Entertainment: Starting with the Villain an Jiahe

Because of the book you wrote, I spent money to read a book for the first time in my life! Except for the slow updates! ! ! Nothing wrong with it! ! !

In what age are you playing a villain now, why the hell do you throw eggs and get insulted by the whole internet?

Watched from the beginning. Based on my reading experience over the years, I can tell the author about the big problems in your book. First of all. The golden finger is unclear. As a time traveler with a golden finger, you just mentioned it when entering the first chapter, and then interspersed some tasks that will wither if not completed in the following chapters. This has no effect on the plot. The explanation of the plot is unclear, and there is a suspicion of failure. Secondly, the intersection of time and space is very confusing, and it is very confusing to try out all kinds of roles. The biggest problem when a small actor tries out the role is whether he is worthy of it. The role is linked to the salary. When I auditioned for An Jiahe, why did I decide on the role and sign the contract on the spot after seeing his performance? Later, there were even those who came to line up for the audition and were immediately persuaded to leave. Brother, this is just like an interview. Whether you will be accepted or not is a matter after the interview. At least there will be a comparison with Feng. I decided to cast the role because my acting skills were better, rather than because we were sorry to cast the role. Although you came to the interview, I didn't watch it. It seems very common sense to write like this. In superficial work, human relations and status are very important. Third, the road to interpretation is too smooth. I understand what you want to express, but if you brush up skills from time to time and don't explain the origin of the skills, your subsequent writing will become weaker and weaker. Also, I read the comment section and some people thought that the character audition was too outrageous and the timeline was confusing. In many dramas, the father of the first party is from the Fortress. It doesn't mean that you can be the lead actor just because you have no connections. No capitalist thinks that I can ask for someone with explosive acting skills rather than someone who can bring money into the group. The small details need to be carefully considered slowly. The main purpose of the interesting article is to be enjoyable, but you still need to use your brain when reading. Fourth, the poisonous point of the heroine is the heroine. I understand that after watching Chen Gou, you feel that you can kill Chen Gou with a knife in your hand. However, it is not very likable if you write this character like this. This character alone represents your pure lust for your girlfriend. Simply imposing your preferences on the character will seem very abrupt. As a Chengdu girl who has never eaten hot pot, think about it for yourself. Do you think it is reasonable? Being poor, you have never attended a wedding banquet in the village since you were a child? The setting is so outrageous that it will make readers feel stupid. A girl with low self-esteem will not simply think that he is a good person when she is treated like this, but will feel uneasy and nervous. You will be shy and blush when in contact with boys, and even if you have a crush on them, they will timidly grab you by the hem of your clothes. The characters you wrote in many places gave me a sense of OOC. It's hard to accept the cuteness you want to express. In the vernacular, it's "a waste of such a good character." Fifth, your timeline is really messy. I understand that different time and space timelines are different, but your concept of money is too strange. Prices are high and low, which makes it difficult for me to understand. The remuneration given to you for your first so-called task made me think that it is a low-price world. You backhandedly told me that you only need 6,000 or 7,000 to buy a good mobile phone. How do you achieve this concept of money? Your literary skills have been exhausted. You can re-plan, write an outline, and smooth out the ideas and characters. Don't be too generous with your golden fingers. You don't need to say a lot of cool stuff yourself. You have to learn to take a step forward from seeing mountains as mountains and seeing water as water, to seeing mountains as not mountains and seeing water as not water. Moreover, to improve your own cultural accomplishment, many of the words you write are actually derogatory or neutral words, and it will look strange if you use them as complimentary words. After saying so much, you may not read it carefully, but I still hope that the more I write, the better.

There is no logic in the introduction. After playing Liu Huaqiang, will he play Sun Xing? Go to the God of Medicine to play a role? The protagonist's position is too confusing

Writing an emotional scene is like a local boss caring for a female college student.

Appraisal completed. This book is rubbish.

Find a factory to drive screws. If an actor is not good at acting and can perform a specific image, how dare he settle down in the beginning? It is a fact that An Jiahe requires acting skills, but image is more important. If you let various movie stars play it, it will never be Feng Yuanzheng's An Jiahe

After reading a few chapters, I have a few questions. How did you, an orphan, get into a film and television school? It's very expensive. You have to say that you can pass the exams at Peking University and Tsinghua University. Also, in the entertainment industry, do you think acting is more important or background and connections are more important? Even if you have god-level acting skills, there are many good ones in the entertainment industry, right?

With no capital and no backstage, which director would want a protagonist who is busy picking up girls and only takes half a day to film?

Come on, author, this book is pretty good except for the lack of content. More items are on the shelves today

The movies shot by Pig's Feet are all released in about a month, which is amazing.

Are you serious about that heroine? Isn't this just picking up a high-tech doll on the street?

Alas, I gave up starting from describing the heroine. The front is pretty good.

Come, author, kneel down and sing conquest. Isn't Jiang Shan famous? Understand the past addiction, dream about the water town, the past addiction is sung across the country, she is called a goddess by Gao Xiaosong, the memory of a generation. I can only see him during filming and live my own life.

Apart from the update, there's nothing wrong with it.

Nowadays, those who write about system control of the protagonist lose points.

Are you writing books for fun or to make money? You can't forcefully feed people who read books with drugs. You have really written about the poisonous points of the city.

Sometimes culture is regional. For example, the Yangtze River where the movie "Little Steel Pao" was made is not adapted to the climate. The cross talk duo is not very feasible in Jiangnan. I remember one time I wanted to make a joke, but my friend from the south asked seriously: How could this happen? But Wang Zhiwen and Jiang Shan. It's really the memory of a generation, the golden child.

Going around the university to find a girlfriend is really toxic, I can't stand it

You are really the first protagonist I have ever seen who went to college just to find a girlfriend. . . This is the first time I've seen such a hilarious plot. .

The time and background are messy, and we have entered the traffic era. How can we still get beaten up for playing a villain who looks too similar?

Liu Shui Wen, you can guess the meaning of the text after reading a little bit, it is a waste of money, abandon the book

Outrageous. Did the author have nothing to write?

The plot and supporting characters of this novel are all mentally retarded. Forget about An Jia and the aunt over there, the Weibo blogger is deliberately being evil and earning traffic without calling the police and suing for compensation. Are the people in the agency so mentally retarded? Or are these just the protagonist's relatively retarded and childish thoughts?

Out of nowhere, he rides a bicycle and goes to the university to find a girl. It's so poisonous.

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It is good to write entertainment articles with a single female protagonist, very positive energy

No one has posted a book review, so I will post one

Mandatory mission, very disgusting. . Reality is very tiring. Reading a novel doesn't want to be so tiring.

I am so blown away by this book that I spent 10 yuan to read it.