Start with Pure Yang Kung and Add Some Points

I read the first chapter and the writing was good. I hope there won't be those low-priced pretentious and slap-in-the-face scenes, and don't let the protagonist have a sarcastic face throughout the book. I'll reward you with 500 coins first.

After reading Chapter 120, I came to the second map. Every time a few enemies jumped out on the roadside, I started to write a lot of nonsense that has no nutrition and is completely unnecessary to write two pages of nonsense. Just keep creating conflicts like this, right? Every enemy is arrogant and looks like he wants to provoke the whole world. The protagonist has been resigned to everything, without any counterattack or power. I thought I was reading a novel written by Tudou.

Your initial identity is set to be a police officer learning martial arts, but you are looking for a boxing gym outside. What a shameful operation.

The first part is okay, but the second part is a mess. I feel like the protagonist is mindless and reckless, killing almost everyone he sees. The supporting characters are also mindless and offend the protagonist. They shout and kill at every turn. I really think that the rich and nobles are all idiots.

I just said that Kone is one of the best experts, and then dozens of them came out😓

I've seen many new authors get worse and worse as they write. My dear, you're getting better and better as you write, and you're getting better and better! I enjoyed watching it, but the free period may be a bit limiting for readers. Anyway, I support it.

A landowner's family has so much money without any force. This is a world of extraordinary fantasy. Shouldn't it be true that the more powerful the force, the more money it will have? ? The landlord's family has no force at all. He also emphasized that the government did not have such great jurisdiction over local areas.

It's well written for a newcomer. But there are still those common problems, pretending too much, pretending too much, pretending too embarrassingly. Also, the introductions are a bit slow and repetitive. For more than a hundred chapters, it's basically like an enemy pops out and fights, and an enemy pops out and fights. Of course, it can be seen that it is gradually improving, and there will be almost no major bugs in the future.

Will the world be full of people in the future, and the real energy is not as good as a dog?🙂

The IQ of passers-by is too low. The big forces will definitely investigate how long the protagonist has been practicing, and either make friends with him, or use absolute power to eradicate the roots. Then the protagonist will die and the whole book will be over.

It feels like a reckless man went all the way. If it weren't for the system, I don't know how many times he would have died.

He became a disciple of a Taoist priest, gave him money, and then disappeared? Don't you want to learn the exercises?

I thought I was going to pursue an official career, but in the blink of an eye I ended up in the underworld 🤫

I have always felt that there is a two-way choice between the author and the readers. Readers read books just to feel comfortable. If readers are not satisfied with this book, I would like to apologize to you. If you have any ideas, please feel free to speak here. If you have any ideas, You can post the plots you have watched, interesting suggestions, complaints, etc. Here. Xiaohei is confident that he will get better and better as he writes. If readers think it is okay, don't forget to point your own little hand in making a fortune and add it to your collection. Being able to see it here is considered a fate. Thank you for watching!

The more I read, the better it becomes. It's really good among new authors.

The part about escaping to the mine slaves was too toxic.

It's over and I've raised it to death. I've seen more than 90 chapters that I haven't read yet and I don't want to read them anymore.

In Chapter 126, the attribute points are 107. After upgrading Palm Thunder and Thunder Sound to Dacheng, there are still 66 points left. It needs to be completed by 30 points. At the end of the chapter, it says that there are 6 attribute points left, which proves that it has been perfected. When Chapter 143 unlocks Thunder, it becomes Dacheng again. Author, would you like to check it out?

The book review is here. There is not enough conflict in the early stage, and the writing style is not enough. If you add some flow, it will be more enjoyable in the early stage. You can fill it up directly in the novice village. However, the plot has no tension and the setting of the head catcher is wasted. My personal suggestion should be that one of the grandfather or grandmother gets lost, and then the county magistrate should withhold the reward. The patrol captain who values him the most is forced to death by the county magistrate, and then he marries the girl on his fingertips. It should be about having true love, and then not being able to love it. This accounts for most of the suffering in life, such as not being able to love your girlfriend, a good colleague dying tragically, immediate family members such as grandpa or grandma disappearing, the county magistrate deducting rewards and colluding with monsters, and then adding a certain weapon skill, then starting to add unlimited points, and then going out to kill decisively. With a little writing, it should look much better than it is now.

This book is well written, but the title is really unpleasant, and I thought it was another scumbag book.

I just want to say that this novel becomes a different novel after entering the Xuanwu Sect. For the price of one book, reading two novels 🤔 should be considered a profit It feels like escaping to the endless sea is the end. Then the character wrote the second book. (Fantasy Gaowu) - (Fantasy Immortal) Why is it not talking about cultivating immortality? It's because the battle scenes use the term "high martial arts plus cultivating immortality", but from the beginning to the end it's all about cultivating immortality 😅

There are just a lot of typos and grammatical errors. I was really engrossed in watching it, but suddenly a typo made me feel it.

I feel like the difference between the post-production and the introduction is a bit outrageous.

Everything is good, but one chapter a day is not enough. In the past, the minimum was 2 chapters. Since when did the two chapters break out?😥

Not bad, not bad. I almost backed down at the front, but the more I watched later, the more I enjoyed it! Speed ​​updates!

The protagonist can get a two-meter-long two-handed sword or Dapu sword, of course not a long-handled one.

The author has a lot of typos. It would be better to review the manuscript before sending it out. There are many sentences that are not fluent, which affects reading very much.

The writing is interesting and feels like a human emperor.

Maybe it's because I have an inherent impression from reading fantasy novels about cultivation in the past. Maybe it's a bit wrong, or maybe I thought a little bit wrong. How low is the cultivation level of a monster that can be killed by people? And how long has the male protagonist been practicing? Are the level of transformed monsters in this world so low? Also, don't make up the cultivation system at the end, just go to the end with the martial arts system. Many novels now focus on martial arts first, and then directly switch to the cultivation system. When it comes to the martial arts system, whether it is Fengyun, Demon Sword, Life and Death Chess, or Water Moon Cave, etc., They are all based on martial arts.

I just read Chapter 90 and it's pretty good so far.