unexpected that I suddenly wanted to sleep.

Juliano, brother, are you serious?

The writing is very good, but it seems a bit strange, which is hard to describe.

It's not that I don't like harems, but I really can't accept NTR.

The writing, the plot, and the relationships between the characters are a bit elementary school. The first chapters seem really immature. The character descriptions are basically blunt descriptions. And most of the chapters, to be honest, I felt a little embarrassed. I felt like I was reading an elementary school student. Childishness is probably the most appropriate thing in my opinion.

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Let me tell you my opinion. The early stage is an ordinary daily mystery. The protagonist becomes excellent because of the dragon blood. It is actually quite good to treat it as a daily mystery love story, although the heroine is not from the Conan world. In the middle, I don't want the protagonist to be too invincible to change the world. Although I think it would be better to change it to a fantasy novel and have the protagonist awaken the Mirror Pupil instead of Time Zero at the beginning. Currently, I saw that Xiao Ai was taken in not long ago. I think Mingmei is quite decent. She was a little bit poisoned by the protagonist's operation. She was in a bank robbery. The gangster had a life-connected bomb jacket and killed several people. The protagonist was distracted enough to control the clone to attack Gin. , Ended up breaking his arm, and the clone died. He thought he had controlled the gangsters, but when he was distracted before, the gangsters tied the bomb to other people. The protagonist cast a forgetting spell, causing everyone to forget the existence of the bomb and killed some people, including Mingmei, although she was not dead afterward.

Is the plot going to develop into urban fantasy?

Author, are these the heroines the only ones?