Martial Arts, Novelist

This author may have been influenced by the current trend of novels, and relies on killing people to show his martial arts prowess. In fact, it is not necessary. You start with storytelling, which is closer to the reality of life. No matter how you write, it should be close to ancient times. If someone provokes you, you will kill him with your backhand. How much murderous intention do you have? It is not a dark trend.

The author wants to show off, but his writing style and common sense are insufficient, making it very embarrassing to read. If it weren't for the recent book shortage, the subject matter would be okay, but I would be too lazy to read it.

I believe this is not a studio article, because although studio articles are the same, at least they won't go off topic.

Hanging sheep's heads and selling dog meat. . . The copywriter copied the book well and pretended to be cool. What are the results written? . A mess.

The way the writing is written and the plot is too old-fashioned, Nowadays it is popular to kill people, mutilate their bodies and scatter their ashes. You are still following the routine of martial arts novels in the past. After killing the person, you don't care about anything and just leave. Then someone comes to your door or something. It's boring to watch. No one really cares about this nowadays.

After they are all on the shelves, I wrote a copy of Flying Fox, plus a copy of Flying Fox Gaiden. The rest are just water, all kinds of pretentiousness, all kinds of nonsense, there are systems that you can't use, and the chaos overwhelms the protagonist, right?

Is the background set at the end of the dynasty? Is this yamen useful? When did gangs become so arrogant? It's not like a collusion between officials and gangsters. The protagonist's personality is mysterious and strange. Why can't Yue Heifeng Gao handle it if he offends someone who has the ability? If the yamen is capable, which gang will dare to take the lead? The yamen is incapable of investigating a stupid case. The writing is all awkward, inexplicable, and completely different.

It turns out that some novels are not criticized by many people not because they are well written, but because no one reads them at all and only 🐶 is left.

After seeing the latest chapter, I just want to say that the protagonist will always take passive actions. He has offended a gang to death and does not take the initiative to take action. He will only take action after catching others.

The protagonist's IQ is worrying. The system distributes rewards based on the progress of the novel. The protagonist is stuck on his own progress, and the system distributes martial arts based on the promotion of the novel. The protagonist sets a high price for the book, and is also jealous of a bunch of martial arts people because he thinks he will die too slowly.

Since you want to write a storyteller, write it seriously. There is no point in trying to sell the meat of a sheep's head. The cliche plot of a third-rate villain does not represent the world. The world is life and a spiritual state. The protagonist has no ideas of his own and has no charm. The so-called knight lives a serious and straightforward life. A promise can come thousands of miles away. When encountering injustice, you will get angry and draw your sword to maintain peace. Instead of worrying about your own reputation and interests, thinking about making money every day, selling a few taels of books, and suffering a loss if you pay too much. If you are not happy today, you must find happiness from him. Villains can't be so brainless. The system just quickly brings readers into the world of the book. For example, if there are no martial arts in this world, then the hero story you tell is to give them faith and tell the world what a hero is.

A policeman was killed on someone else's property, and then a bunch of policemen and yamen tolerated it because the court had no energy to take care of it. How could the female supporting actor give an explanation? ? ? And then the policeman agreed? ? Why did you explain that I didn't see it, so what was written here? He slipped away, it's not like a fairy is worth suppressing a country with force. This country is in turmoil and has a relationship with the sect. Isn't this an excuse to destroy your sect and squeeze out these benefits? At the very least, it will cause a lot of blood. Inexplicably, because the investigation is not working, you will kill a policeman? There is so much energy and resentment behind the sect.

Going off the title, I'm here to watch your storytelling, not to watch the fight.

Author, you write the protagonist and tell the story. The protagonist told the story for an hour at the beginning? Then those people who listened to the book were still asking what happened to Hu Fei after Hu Yidao died? Are you sure you can't finish talking about the chores after the duel between Hu Yidao and Miao Renfeng in one hour? Every time I read a novel in which the main character is a storyteller, I feel that the author has lowered the reader's IQ. Either you tell a story at the beginning and tell others to go back and wait after telling it, or you are like the author who tells the protagonist how long he has been telling the story, and then the content of the story actually begins and ends. They are all hilarious. The main character tells the story at a speed of ten seconds per word?

The first one was a hit. A book that sold for 2 taels on the first day was priced at 50 taels the next day, a 40-fold price difference. In the end, only half of the book was sold. It was a blatant deception. Who bought this? Isn't it a pure bully behind? You are bullying people like this. In the ancient martial arts world, my God, are you invincible?

There are more and more chapters with too many words, and a few chapters on a clichéd topic like brewing are crammed into it. You don't want to make your main business bigger and stronger, but you are thinking about all kinds of messy things all day long, listening to books and having hot pot. Which marketing expert recommends you to do this?

After reading so many novels with storyteller protagonists, there are only a few that won't break down, sooner or later.

My feeling is that if the male protagonist actually dares to cut off chapters and sell half of his book for two taels of silver, then he is not afraid of being beaten to death? Book Fairy Tales

I only read a few dozen chapters of this novel. The protagonist has not adapted to the current society. He applies real social ideas and methods to a world where a person's status can be determined by force. He is looking for death. He is very proud of it!

The author completely plagiarized the starting reward of martial arts with full-level magical skills. I was also convinced. It's really awesome.

The year before last was relatively uneventful. It will look better after it is put on the shelves. It is converted from a pirated version to a genuine version. It is worth subscribing.

Shadiao. Just tell the story well. It's a bunch of bullshit You storyteller is nothing. I'll give you trouble no matter what.

If you are new to this book, don't read it. I was addicted after reading three chapters. A commercial novel sells for 2 taels of silver. Why is it that inflation in your world has reached such a level and people are still buying it? How come this country has developed to the level of per capita literacy? Not to mention the misuse of punctuation, it is incompatible with using modern thinking to write ancient novels, so you don't need to read it.

Is there no update today

The writing is too bad. You didn't copy the key points.

The introduction doesn't make sense, but it still asks readers to buy a tutorial book.

How is the realm of this book divided? Has anyone seen it?

Suddenly I realized that this book is similar to the escort book.

Good guy is abandoned 😅

What a shame, it's a really good idea. Storytelling, writing novels, if you can understand the exercises, others can too, but it ends up going off topic.