Xianwu Tang Dynasty, Starting from Scattering Beans and Forming Soldiers

Chapter 14, is it too fragmented? The previous writings about the house-holding immortal masters all looked like villains, ridiculing, using vulgar language, and not having any atmosphere of cultivating immortals. They were too cliched; but in the latter part, they suddenly had the intention to help others with fists and fists, and showed their good intentions. The writing was very good, and the change was so fast? It feels too abrupt within one chapter!

Something's wrong. You can't walk eighty miles in one day? People who lift pig's feet are not human beings and they don't know how tired they are. When I was a kid, I walked home at 7 a. M. And arrived home at 3 or 4 p. M. When I was in junior high school. Our home was in the mountains, and the road was about 50 kilometers long. We were only fourteen or fifteen years old at the time, and the uphill roads had all kinds of twists and turns! The way you write it, the author, feels like you have directly reduced the so-called immortal in this novel to a playboy.

With just over 70,000 words, you're already in Sanjiang? Which boss's trumpet is this?

Arms should be diverse. There are sword and shield soldiers, spearmen, archers, and cavalry. It should come later.

The day it is released is the time of the eunuch

Tsk tsk, it was eunuch as soon as it was put on the shelves, please don't let the editors put it on the shelves in the future.

It's ridiculous. Just scattering beans and forming an army. Someone came and chopped down all the mung bean merchants.

I read Chapter 7 and I have some questions, why doesn't the protagonist pick up the bag? Whether it's the bandit or the fox demon, they must have some belongings or something. Why doesn't the protagonist pick up the bag? I can't even eat anymore

It really fell apart on the first day it was put on the shelves!

The subject matter and writing style are okay, but these days it's just a eunuch. It's a pity.

In the early stage of martial arts, you can kill hundreds of butchers In the early stage of martial arts, you can kill hundreds of elite soldiers. In the early stage of transcendence, you can kill thousands of elite soldiers.

Yes, come on, I hope everyone will support me.

. . . . I thought there would be heavy infantry. Evolving a black whirlwind would be a big deal, but the fairy spirit would summon a black whirlwind and it wouldn't be a big deal?

Didn't he die due to illness? It's like a grain of sand from the times fell on the author and turned into a mountain!

Will there be any training methods provided after spreading beans into soldiers? You can't just rely on this baby. I hope that he can develop some magical powers in the future, and eventually he will use other people's golden elixirs as golden beans. Look at my 12 golden immortals.

It's a really good book, but... Why is it gone after it's on the shelves?

Come on, I'll give you the monthly pass. I hope the author will work hard, the more he writes, the better he will be, and don't make it unfinished😊.

Come on, if you write this book well, it will hopefully make you a god. Doudou Soldier is so interesting~

It's quite interesting, why don't you write about it?