My Weird Word Game

The main character of Our Lady is at the starting point... Not a good review

The author should clearly state the positive energy (Holy Mother) of the article in the introduction, so as to attract readers who like this style and prevent others from wasting time.

My evaluation is that although this book has many imperfections, I like the subject matter and feel that the author has great potential. I hope the author writes better and better.

The stories are all very good. The way you wrote the main character really persuades people to quit.

I just feel like the protagonist likes to be the good guy too much. Give things directly to others without expecting anything in return. You can obviously strengthen yourself. It's not that I don't approve of this kind of behavior, it's just that in a world where power is the strongest. Too abrupt and too simple.

Personally, I feel pretty good, but it would be better not to be such a holy mother. It makes sense for Zigong to accept the cow. There is no reward for your efforts, and no one is willing to pay in the future. It demonstrates your morality but will lower the overall civilized morality.

If you don't like dark literature I just like that the protagonist is a good person

I know why your data is so bad, it's because you wrote the protagonist as too holy and keep giving away your things to others! And readers hate it most when the protagonist does this

? Madonna type, I'd better say goodbye then.

The protagonist's camp is an orderly and kind-hearted college student, and the story generally follows the line of good people getting rewarded. The only problem is that the author has greatly weakened the real force, and the combat effectiveness of the real army has been significantly weakened. I don't know if the author didn't know it or if it was intentional.

I can't stand it anymore. I started writing about the Holy Mother, but I still can't express the feeling of majesty and honor. It's really 6

I think the main character, Order and Kindness, is pretty good. The reason why I feel like I can't stand the main character now is because the supporting characters are not well described. To put it bluntly, don't describe good people as zz, and it will be much better if you work on relevant supporting characters. Another thing is not to "over-tour". I find that many authors have this point. This means that even if this character has a close relationship with the protagonist in the future, it is not the reason why the protagonist "gives it to him for free" without contacting him a few times. Because the author has an outline plan, sometimes this kind of disharmony will occur if the plot details are not written carefully.

Are you really just copying The Fool? The beginning is exactly the same

If you don't have that writing style, don't write a hymn. Not only will it fail to promote the positive energy in your heart, but it will make people feel hypocritical and disgusting. You won't be able to read it anymore, and you can't stand it anymore!

It's not that it's bad, it's just that I didn't like the protagonist's character and the setting of the country in the book. Give up

Weird, Holy Mother. Tsk

How can there be no one in the comment area? I will form the head😊

Awesome, the introduction directly mentions the Holy Mother

The subject matter of this book is very good. The reason why it is not popular is that it is too holy. Everything is given away. If you want to give away things that the protagonist does not need, just give them away. For the protagonist, things that are a killer and life-saving thing should be given to others. It is too holy.

After reading it, the author's later chapters are completely inconsistent with the previous stage and completely divorced from the topic.

The author has just played the game for a month and the protagonist has become the number one master. He immediately arranged for the protagonist to be comatose for 20 days and fall out of the first echelon. All the orange props became the trash of the cleaning soldiers. It would be better to arrange for the protagonist's mother to be raped and his father to be castrated and then the protagonist to take revenge.

The author's Madonna-style writing is destined to hit the streets. I read too much positive energy and get tired of seeing it 😰😰