Weird Martial Arts: I Have a Proficiency Panel

The protagonist is too smart to watch anymore. Why should the method of making braised meat be compiled into a book? And in this era of extraordinary abilities, there will be a lot of information later on whether you are really stupid or pretending to be stupid. Do you really think that you can be saved by not fighting each other? Why don't you just give it to others to see? If such a person can live for three days, he is considered lucky, and it is still a feudal society in ancient times. Xiao Baiwen will at least do it by himself, sell it first, achieve results, and then find a backer. In this way, he still has the capital to practice martial arts and the right to speak in negotiations.

The protagonist dies in Chapter 18, the book is over, and his IQ is worrying

The protagonist is surrounded by experts, the protagonist is very proficient, and the protagonist upgrades too slowly, which makes me feel completely uninterested. After watching it for about 20 minutes, I lost interest.

How profitable is braised food? How profitable is wine? These two things can support the military expenditure of a dynasty. Just like horseshoes, they look like a small iron ring, but they can save the army 80% of horse losses. If you dare to take out these things, why don't you go to heaven? I can't bear it anymore. Anyway, the things the protagonist has taken out in more than ten chapters can feed a dynasty, and the profits can crush Shen Wansan Braised pork means that the refugees can afford meat, and the profits of wine need not be understood. There is also gunpowder. If you don't have your own power, don't touch it. It's really a suicide.

It is recommended that the author write another plot, find out the feeling, and study the writing style. When I write to change the map, I will cut it directly. After cutting it, I will open a new book to take over the plot of this book, because this book is useless and there is no need to persist (if you want to exercise your writing skills, pretend I didn't tell you). The subject matter is great, but if you don't have enough control over it, you won't be able to write the effect you want.

It's so cliche, it's like copying someone else's. You can have the same creative ideas, but can you not have the same routine? You start with a sister, and then joins the martial arts gym at the beginning, your grandma's joke

Wandering around with a gold finger, even if you go to the inner courtyard, you will have a backer, but you have to do something in the early stage. If you have brown sugar, you don't need it. You have to make your own white sugar, and you also look for spices everywhere to make braised food. Even if you dedicate the prescription to the martial arts gym, it would be better than doing this. That sister is also a tool, and the author doesn't care about logic when promoting the plot.

Seeing the weirdness, I thought it was a horror tendency 😅. The rubbish made me read two chapters in vain 😆

I can see that the author is obviously very ambitious but can't control it! No wonder!

Chapter 52 is a hand-fired close-range anti-cannon, Chapter 68 is an artillery shell assembly line, and Chapter 81 is a hand-fired missile. It's a very interesting novel, but you can't go too far like the people in the comment area. The jelly grass is not satisfied with the top-level food and grass. Strange ideas will increase the points in it.

First is the outline. You were so wasteful in the early stage and your proficiency level is inexplicably long. How can these miscellaneous skills be improved so quickly in 3 months? You might as well call it an epiphany. You don't need a proficiency panel. It feels very awkward when you write it this way. The pace is very fast and there is no foreshadowing of the supporting characters. You just talk about the protagonist's sister. You write that she didn't do anything wrong. But you didn't tell us what kind of person she is. You only wrote that she did this thing. People are emotional and everyone has different ideas. If you haven't explained it clearly, it's definitely toxic. I hope that the supporting characters can be written more fully. If you don't want supporting characters, you have to do supporting roles. This is what people think about. Proficiency is a growth process. If you write it from beginning to end without a process, I think it is too fast. To summarize, the supporting roles need to be full of plot, and the characterization is too one-sided. Goldfinger has a beginning but no process, which is not proficiency but enlightenment. Also, if you write so quickly in the past, the story in the later part will be similar to other novels. Change the map to slap the villain in the face. Change the map to slap the villain in the face. ,,,,,

There are not many people watching it, and you are very slow to show off. Unless the author is not short of money, you will definitely be a eunuch.

So far, the alchemist style written by the author is very good. But there are several problems. 1: The growth path of magic is too fixed, which means that in the future, alchemists can only join big forces (sects or aristocratic families, etc.). It would be good for casual alchemists to have big skills. (Many of them are probably small skills, unless everyone is willing to refer to them together and know the specific route in the later period.) The protagonist has been unable to survive as a casual practitioner. 2: How to get together the basic path of magic and the protagonist. (Everyone is hiding it. The basic skills are all lacking. The Bai family is doing well, but there are no rejuvenation skills. The lack of basic skills shows that the growth potential of this small world is not high.) It is a bit silly to write the master as very powerful. The highest magical skill at present. It is not the ultimate of a certain skill ability, but the omnipotence of a certain spell path. If the fairy eye is the end of the eye series, will the fairy eye be defenseless? No physical attack? No control? It is recommended to open up the transformation space of magic. The author's previous method can be regarded as a mature magic method. In this way, the protagonist can still play by himself by using his brain. For example, Leman's Asura system. Leman's physical fitness + strength + arms = Shura, later evolved into the Fudo Myooh system. Can have arms + eyes + speed = six-armed Asura, and later evolve into the Thousand-Armed, Thousand-Eyed Avalokitesvara system. Beauty + blood manipulation + sword skills = Blood Sea Shura, later evolving the Styx system. By analogy, the protagonist creates his own system.

Basically it's okay, but after I saw 50 pictures, I felt like I wanted to keep reading, and I didn't feel like reading anymore.

The plot of selling to an escort business is terrible

The protagonist's chopping can form skills, and the protagonist's throwing of rocks can form the fourth level of skill throwing and extraordinary special effects. With practice, you can succeed without a specific prospect line. Has the author ever thought about the protagonist bragging? Bragging: Level 4 10000/10000 Special effects: Fraud: The other party must believe the lie. Bragging: Level 9 10000/10000 Special effects: Telling the truth: Once the user brags, it will definitely come true. Protagonist: I am the Supreme God. Take off directly. Believe me, bragging a thousand times a day will take off in ninety days. Why bother looking for people to learn skills everywhere.

Haha😃, we have developed close-range defense cannons 😏

The author has ideas and opinions, but I feel that there is no outline and the system is quite confusing. The most important thing is that you have no skills in making gunpowder.

How many books did this draw from? ? The settings at the beginning look really familiar. I read Chapter 60 or 70, saying that martial arts is not martial arts, Taoism is not Taoism...

After the main line was laid out, I felt that the author couldn't grasp it.

61 Book friends? 150 Chapters. . . I just found this book, give it a look

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Come on, I can really stick to what I wrote.

The writing spans seven or eight slots, and there is absolutely no logic at all.

After a hiatus of almost half a year, I returned at noon. Come on, I hope you write better and better.