Perfection: Immortal Road with Double Eyes

I'm not blabbering, but why did the protagonist give the Golden Crow Treasure to that Sky Fox Girl because he took her on her boat? Author, every time you write about that Tianhu girl, the protagonist always gives me the feeling of being a bitch, and the character almost collapses, even though I have only met her a few times. I came to see the double-eyed man compete with Shi Hao and gain fame in the nine heavens and ten places. Instead of treating him like a licking dog.

Don't write about the heroine. People with double pupils are precocious and extremely calm. Adding a heroine will only ruin the character. Kill him when he needs to.

The eleven characters have changed drastically. The one who secretly caressed his forehead and twitched the corners of his eyes took a boat and was given a magic spell equivalent to the ten evils. Rich people, that's not how they make friends, right?

I don't know whether the double pupils made Eleven or the eleven made double pupils? Except for Eleven and the girl with double pupil, there are no powerful people with double pupil. Number 10's supreme bone is of no use to the Immortal King, but Eleven's double pupil is still a trump card when he is the Immortal King.

Author, don't write it if it's perfect. The protagonist in your novel doesn't have the invincibility of Shi Hao. Instead, he has a licking behavior. In the last book, he didn't kill the people who should be killed, but also forced to return to the original story line. Since you have changed the story line, don't force yourself to cater to the original work just because of your ability. You can't write perfection, it's perfect. The background is very cruel, and there is a general atmosphere of killing others at every opportunity. What you wrote is too indecisive, and you are too kind to the enemy. You still don't understand that ordinary people are not guilty of their crimes, and they don't know how to hide their clumsiness. They don't know when to scare Xiaoxiao, when to be low-key, and you don't even know how to use the least exposure to scare the most enemies.

What are you writing about? Seeing a woman can't walk

When I saw Chapter 16, I really couldn't stand it anymore, it was outrageous! The Golden Crow Treasure Technique is given casually. The Douluo in the previous book gave Yu Tianheng the immortal grass soul bone, and this book does the same to the fox girl. Author, do you have to lick a dog every time you write a novel? In the last book, you licked a man. In this one, you lick a woman. Do you lick everything?

The author writes that Shi Yi must fight to death with Shi Hao. Revenge for killing his mother is unreasonable. If he ignores the revenge of killing his mother for the sake of national justice and goes to lick Shi Hao, it will be disgusting.

He is also reborn into the upper realm, and I will show you the original character, calm and composed, calm in dealing with things, and proud of himself. This is the appearance of being "one sect and two supremes" with Shi Hao. I can't imagine how he got a woman?

It is said that Double pupil is the way to be invincible, it is just the strength given by the girl with double pupil Di Luo, Immortal Gu, Luan Gu There is no one with double pupil who is awesome Double pupil girl, immortal is not

Didn't I say that the author has really seen a perfect world? The complete Golden Crow Treasure Technique is actually said to be slightly inferior to the Ten Ominous Treasure Techniques. I didn't know that the Golden Crow Clan can basically break the blood curse and continuously produce Immortal Kings. Moreover, their clan is basically infinitely close to the Quasi-Immortal Emperor.

They are all people who have been reborn as immortal kings. The secret of double pupil still needs the guidance of a supreme humane. I am drunk.

Don't write about female protagonists! Don't write about female protagonists! Don't write about female protagonists! ! !

Why did he become a money-splitting boy on November 1?

Shi Yi's character is arrogant. If he were not written arrogantly, it wouldn't be that interesting. It would be better to create a double-eyed character. Shi Yi only has Shi Hao in his eyes. Others feel inferior to him or on the same level as him. When he reaches the upper realm, Shi Yi makes me feel even more arrogant. He doesn't act lightly and is not being low-key. He always chooses the strongest to fight. His skills and tone of voice make him feel like this is him, and he should be like this 🙂

Hope the four heroines are Yuechan, Qingyi, Yunxi and Ye Qingxian

While watching Zhe Tian, ​​a group of licking dogs licked Ye Fan, and they gave every opportunity to make friends with each other, and even Kowloon pulled a coffin and came to the ancient forbidden land to kneel down to greet him This perfect protagonist obviously had a grudge against Shi Hao. Although the original work resolved it, there was no need to lick it like that, right? Wouldn't these authors be able to write novels without licking the original protagonist?

Ahem, have you ever thought about Shi Yi and Shi Hao forming a CP? Yes, I mean Hao Yi. If it doesn't work, just pretend I didn't say it 😌

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Authors, are you so irresponsible in writing books? Halfway through writing, you just trashed it and stopped writing. What do you want us readers to think?