Martial Artist

I took a look at it, first of all, the title of your book is not very good, "Xue Wu Ren", this title is too bland and does not make people want to read in. Erche Luanlu talks too much, many things can be mentioned in one sentence. After a short dialogue and plot, you always have to write a bunch of monologues, all kinds of things to know. The reason why, although it makes sense, it has no effect on advancing the plot. To put it bluntly, it is a bit watery, and there are... It's a line break. Obviously a sentence can be read smoothly at once, but you have to pick out two words every time and then break the line with a comma. "After all, so, actually." This is the same as your previous monologue. It can be used, but don't use it often. The characters also use several lines in one sentence. Of course, this is just a suggestion. The novel itself is still very good, at least there are no poisonous points. The writing is also acceptable, but the writing technique needs to be improved.

Thank you very much, every recommendation is my motivation to keep writing, thank you all friends and readers who voted for me, 🙏🙏🙏

The author's writing is great 👍, but the coolness is not very prominent, and you can add more appropriately. You can't tell the content just by looking at the title...😂The writing is very good, but it can make the protagonist have more conflicts with others, which makes it more interesting. In fact, the coolness can also become a growth flow. After all, it is not easy to sign a contract if you don't write coolness, but I like your sentence breaking style. Come on ✊Believe in you.

As expected, I already had a headache, a fever, a runny nose, and I don't know if it's because I'm in poor physical condition, but it was much worse than others. This will affect the update. Two chapters a day has always been my insistence. I don't want to give up halfway. I'll try my best! ! !

When I woke up, I suddenly found that so many people had given me suggestions. I was really happy from the bottom of my heart. Thank you for your suggestions, and I hope you can continue to point out my shortcomings in the future. I must accept it humbly and make corrections seriously. Thank you everyone! ! !

First add a bookshelf and look at it after the exam 😁

To increase your popularity (Pu Niao)

Come on, the author. I really like this kind of work that is well-founded and logical. It is not forced but the plot is plot. The IQ of the main and supporting characters is online. It is not Xiaobai's book.

My writing skills are limited and I write in my spare time. If there are any flaws, please feel free to give me your advice. I will accept it with an open mind🙏

It's not that I won't cheer you up, you're too short, right?

I have finished reading it. It is actually well written, but there are a lot of typos. At least if there are too many typos, I will be annoyed. The author can pay attention to this. The setting of this book is very special. It is based on academics. The pace is also a bit too slow. I haven't read many books like this, and the words are a bit straightforward. Anyway, good luck to the author.

Keep up the good work. Added to bookshelf, waiting for your update.

The funny route is good, but it's a pity that there are too few updates.

Does anyone know why the uploaded chapters have to be reviewed? I have experienced blocking, but this is the first time I have reviewed the uploaded chapters. Why is this?

I don't think novels need to create conflicts, highlight a main line, and develop along the main line. For this reason, sometimes conflicts are deliberately created to make the story compact and interesting. But in fact, this does not need to be the case. As long as the character setting is okay and the world setting is reasonable, through the interaction between the characters and the world environment, conflicts and accidents will naturally occur, and it will develop all the way. If there are constant conflicts, if the protagonist is a real person, I am afraid he will be exhausted and tired of the world. Sometimes, giving more space and giving the protagonist more freedom may have better results. Of course, this is my family's opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it🙏🙏🙏

Come on. Everything is difficult at the beginning. The first step is the beginning of success.

Even if you have traveled through time, you cannot go along with it just because the world is difficult. Establish a heart for heaven and earth, establish a destiny for the people, and carry on the unique knowledge for the saints. As a human being, you must live up to the teachings of the sages and hold on to your heart. Remain true to your original intention, abide by the teachings of your ancestors, and it is even more precious to emerge from the mud without being stained!

I came here and read more than a dozen chapters. I also fell in love with it, and I can't say much about it. The plot is about conflict, development, and selling points. If you do these well, you will have all the elements of a novel. Typically working behind closed doors, you can go to the fandom list and make a list. Summary of the new book circle, I have done a fantasy before, but I wrote other genres. This thing is very timely, so I deleted it in a fit of anger. But it is very useful to do it once, you can try it. After all, before signing, there is the writer and after signing, there is the author.

I haven't been writing books for a long time, and I wrote them in my spare time. I know very well that there will be deficiencies in both plot conception and writing style. This is inevitable and cannot be denied. So, I need my friends to give me some suggestions and help me correct my shortcomings. It would be best to be more specific so that I can understand more clearly. I will accept all suggestions with an open mind and will think about them carefully. Thank you for your help and advice🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

It is recommended that you point out the Golden Finger Hall in your dream at the beginning, and describe the specific situation in the first chapter. Readers have very little patience, so they must catch their attention and be interested in reading. There is no problem with the context of the writing, the focus is on attractiveness, come on

Well! Is this an outline article? Readable books generally have outstanding characters, exciting stories, novel settings, and are based on reality but transcend reality. But... The character of the protagonist is younger, decent and kind-hearted. To put it bluntly, he is a childish but good-natured person. This setting is not impossible, but it is suitable for daily flow in peaceful times. The background in the book is not peaceful. It is like a white lotus growing out of a muddy pond. It looks strange and abrupt no matter how you look at it. To borrow a sentence, "If you have a system and act like a bird, who is disgusting?" If you really want to portray the protagonist as righteous and kind, you should collect introductions to the camp. There are roughly three types of kindness. Lawful Good: Believe in strong rules and do good based on them. To put it bluntly, if you have no strength, you are a kind-hearted person who will harm others and yourself! Neutral Kindness: Do good within your own principles and respect the rules. To put it bluntly, I will help if I can without affecting my own interests. Chaotic Goodness: Doing good according to your own standards, regardless of the rules. Have your own standards and definitions for kindness. To put it bluntly, whether I save you or not, whether I kill you or not is all up to me. If you are a good person, you are a good person, and if you are not, you are a good person. Story? Forget it, maybe you will get different results by watching "Story Club" more. Of course, this is the opinion of a family who used to be a street writer. If it makes sense, we should learn from each other, and if it doesn't make sense, we should just ignore it!

Although I don't want to be so direct, to be honest, your book is really not good-looking. .

What's going on, eunuch?