Konoha: This Debt King Can Upgrade the Ninja Card

Does the author know what the three golden chapters mean? At first glance, the title and introduction of the book deceived me into thinking that it should be an incomparable and refreshing book. As a result, this filthy bullshit life choice ruined the first few chapters, Big Brother's golden three chapters! People are almost burping and still pestering Banye. Just click on a wave of Banye experience cards to save their lives. Then it doesn't matter whether they want to beat Hanzo or leave more golden fingers for pigs' feet. What readers want to see is that you write a book, not that you introduce fancy settings.

The messy setting plot is confusing to watch.

There is something in this introduction. Please update it quickly.

Hey, the black tiger took out his heart

I can't understand it, I really can't understand it. The setting makes me feel dizzy, but in fact it's twenty chapters and the protagonist hasn't grown at all...

Personally, I think the theme is quite interesting, but it's too confusing to understand.

Is it the Ancestor Mask Konoha version?

... Sorry, I don't know why, I can't upload it successfully... You can search on Baidu.

I am very happy after reading it. The author Ji is also working hard and has been replying to the interactions. Alas, but I feel that there are fewer people reading fan fiction. The mainstream of online literature is still fantasy novels with more novels. Ji Ya, the author of Power Generation with Love 😳

Are you the descendant of Kaiba and Yugi?

And how can I put it, the author has something wrong with his writing, which is true, but not completely true, because from a real point of view, the Uchiha class doesn't look down on the protagonist at all. The protagonist has to directly say what he wants to do, and he will agree with you, and these wants are best for peace, but the author, well... He really wrote Uchiha Madara, but Uchiha Madara's reaction is very unreal, in short, he is a half-hearted person.

The beginning was well written, but the card suddenly took on its own character. Damn it, it's extremely poisonous. I can't hold it any longer. Which Shen Nong will come next?

In my opinion, cards are just cards, just tools. It depends on the mood of the card. Who says the master?

It would be nice to write it as an invincible novel, but it's a pity

Is it true that just like Ultraman, if you don't borrow power, you are a genin, and if you borrow power, you have combat effectiveness? Aren't you afraid that CD will be killed?

I suggest the author sort out the plot... And then restart it

This book will not be on the shelves. Please stop scolding me.

It's interesting, but it's a bit confusing.

It's hard to watch at first, the plug-ins are awesome, but what's the result? ? Ultraman?

Geely

Author, you don't need to care about other people's opinions. Just create well

I laughed so hard when I read the introduction, hahahahahahahahahahahaha

The protagonist is like that in "Daydream". In the span of one sentence, he wanders off seven or eight times, and the author describes it in detail. In addition, the setting is time-stopped, the plot is over, and the plot is recalled, and the little coherence is simply shredded.

I've also thought about this idea, but I didn't expect someone to actually write it. No matter what your level is, you still have to read it.

Nice idea, let's see how it goes

It's been two months, I don't know how the author's new book is doing

Suddenly on a whim I came back to take a look, and sure enough the author didn't move.

Change it, the author won't be able to continue writing unless he changes it.

Changing the plot randomly. The key is that if the plot is good, it would be okay, but you are too messy. And he suddenly revealed that there is another time and space. What do you think will happen based on Naruto's talk of constant war and the greed of Konoha's Sandaime and Danzo? And Uzumaki and those two are completely useless. At this stage of the plot, it can only be troublesome. It is impossible for normal people to materialize. Obtaining Madara in the early stage and walking around to collect, draw and conquer the card flow is okay. Who knew that a combination of punches would come after you. Alas, you have basically encountered all the pitfalls you can step on. Also, it is impossible for two Sannins of Konoha to take on a disciple at the same time. The style of painting is wrong. This is not some martial arts bone surprise. Besides, it's impossible with Orochimaru's character. Politically speaking, even the third generation would not agree. Tsunade is the granddaughter of the first generation, and Orochimaru is the third generation apprentice. This means that the position of the next Hokage is not so easy to control. The plot is unreasonable. The key is that the characters' personalities have also changed, and the readers have no sense of involvement.

It has been three months and the author has not said a word. Where is the new book that he promised? I am a new author, barely finishing a book, and I am not a big-name author. All the fans and readers I have accumulated over such a long period of time are leaving. Even if I change my account, I have to come to the comment section of the old book to comment.