Mystery: the Fifth Pillar

The mysterious world is a world destined to tragedy. The more you use the system inside, you will eventually fly into the flame and become someone else. Without power from outside the world, you can't protect yourself. How can you save others?

It could be a good story about mystery, but in the end, it had to write about reality, and it was not handled well. The interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters was like a retard.

This author is really stubborn and doesn't listen to readers' opinions at all, even if this chapter tells him to catch bugs. I really don't understand the setting of the original work. Let's take the price of goods as an example. A casual meal costs a hundred pounds. The reader said there was a problem and still insisted on not changing it. I'll just upload the picture! This is an excerpt about London food from the reference book "How Much Money Is Worth in the Past" mentioned by Cuttlefish. In the top hotel in London, an eight-course French meal only costs three pounds and twelve shillings, and the army lieutenant colonel's banquet with an Italian princess is also the same price. In the article, a meal costs one hundred pounds. Do you know how outrageous it is? As the prototype of Backlund, even if the price difference is not so big, it is still recommended that the author make some changes. You must know that for nobles, the proportion of food expenses is very, very small, and most of the expenses are on giving gifts, maintaining social relationships and other face-saving projects.

Do you have to control the character 24 hours a day? In reality, you are playing games all the time, which is more tiring than working.

The fifth pillar, I think is well conceived, but there is no sense of participation, and the author's self-created sequence is really difficult to describe. I guess most book friends don't like the self-created sequence. The original plot is also a bit poor, but the plug-in settings are very good, but I feel that the author may not be able to write too much in this book. The main reason is that all the book friends, including me, feel that it is a bit poor. If it were written with the same idea as "Mystery: The Last Path to God", I should be able to achieve something if I keep writing it, but I feel that if I keep writing like this, I may not get good results in the afternoon.

Let's get back to the topic quickly. You are quite original here. There is nothing to follow.

Another eunuch's mysterious novel. Well. I'm afraid I've seen someone say that I need to take a break for a while. You can give me a specific rest period of a week or two. .

I feel like the protagonist is not doing well in the real world, but everything else is pretty good.

The author's book is very innovative, and he will stick to it, hoping to create a balance and fun between reality and the mysterious world. The self-created extraordinary path is also somewhat interesting, but I still hope that the promotion materials will be the best in herbs and extraordinary life organs. The fun of the new characters in God's Forsaken Land is not very high, it should be due to the location restrictions. Overall, it's relatively stable. Good luck, author!

It's been 5 days. This book is very good. It's a role-playing game. Open more materials and so on. Hurry up and level up as a demigod. Build a ghost ship and go to sea. Get some materials for other characters to level up.

The golden hand 🍊 is so detailed. It should be the third one today 😂

Your updates are too few. Six thousand words a day can't be guaranteed. The creativity is actually quite good, but the updates are too slow and the results will not be good. Not to mention that the realistic plot is too watery. As a mysterious fan, your focus must not be on reality. What's more, the reality writing is too watery and there are a lot of restrictions. It is better to greatly streamline the real-life plot and speed up the pace and updates.

I feel that the characters under the protagonist's control are all taking the route of avoiding combat. Their tool attributes are too strong and their frontal combat effectiveness is insufficient. Most of the battles rely on artifacts. I think there should be a crazy character, a more tense character like Gehrman Sparrow and Mr. A. Anyway, the protagonist's character is not afraid of death, so he can act more wantonly. The characters are all ready-made, witches.

Is the protagonist's plug-in related to the alien god Gao Dimensional Overlooker and the Ring of Fate?

Author, did you still write your last book?

The protagonist won't always be a woman, right?