I Have a Crystal Wall Universe

After reading some, let me know what you think. 1. The plot is still too fast, it would be better to expand it from 1 chapter to 3 chapters. 2. The purification theory is inherently false. Since it is the creation of the world, there is no need to have that version, direct transformation or egg birth. With just one command, life was born and the theory of transformation was carried out. 3. Law, morality, and gold coins appear too abruptly. Just gold coins are enough, and a ruble is enough... 4. Talking nonsense? Let God say something about this first! Otherwise, what if others think it is tinnitus? He was still mumbling, and there was no suspense. 5. Come on and write.

How to say it? ! It's all narrative style and doesn't feel interesting.

It looks pretty good. Please support me.

I haven't watched it yet, can the protagonist activate the gods of all people, become the main god, and harvest the world?

It's best to separate the protagonists from Sanqing Nuwa, etc. I guess I've seen a lot of this. The protagonists are them and they are not the protagonists.

I beg you readers to pursue your investment career. Xiaosheng is here to beg you! ! !

This book is completely broken. I don't know how to write it. I'm wondering whether to cut it, but I promised the readers that I won't be a prisoner, so I'm very confused now. Plus, I'm very happy now. I wonder if I have any thinking ability. Readers, please give me some ideas!

I have decided to stop updating this book indefinitely until I hold a new book club.

Save it first for fear that the eunuch will save an extra piece to see

I'm going to raise a eunuch and see how it turns out.

I only watch the main character, not the split soul, which is very interesting.

It's very confusing, which character is the protagonist?