Dragon Clan: Unbox It! Lu Mingfei

It's quite good. I don't know why, but there were so many disparaging reviews that almost made me miss this book.

Harry Potter's aunt and family can be cleared because of: Harry's father's arrogance and rudeness; Aunt's envy, jealousy and love for his sister; Willing to adopt Harry; Lu Mingfei's aunt and family are simply ungrateful newborns,

It can be seen that the author likes whitewashing. The writing is smooth and the plot is above average in the fandom. The first one is about the aunt's family (already changed), and the later one is about Chu Tianjiao (the basement has turned him into 🤡, I really don't know how you understand him). Overall, if you don't mind the whitewashing of some of the supporting characters, this book is a very good Dragon Clan fic. Lu Mingfei is no longer the bastard.

6. I gave the money directly to my uncle and aunt. What a coward.

Wash it if you like, this book shouldn't have good results, right? If you are a cook, you must consider the taste of the customers rather than yourself. If the customers find it unpalatable, and you insist on saying that you think it is delicious, then your store will definitely not be able to open.

Mentally, I'm still weak. There's no need to read it. The author is still arrogant.

🐶💩 What are you writing, brother? The plot in the front is okay. Does the little head control the big head in the back? Is this the character of Nono? He chases after Lu Mingfei to lick like a licking dog. And Mai Shutoku, you wrote a character who can't hit a ball in eight lifetimes as a heroine. There are also dramas with multiple heroines. It's too rubbish. If you don't want to write with multiple heroines, why don't you write something else first? Also, I've read more than 300 chapters. There are some sensational scenes in each chapter in the back. What the hell? Each chapter has to do something in-depth, which makes me embarrassed. I originally thought that a few chapters would be enough, but the rest is like this.

There is no trace of the country in the entire novel. Foreign warships can enter the Three Gorges to slay the dragon without fear of accidents at the dam. This is very unreasonable. Have you ever thought that the most valuable thing about Teacher Daye is her Beijing household registration and ID card. Teacher Daye has never done anything illegal or disciplined since she was a child. Even though she is so poor, she still abides by the law. Moreover, she is already a Chinese citizen. Puyi has an ID card. What's the problem with Dragon King getting the ID card? From a legal perspective, Kassel who went to Beijing to kill the dragon was a criminal because they wanted to kill Xia Mi, a law-abiding citizen with no criminal record. If Teacher Daye is kind-hearted, has helped ordinary citizens who strayed into the Nibelungs, and has a record of being brave enough to commit crimes committed by mixed races, then Cassel's nature will be even worse. It would be fine if she was a wild dragon in the mountains and old forests, but Teacher Daye is different. She is a legal citizen and has the right to vote. It can only be considered a domestic dragon. The most abstract thing is that Kassel still has branches in the country and can station personnel in major cities, which is equivalent to transferring law enforcement rights. There is no reason in the world to give in again and again, and retreat again and again. With Teacher Daye, we can organize the dragon affairs department by ourselves. There is a saying that goes well, some things are not worth two or two if they are not weighed, but they cannot be stopped even if they are weighed a thousand pounds. Teacher Daye could have cried, made a fuss, or hanged himself. If Teacher Daye was left to be slaughtered, where would the dignity of law and sovereignty be? Thinking about it carefully, I think the background of that era is very interesting. It was the honeymoon period between China and the United States, and at the same time, public knowledge was everywhere in China. Kassel teaches in Chinese, and there are preparatory classes in China. There is obviously a hint of cooperation between the two countries, but Kassel has many advantages and only gives you face.

Who cares if you clean up your innocence? Don't give your money to your disgusting uncle and aunt's family.

The author would like to give a suggestion: make Aunt Lu's problem vague, or simply ignore it. This is why many Dragon Clan fans get into fights and fight to death, not to mention that you still write like this at the beginning, which is a typical way of screening readers. Of course, if you don't make money from this, I won't tell you, just be happy 🤝

Authors who write dragon fan fiction are trapped in a strange circle. Because the plot is so short. So I added scenes to supporting roles like crazy. The most outrageous book I have seen is that the author wrote thirty or forty chapters directly to the protagonist's aunt. About 100,000 words, I really rambled on here and there, and the number of words was enough to write this in dozens of words. There are also minor supporting roles that appeared in the original work. For example, Su Xiaoqiang was so crazy that she added drama.

Lese is Lese. The author made me know that no matter how powerful a waste is, his destination will still be Lese. You are too literary. That's why I like the Return series or Dragon Clan fanfics that have different personalities from the original ones.

After reading it, the poisonous point mentioned in the comment section is the uncle and aunt's family. I don't think it's okay. Lu Mingfei has been taken care of by his uncle and aunt for many years, and he has the strength. If he gives a little money, he will give it away. It's not a big deal. If I care about it, I feel uncomfortable. Then the plot has basically dealt with the regrets and did not follow the original version. The original plot really made me vomit. This one looks very comfortable and satisfying. It can be regarded as a good work of Lu Mingfei's universe.

I feel like the writing is quite interesting, but I feel like the author could write a little more polished. I feel like it's all dry stuff, but I just barely put the outline on my face. The plot goes by so fast, write more about daily dialogue and add more character descriptions in this chapter. I could have written three chapters if I replaced those water monsters.

I thought Aizen taught me a decisive and decisive Lu Mingfei, but he turned out to be indecisive and self-sacrificial. I saw the latest chapter, what's the cool part? Read it? Didn't see it? Like to see? Slip away

It can be said that he is one of the best among all the Lu Mingfei I have seen. Come on, author!

I'm halfway through watching it and I'm wondering if I should continue watching it. Overall, it's quite interesting, but I still don't understand who the heroine is? At first I thought it was Eriyi, but later I wrote with Chunqiu brushwork that Lu Mingfei also likes Nono, but even if Lu Mingfei is taught by Aizen, Aizen will not teach him to care about everyone, so caring about everyone is what Lu Mingfei means. Anyone who has watched Dragons knows that Lu Mingfei is a weak kid. He likes Chen Wenwen because of his ignorance in adolescence, and he likes Nono because of that moment of redemption. But the most important thing is that he will not like multiple people at the same time. It is true that Lu Mingfei can't deal with feelings, but he is not an idiot. If he wants to write a single female protagonist, he should slowly cut off some emotional lines that look uncomfortable. If he wants to write a harem, he should sort out the emotional lines.

The author did not add character cards Reminder Lu Nuo Huisu Chu Xia Lu Xia Party can retreat Lu Ling Party wait and see

My writing lately has been very poor. I can write two thousand words without any substantive content. But that's okay, just consider it a transition. Lu Ming is not already supreme, but he still stays in the small Kassel Academy and is manipulated by those self-righteous old people. It is really annoying to watch, just like the recent blood drawing and speech performance. Who dares to object if he directly and decisively refuses? Anyone who dared to provoke was directly razed to the ground by his family. The Supreme should have corresponding courage, especially for those old people who have high self-esteem and are stuck in their own ways. Gattuso, right, directly crushed the ridiculous so-called "Senate" Caesar and came to power; right, Beowulf, directly made the title of "Dragon Bloodthirsty" disappear. It just so happens that in order to cope with the future awakening of the Black King, I need to clean up the bugs and traitors in the secret party, and twist the power into a rope for my use. Stay in the college all day. If you don't have any tasks, you can chat with your friends, drink, and talk about how much you value friendship; if you have tasks, just use yourself as a brick to move wherever you need, right? In other words, Lu Mingfei cheated. Otherwise, sooner or later, either he or his friend would die. Of course, he could be resurrected, but it would not be unlimited. As a Supreme, you should have a long-term vision, not to mention there is a little devil brother to make suggestions. It's really unpleasant to think of yourself as a thug.

One of his failures was having a relationship with Su Xiaoqiang.

Speechless, brother, I spent so much, and then you cut it?

Come to life! ! I love you! ! !

What the hell? Why was it updated suddenly?

Rise Up Lu Mingfei's good-looking book

I always feel that the protagonist's abilities are best used by the protagonist himself, because with Golden Finger as a cover, it makes me feel that the logic does not make sense for others to be able to learn domineering things, but I really like the theme of Aizen.