Douluo: Accept Tang San as a Disciple, and Get Back Ten Thousand Times as Much as You Teach Him

The gap is too big

Tang San: You only taught me the complete knowledge of soul beasts and you still have a divine dragon. You already have a way to kill yourself.

Read Chapter 60 and comment. The author is good at expressing friendship through seemingly ordinary dialogues. In terms of character creation, he has successfully reversed the wrong values ​​​​of everyone in Shrek. The disadvantage is that the characters are not outstanding enough and occasionally feel the same. It's a bit awkward to use evil soul masters as villains. After all, the security of the Wuhun Palace in Dou Yizhong is quite good, and evil soul masters are only a handful. In terms of content, we could actually write more about the changes in Shrek's mentality under the influence of the protagonist (but maybe no one would want to read it). Judging from the author's writing style and character image, the author is good at portraying vicissitudes of life and indifferent characters, which is not advisable for young people such as Dai Mubai. We can focus on judging the image characteristics of Dai Mubai and others before creating. In addition, dialogue has both advantages and disadvantages. Unnecessary dialogue is equivalent to watering down and can be reduced as appropriate.

Suddenly I thought of writing a book about time travel as Tang San, and then killing the time travelers in various ways 🙂🙂 To be honest, the disgustingness of various time travelers in current fan fiction is much more disgusting than Dou Yi's Tang San, although not as good as Dou Er and Dou San.

There are no useless souls, only useless soul masters? As long as there is a martial soul, it will always be useful, but what is the use without soul power? After all, he will not reach the level of a soul master in his life, so a waste soul is a waste soul. Don't talk about how to increase soul power. An ordinary person with 0 innate soul power is not the protagonist. He has no system and no fairy grass. He is just an ordinary person. Reality is reality. Innate soul power represents talent. No matter how good the quality of a martial soul is, if it cannot be cultivated, it is still a waste.

In Tang San's previous life, everything he did in the Tang Sect was based on Xuantian Baolu. Are you sure you can make Tang San change?

Even if there is a system, if you take Tang San as a disciple, you will earn nothing, and you will return it ten thousand times.

They've all traveled through time! The receipt dog is better than Tang San!

After reading the author's explanation of why he chose the mandala snake as in the original work, it makes sense. But it gave me an even more unbelievable poison. After Tang San was taught by the protagonist, he received the same impact from the competition as in the original work. The protagonist became lonely after being taught. Compared with the original version, the strength has not changed.

Let me go, this author is so handsome, he should be awakened by his handsomeness every day! The monthly vote has been cast!

There is no book club for such a good book. I suspect that the author is afraid of being criticized by Douluo fans😓😥, although there is no evidence.

The so-called return of ten thousand times is more like a cover. Six years have passed and only a few useful items have been returned?

Wow, look what I found. The protagonist of this fanfic is actually Yu Xiaogang. This is rare in Douluo fanfics. Well, I have basically never seen it until now. In the current Douluo fandom, I think the authors who can write fanfics about the protagonist group are very brave. But now there are authors who even go so far as to write a Douluo fanfic where the protagonist is Yu Xiaogang? All I can say is: Author, you have to work hard! 🤭🤭🤭

Douluo is known as a fantasy sewer combat power, and Tang San is not likeable, so why bother wasting brain cells by writing about Douluo?

I really can't stand your original plot. Ever since I returned to the family to investigate the true identity, I have not been interested in your original plot at all.

The writing is passable, I can't say it's right in terms of three views, I can only say it's in my opinion, give it a thumbs up

So the protagonist's name when arriving is Chen Luo or Yu Xiaogang... Can't they be unified?

Hurry up, follow 20 chapters a day if you don't want to die, then follow to death

Just write according to your own ideas. Don't make too many changes because of the opinions of some book friends. That will only make the rhythm more chaotic. I also ordered them all, come on💪

Just add some finesse😁

Why not update it? Isn't it just a little bit off? 🤐

Looking forward to updates