I Will Practice More in Swallowing Starry Sky

Don't mention the difference between novels and anime. Sometimes it's very dramatic. Also, currency and country names should be changed as little as possible. You can write more about interactions. Your relationship with Goldfinger and Luo Feng can be said to be friends now. Try to write as if you are a friend. Otherwise, there will always be people who think it is too rhythmic and will affect your grades.

There are always people who want the protagonist's life, but the protagonist knows nothing about it. Isn't this disgusting for readers?

In two lifetimes combined, I am over forty years old. Can you please stop licking like this?

Books written by children, old bookworms should not read them

The writing is good, but can the protagonist always say that it is only a matter of time before his parents are resurrected by hugging Luo Feng's lap? First of all, reversing time and space and resurrecting requires that the other person still has a lifespan. Otherwise, if he is pulled out of time and space and his lifespan is exhausted, is this considered resurrection? By the time Luo Feng can reverse time and space, your parents will have died of old age tens of thousands of times. How can you resurrect them?

Can the author occasionally make double updates?😁

This is also very healthy. . . . .