Douluo's Death Scythe

I read more than ten chapters, and then I came back and read the introduction carefully. I found that it was really not a denigration of the original character, it was a hard denigration of the original character. First, when they were young, Tang San and Xiao Wuli were just ordinary brothers and sisters, but the author insistently wrote that Tang San fell in love at first sight. Second, when the protagonist wants to kill Tang San, he is obviously out of his wits. For this matter, Zhang kills people. How is it different from the original Tang San? Third, the protagonist threatens Tang San, and Tang Hao kills the protagonist in order to eradicate the threat. The reason is very reluctant and violates the character design of Tang Hao in the original work. It would be a joke if you don't criticize the protagonist of the original work.

First of all, let me say something, whether you come from Tomato or not? Please don't read the book. Even if you turn to the last page without reading it, your score will be better if you follow up on the book. The author can sign a contract so that at least the book will not be gone. Also, can the author himself be there to generate electricity for love? After all, I haven't read this book twice since I started pursuing it. In order for this book to last for a long time, at least its results should be better. Otherwise, the author's own life will be difficult. How can he have time to update us? And I read another book by the author at Qidian. It can be said that the results are not very good because that book does have some problems. Therefore, the author's popularity is definitely not high. It's okay. Give the follow-up data and at least let the author sign the contract as soon as possible. After all, this This book can be considered a masterpiece, at least so far The author is here {"NickName":"Unopenable Treasure Box","UserId":371746258}, I want to pin it😛😛😛😛

This book has disappeared twice. It is really difficult to find it again. Please protect the author and this book together. Thank you.

In fact, the main reason is that Tang San is both selfish and flaunts himself as a good example of Douluo, pure and pure. You see, some other protagonists in novels, such as Fang Yuan, are selfish protagonists. Although they are selfish, they are not like Tang San who claims to be pure and pure. They may pretend to be pure and pure, so that others don't think so. He was selfish, but they actually knew who they were in their hearts. Unlike Tang San, who was obviously selfish and thought he was innocent and selfless, without even realizing it, it was annoying. If they boldly admitted that they were selfish and knew who they were, they wouldn't be scolded as badly as they are now. After all, the protagonists of many novels nowadays are also righteous slayers who put their own interests first, but they know who they are, admit that they are selfish, and do not advertise themselves as righteous people like Tang San.

There is no normal person in Douluo. Tang San's secret door background also stole the sect's secret knowledge. And he was seriously brainwashed. I don't need to say more about the thoughts of ancient people. Tang Hao, I don't believe that he can't see that there is something wrong with Tang San. He did still take care of Tang San, and he didn't originally want him to become a spirit master. He changed his mind only after seeing the twin martial spirits. Needless to say, the master used his apprentice to verify his theory, and most of the knowledge was copied from others. And every famous sect thinks the master is a joke. From here we can learn what ten core theories they already know. Bibi Dong left me speechless. I didn't even know where I was sitting. I don't understand what responsibilities I have to bear as the disciple of the Pope in Wuhun Palace. I was fooled by some theoretical guru and became a love brain.

It's cool, but the plot logic is getting out of control. The protagonist's setting is not very stable, and his combat power is also very vague. The relationship between other supporting characters is also becoming increasingly unclear. Oh, it's quite fun. Don't start writing.

After reading Chapter 12, I couldn't stand it anymore. There are too many flaws. A child with a 6-year-old body and a level 1 talent can kill his brother with a level 7 talent and still escape from the city. Forget about escaping, Prince Xuexing sent some soul warriors of several levels to chase him. Normal guards must be over 20 levels, and ordinary people must be over 10 levels. After staying with Xiao Wu for a month, Xiao Wu treats him as a relative? Xiao Wu is a hundred thousand year old soul beast after all. And if you take action against Tang San, why can you run to the Star Dou Forest when Tang Hao is chasing you? Xue Qinghe also helped, telling Xiao Wu that her mother was being followed and was too lazy to complain, so she forced her to be subdued.

But in the finals, Xiaowu was exposed again, and the protagonist had to save her again. That's really poisonous, comparable to today's industrial saccharine idol dramas

Personally, I discovered that everyone who writes fan fiction has a problem, writing about time-travelers who are very afraid of death. Knowing that Tang San and his father are here, he dares to fight, so the protagonist is really invincible, right? , Each of them is scared to death, so he has to mix everything up. After developing for several years, he is invincible. As a result, he is scared to death and does not have much awesome strength. You have to do anything, just because you are special. I don't know how many times I have to die in the real world if I have to touch anything.

True Dragon Ao Tianwen, the ninety-sixth level Tang Ritian can't catch up with the twenty-something protagonist, you might as well just write a god king descending to earth🙃

In this age, the game starts with a waste material stream, and the invincible game starts with rubbish. Can't we be more normal if we are not geniuses? There are too many similar settings, such as some novels that just read the introduction and have no desire to click on them Example 1: A certain child who was spurned by his family awakened a little snake martial spirit. The protagonist himself said: "What, my martial spirit is actually a blue dragon" Example 2: A certain person who is called a waste by his family who cannot awaken his bloodline. The protagonist himself: "What, I actually have the bloodline of the God of War" The mainstream selection is too out of date. If you skip one chapter, how can you tell others to read it? You can read the first chapter without guessing what is going on.

The protagonist offended everyone, including the Wuhun Palace, the Tang family and his son, and the Tiandou Empire. These forces are all heavyweights. How could a normal person stand up to them alone? It would be difficult for him to defeat them with two fists. Even if you want to make enemies of everyone, you also need to deal with them one by one. After all, you are hiding and he is revealing. How could he be so high-profile to the protagonist? Isn't this looking for death?

The rest of this book is okay, but Xiao Wu's plot is extremely poisonous

It's really neither embarrassing nor offensive, because the protagonist is even more disgusting than the main characters. I mean, he's from China, but he might as well be Japanese. After all, why don't the Japanese like to use killing to speak so much?

Pure YY text, if you really don't have any books to read, don't read this one

I didn't accept it when I wrote about Xiao Wu. If I didn't accept it, I would forget about it, but I still wrote it in such a bad way. It's really poisonous. It would be better to write the protagonist as a native, but it would be even more poisonous if the protagonist is a time traveler.

After reading more than 20 chapters, I feel that it is quite intellectual. The protagonist, a bloodthirsty man, becomes Xiao Wu's licking dog. And I feel that Tang San and the others have too strong a sense of presence. In fact, there is absolutely no need to repeat the main story of Douluo. It is enough to have an occasional intersection. The characters in it are too evil, and it feels like half of their brains are missing...

It's too much, and the combat power is severely reduced. You can kill your dear brother at level 7 or 8 instantly at level 1, and you will vomit blood after being hit with two punches. Even if you make a sneak attack and others don't dodge, you can barely make it through. Why can Tang Hao let you run all the way to the Star Dou Forest when he's chasing you, a person of level 10 or 20? Isn't this outrageous? Cleared the Killing City at level 30? ? ? At level thirty, you can physically fight against the Soul Saint Soul Douluo in a group fight? Challenge the soul beasts on the road to hell? When the protagonist enters Shrek, he doesn't care if he offends you or not. He will kill whoever he meets. Normally, he will touch anyone he meets. He offends all forces. The reason for killing is very simple. Are you blocking my way? ? ? This is not cold and heartless, this is purely a serious illness and a pure abnormality. No wonder there are a group of sick, poorly harmonious people who are resentful of society, and there are also elementary school students who have become blackened and are shouting and clapping their hands every day.

Protagonist template. Isn't he an authentic evil soul master? Go to a competition held in the Wuhun Hall, show off your Wuhun and nothing happens? 😅

Why did Douluo lick Xiao Wu without thinking? Regardless of whether he's a good villain or a villain, he still has to lick Xiao Wu's trotters. It's disgusting to death. I mean, can't I just kill him and get a hundred thousand year old soul bone? Why don't I wait until 70 and kill him again? I don't know how many descendants Xiao Wu has. Is Xiao Wu really so good?

The poisonous spots are very poisonous☠️, but if you endure it, the overall look is okay

The more I read this book, the more rubbish I feel. He has lost his humanity after coming out of the Killing City. He is still bragging that he will not be affected by the realm of the God of Death, but the result is even worse than Tang San. To go to Shrek to pick up Xiao Wu, all he needs to say is that Tang San is the son of a titled Douluo, and it will take several titled Douluo to pick up Xiao Wu. But this idiot actually killed Shrek and tried to take Xiao Wu back. His brain has been affected by the killing.

After reading the previous chapters, although it is not ideal, I see that you are different and I will reward you with the "Whirlpool Dance of Death".

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

If you don't take it with you, this book is a great read. Anyway it's okay

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This level of bullshit makes no sense. I just didn't understand the original work.

It's very Lei Xiaowu. I can't stand it after seeing the first few pictures. Why do I love Xiaowu so much? I finally found a book with interesting themes. To be honest, apart from the fact that the writing was very poor and the plot was so confusing that I couldn't stand it, the rest of it was basically not interesting. The only thing that was really surprising was the relationship between the protagonist and Xiao Wu.

Author, when will you come back? I miss you.

In some fan fiction, do the authors really not read the original works? The city of killing, Poseidon Island, why don't you try it if you don't have any background? The Killing City has no background or backstage after Tang Chen was possessed by the nine-headed bat. After entering, he will die if he does not seek refuge. On Poseidon Island, if you enter, you will not be able to get out. I don't know what you are thinking...