The Anchor of the Fourth Disaster Is Not a Human Being Today Either

It feels like a very flawed novel. First of all, it is a different world game, but the protagonist's ability is similar to tampering with the written history of the different world. Butterflies don't dare to flap their wings casually, but the author does. He wants to arrange the past, present and future as well as the tampered past, present and future. This is a rebuttal. If I go back in time and kill myself, will I still die? If I change history, will history still change? I think this skill is not really about tampering with history, but about creating a historical line and letting it exist in the form of book pages, which does not really affect reality or has a small impact. Furthermore, the use of this skill is a bit like a text adventure game. The plot is very pleasant, but there is no sense of empathy. Like the goblin who said that ten years of chatting will be ten years. The protagonist has already developed a relationship, and the reader does not have such rich imagination to fill in the blank details of ten years. Actually, I personally don't like this kind of text-adventure type thing. I wear colored glasses. The dry words are all necessary plot outlines. The story that I read in a hurry can be said to be completely different from the author's inner story. Large descriptions without details will cause the reader's emotional foundation to be insufficient. If you really write about ten years of experience, I will also treat the goblin as a brother. The above is my personal opinion, I don't like to comment casually

From the moment when some noble begins to attack the city, the writing is very speechless. Dozens of chapters are devoted to catching the "rats" in the city. Over and over again, he emphasizes the importance of the NPC who makes a wish, and writes a lot of repetitive content.

The plot setting is very interesting but the writing especially the fighting, emotions, and transitions have a strong sense of fragmentation I have read Chapter 84 so far, but I just feel that I clicked on the protagonist's world view, and suddenly introduced the "god" with higher theoretical combat power So, I am worried about the possible follow-up 1. The collapse of combat power 2. Reality, games, and plug-in historical scandals, these three link narratives may have some poisonous points. , After all, from what I have seen so far, the plug-in is used once, and then the second time is started after the purification of [Immortality] is completed (this may cause the elves to start to have souls and connect to the understanding of the world by Orange Tianyun and others, but this transition is too fast, and the pace is too fast in my opinion), and the realistic length is too small (based on the progress I have seen). A high school student and a big anchor come out to share a house because a game has a good future. This reason is quite far-fetched. Reality, oranges, games, Lobe, fraud, and the follow-up emotional line is a bit worrying 3. Currently, it is known that the internal beta is 45, and the public beta is 150. The actual difference is different. However, at present, it is likely that the description of classic scenes such as union wars in traditional online games will not be carried out. At the same time, there is an 8-year time limit. There will be no tool for adding chapters through live barrages in the future (live broadcasts have been running after the public beta, and the schedule is all in the eyes of the public. Personally, I feel It is already considered a poisonous point, after all, there is no need for income), which may lead to the conclusion of a very fast big event The above is a personal guess, don't criticize if you don't like it In addition, the map has not been completed yet. In terms of the world view that has been shown, it is only a very small part I feel that if the author can polish the emotional scenes and fighting scenes, the book can be written to 1500-2500 chapters (otherwise, it will feel like it will be a pity for such a large world view)

I have a question. Ian killed people in White Rock City. After all, the mage of White Rock City is the one who manages the city. He didn't do any observation (similar to a camera). Why didn't he know at all?

For tampering with history, we can learn from FGO's Lostbelt. The tampered history can be separated separately

Although I don't know if there is one, but don't engage in female protagonists? If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, it's very toxic.

There are so many typos, and there are comments to correct them. Wouldn't the author correct them?

Have you been here lately, getting stronger, getting stronger? Protagonist, this lord is like a drag, but he has to do it for the almighty feature, but the golden finger and future advantages are not reflected. Where is the protagonist's history? It seems that only 20 chapters are not enough. Let's wait until the next review copy to read ~ distress

It's okay, but the content is a bit sparse, and book page skills shouldn't be so cheap. Goblins can even occupy one page.

This is a girl named Tangerine in her school days

What did you do? It's just creating tens of thousands of processes that are different from history Is it worth it? AlmightyFor that goblin? Your abilities shouldn't stop here, you should gain more. What I care about is exactly what I care about. This is exactly why you cooperate with me, isn't it? The price of reversing time is not something you cannot bear, but if you want to tamper with your destiny... Even you can only exchange it. The only thing of equal value to life is life. Don't worry about it my friend, this is the stranger's path to the fool named Merlin. I just saw not much, brothers just be happy

I stopped in the wind and rain, looking forward to an answer~

This work needs to match the reader's attributes to make it look good. If the reader attribute is wrong, it is very general. My attributes match up, and I feel it's okay.

That's not right! This update amount is wrong!

Can't the protagonist kill people to make book pages? He can mark characters who are very strong in the future but not so strong now and kill them to make book pages. This will strengthen himself and weaken the enemy.

I want to ask, will this book have a female protagonist?

Keep an eye out and read it again after 500,000 words.

The writing is interesting, but the boss fight is too long. After 12 chapters, it almost ends in a deus ex machina method. The writing of the fight is not very good either.

It's very good. I don't see any shortcomings so far, but there are some signs. I feel that it will be difficult to write in the future. The protagonist is too strong. I can accept it now, but the problem will soon become bigger and bigger. The problem is not big at first, but with the live broadcast, it may become more and more inconsistent. I hope it won't be too high and low.