Konoha: Transforming the Naruto World Starting with Uchiha

You are really kidding. Rich clans like Uchiha and Hinata are more inclined to cultivate ninjas on their own. They don't want to play Hokage and just give a few people some ideas. When you come here, you are poor and have no resources.

To be honest, if only two or three people in a big family can refine chakra in each generation, the ninja clan will be finished long ago. There is a small problem at the beginning. Would it be more reasonable to change it to civilians who cannot refine chakra? ,, Personal opinions, for reference only!

I haven't read the third chapter yet, and I feel like there are many places that I can't stand...

The setting is wrong. Chakra cannot be stored (except for the Yin seal). It is extracted and used by combining Yin and Yang. Besides, without chakra, your Sharingan cannot come out at all. Sharingan is the external withdrawal of chakra that stimulates Uchiha in the eyes.

Damn it, it's just natural chakra. 666

I always feel like the beginning is a bit of a drama... But the rest is okay.

It's really unnatural for a four-year-old little thing to toss and jump back and forth.

What the hell is the setting? Being able to refine chakra at the age of 4 has become the standard for becoming a ninja. This standard is too high. Few family ninjas have reached it, let alone poor people. You yourself know that not every family member can refine chakra and become a ninja. This shows that every ninja is valuable to the family, even a genin. Since it is valuable, there cannot be only one self-service quota.

Apart from anything else, how did we come up with the idea of ​​issuing a school admission notice to a four-year-old orphan? How could a four-year-old orphan know so many words? Can he understand the meaning even if he knows so many words? Even if you understand why you would think a four year old would do what you say. This protagonist's setting is also a genius. Is it possible that no one from a wealthy family can accompany him? Is it so troublesome to lead you to school?

There are many places that make people feel awkward and have a feeling of not being up to par. It feels like a lot of things are missing, and the character descriptions are also very strange. Most of them are the author's own words and were forced in to make the protagonist's various thoughts and behaviors conform to the author's own imagination. Many of them do not conform to the timeline. For example, the Mangekyō Sharingan is something that everyone in Konoha knows about. There are also a lot of messy things written that make you want to complain at a glance. Many places can't stand it.

I don't understand what the point of graduating at five is? Do you need Konoha to exchange ninjutsu? Will Sandai give it to you? What combat experience do you need as a three-headed man? Look at Mike Kay's father, Mike Day also has no experience in high-level tasks or against enemies, but the strong are the strong.

The table of contents and book titles are wrong. There are 169 books. What has changed? It's still the first Naruto fanfic, a fanfic about ninjutsu for the sake of ninjutsu. The catalog is not attractive, there is no imagination, and there is no sign of jumping out of Konoha. The whole story seems to be about school, classmates, forming a team, leading a Jonin team, taking a mission, leaving the village, and fighting. It's very boring.

Which onion is the protagonist? The group will care about you, and the repeated jumps are really funny. Do you think you are very capable?

What is the way Chakra travels? I feel that the author has not understood this at all. There is no ready-made Chakra in the air, only natural energy, and it is also very thin.

Let me talk about the advantages first, the introduction is very attractive😑

I'm from the Douyin anchor, please support me~ Come on

You know, Uchiha Obito only has one fire attribute chakra, so you can immediately persuade him to retreat at this start.

That... I have seen everyone's complaints. This is the first book, so these problems do exist... If you see anything else, please point it out if you see bugs. It is difficult to correct it now that it has been written so much. I can only learn lessons and wait for the next book to be better. . .

After looking at Chen Yan's acceptance speech, and then looking at the results of the Naruto fandoms that are almost the same, I can only say that it's not easy for a newcomer...

What did you write in the last two chapters? If you don't talk to your family about the Kaleidoscope, don't use it if you have training resources, and don't unite your existing family forces, is there any sense in this plot?

I've read four chapters and it's so boring. It's too watery. The author's ability needs to be improved.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

The writing is quite good, but one thing is age. Whether it is Tsukasa or Kakashi, it is impossible to become a Jonin at the age of seven. The amount of chakra is a big problem. No one will give S-level tasks to a seven-year-old child, and there is no situation where Kakashi joins in midway. Not to mention Orochimaru could bargain with a seven-year-old.

Come on buddy, I'll give you all my recommendation votes