Hanging up Starts from Shooting Condor

You treat the adult Li Mochou as your daughter, and you still hold her up high. I'm convinced. It's too poisonous.

The protagonist would be a cripple if he didn't have a system. When practicing internal strength, he doesn't believe in the existence of internal strength at all, so he can't practice his Qi at all. If you practice external martial arts and your hands and feet are not coordinated, you will not be famous.

I reluctantly read more than thirty chapters and finished the first one! In the first ten chapters, the protagonist is clueless and invincible, and then in the next twenty chapters, he writes Legend of the Condor Heroes! Guo Jing became the protagonist! ! ! He married a beautiful daughter-in-law and practiced good kung fu, but there was a bigger backstage than in the story! ! ! Who is the protagonist? A supporting character writes dozens of chapters, and the protagonist serves as a backdrop. Who will read it? ? I also saw a comment in the work and rest chapter that the protagonist is invincible and affects others, and then others do things and then affect the protagonist through various things! How has the protagonist changed since the end of The Condor Shooting? Temujin is still going to invade the Southern Song Dynasty, Guo Jing is still a great hero, and the protagonist should be hidden or hidden! ! ! Not to mention accepting Mochou as his daughter, I asked the protagonist what changes have been made in this martial arts teaching in the Condor Shooting School and that martial arts teaching? The plot of The Condor Shooting is replayed intact! Who is still in the mood to watch the changes in The Legend of the Condor Heroes! ! ! At the end of The Condor Shooting, I almost wanted to abandon the book. Who does the author plan to show to the story about the changes in the protagonist of The Condor? If the author wrote it for fun and to entertain himself, then just pretend that I didn't say it. Otherwise, with this way of writing, do you have an order of five hundred for the author? If the beginning is not written well, who wants to read the follow-up? It doesn't matter if you skip a chapter or two and you can watch it. This method is to jump directly to the rhythm of the paid chapters!

I just read two books, and I subscribed to one specifically to make a statement. Anyone who can read more than two books of this book is a god, immune to all poisons! The protagonist is a piece of trash, but the author is still adamant that the protagonist is an ordinary person. Which ordinary person is a piece of trash? Alas! If you keep reading, can you leave me a name so that I can get to know all the great immortals? How do you keep reading this poisonous thing? T_T

The author is awesome, I just deleted the comment. I am so angry.

What are you writing about? A running account. I won't even mention the nickname, it's a lot of nonsense. Gone.

The protagonist always has to change something, right? I participated in most of the events, but the plot remained basically unchanged. What about the role of the protagonist? It's a real salted fish, just lying there peacefully as a background. It's better than participating in everything, only to have the plot remain unchanged.

The world is rejecting you, why can't you kill Ouyang Feng? I feel that the plot will be no different from the original work at this point.

Xianwu Three Kingdoms made me give up immediately! ! !

The author's writing is good, please keep it up. It doesn't matter if the readers are disgusted by it, as long as the author feels comfortable writing it.

Whatever you're writing about, you'd better read more books before writing!

Fortunately, the role of the protagonist is close to none. It is almost the same with or without him. It almost follows the plot of the original work. It should be because the author does not know how to write original works.

Scumbag cleaning the floor? Lu Zhanyuan was obviously unlucky, but he got over it easily. Are you "Mingcheng"? It's obviously a cartilage dog.

Ordinary people don't get married and have children? Since you set it as an ordinary person, then you wrote about what ordinary people will do when they have power, just like what happens when people have money! ! Ordinary people shouldn't write about people who are so high-level and take wives when they should. The epidemic is so serious and people don't get married and have children. These are ordinary people.

Three Golden Chapters. You were poisonous in the second chapter. It was too much. I couldn't bear it. The plot about my daughter later became even more poisonous and I couldn't bear it.

It's true that when you travel across a world, you become a different person.

Plug-ins are the most important core of a good article. You can skip this core chapter if you don't like it. I can't understand it. If the most important plug-ins are not confident, then why write a hammer?

When I saw the name, I thought it was a cool article. After watching a few of them, I realized that the main character is an idiot. If you don't care about the Nine Yin Scriptures, you should care about the Quanzhen garbage mentality. Don't say that you can't find the Nine Yin Manual, everyone on the earth plane knows it, it's found behind the ancient tomb. The Nine Yin Manual is a collection of the Imperial Taoist Canon. It is better than Quan Zhen Kung Fu. If you don't marry a woman, don't have any emotional drama. It feels so awkward.

The timeline is wrong at first. After Wang Chongyang died, the old naughty boy brought Jiuyin to meet Huang Yaoshi. Huang Rong was born roughly three months later, her mother died, and then she planned to take Qu Lingfeng's leg, and then counted Qu Lingfeng's appearance in Niujia Village in March. At that time, Guo Jing and Yang Kang were not yet born. In the original work, Yi Zhiping was called Senior Brother Yang Kang, so Yi Zhiping should not have started a career one or two years after Wang Chongyang's death. Yi Zhiping, Guo Jing and Yang Kang should be about the same age, even if they are older, they are only one or two years old. Think about the swordsmanship between the protagonist and Yi Zhiping, who was still an infant. . . . , Besides, Li Mochou should not be much younger than Guo Jing.

The person who wrote about The Condor has not watched all the TV series about The Condor. Wang Chongyang faked his death without telling anyone. You don't know this?

I am cultivating immortality in my family. You are welcome to come and see me! There are tens of thousands of outlines, the settings are complete, and now 6,000 words are updated every day! Welcome to come and see!

This part of Journey to the West is boring. Too many things have been added, the transitions are unnatural, and it's boring.

Why can't I watch it anymore the further back I go!

Is it okay to suddenly raise the combat power to the saint level and the immortal level in heaven? ? ?

Are there any books of this type? Skills are infinitely upgraded and optimized, but the essence of the skills remains unchanged