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I originally wanted to read what Chapter 10 was about.
Thank you readers for your great support
Thank you to several readers for their recommendation votes. Because I have never been reviewed before, I haven't written much. I have run out of manuscripts [crying]... I am also busy with exams recently... So updates may be slow... But Xiaohu will work hard to type! Readers will not be disappointed
The writing is quite good, and the father's subplot is very immersive. It's a pity that the heroine of Chapter 10 was hastily included by the author. If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, you can take your time. There is no need to introduce the heroine right away. It would be better to lay a foreshadowing for the heroine. Boil the frog in warm water, let readers slowly get on with it, and then consider how to introduce the heroine