I Wanted to Be a Loser, but I Went Straight to the Basketball Hall of Fame

I quite enjoyed watching it, it was relaxing and interesting. I would like to give my opinion after reading the author's reply. I feel that if I want to go further, I can write more emotionally-charged scenes, such as more emotional exchanges with Curry, the previous bar fight or the early renewal of Randolph's contract, so that readers can be moved by something. The most touching things include the most fundamental competitiveness in sports writing. Whether it is about a lonely hero or a team working together, there are many touching things. The author feels that he has written it, but it ends very quickly, making people feel that it is over before they are immersed in it. Another point is that the author dug a lot of interesting pits, but wrote too little about them, such as those about basketball and basketball. It feels like the pace is a bit fast? Many of the enjoyable ones that I like to read feel a bit short and pass quickly. Maybe now that the pace is slower, I will read less? In fact, I feel that the author's writing is very interesting and can be written, but the performance is very poor, but it can be said to be a masterpiece. As a reader, if a book can be relaxed and interesting, mixed with touching plots and ups and downs of the plot, then it is truly magical. Made By the way, I feel that Dada as the heroine is quite stereotyped. In many plots in the book, there is nothing else but sleeping. Ada is quite cute, like a little girl who likes you. Can more plots about Dada be written to make this character more lifelike?

Many of the plot points are interesting, and the occasional pastiche that skips some of the series deserves acknowledgment. But I think this golden finger is not suitable for pure sports. I saw that the title defense was successful, but the most interesting part is the content outside the game. The previous games combined with tactical innovation looked okay and readable, but after 4 seasons and no new evolution, the game plot is actually very boring. In the final analysis, it is not detailed enough. In fact, after the lineup of Big Clever was formed, everyone's expectations for the actual game process were actually very low. As of now, it is better to increase the role of supporting roles, players, and team management. In the new season, when everyone changes positions and everyone is MVP, I personally think it's okay, but it's too hard and the change is too abrupt. I think it would be better to let the protagonist stick to the upper-level line, then downplay the game and the championship, and let the protagonist implement the ideological changes brought about by Kobe Bryant's departure from Los Angeles into the new season. It would be better to start paying attention to the Clippers players and then start the mvp line. The line of chasing the championship can be directly removed, and the Hornets and Lakers will be completely destroyed. In this way, the protagonist is shown the consequences of the team's bankruptcy, making the protagonist struggle between the players and the team. In this way, since there are no new players in the draft this season, he can directly open more supporting roles as mentioned above. After all, it is really boring to not have new tactics and new things in the game after winning the championship. It is really difficult to hold back watching the game again. Oh, by the way, according to my observation and research, sports articles are not suitable for original players from previous games. They are particularly poisonous. It is best not to appear at all. It is not fun to make soy sauce. Just avoid it and there will definitely be no problems.

How to say it? Compared with becoming the richest man after losing money, he still lacks a lot, so he has to lose his appearance. What this refers to is that some money-losing operations give people a very distorted feeling, especially the logo chapter, where the color of the logo was changed after 2.5 Million was made. I would like to say that if it were Mr. Pei, he would make the logo very comfortable for the purpose of losing money, but the author's treatment was very uncomfortable, and he felt that he was being taken advantage of.

On time and in sufficient quantity

I can read articles about basketball, but I can't read articles like this where you want to lose money but make money. I feel uncomfortable reading it. I can only say that it's not suitable for me.

Author, if your book will be connected with the protagonists of your other books and go into depth with the plot, please write it in the introduction. Seeing a guy who can't even speak English suddenly appear and go to play ball abroad, it really feels like eating shit. All the previous subscriptions have been in vain.

I came in at the free-limited point, and I suppressed my nausea. After reading Chapter 275, I thought I would change my mentality and thinking, but it was still the same routine. Looking at the introduction, I guess I won't change it. . I doubt that the author has read the book he wrote from the perspective of a reader. . .

Who will be in the free market in 2010? It can't be James. If you want to be a bad guy, you will definitely not choose James. But who else will you choose in 2010? He was very poor at the time but very strong after the trade. No impression left. In 2011, you wouldn't have traded your own DeAndre Jordan for draft picks to draft Kawhi and Tang Shen at the same time, right?

I don't understand what Lu Yuan is doing. There is already a fictional character called Smart. Can't we just write about people who existed in history? Another fictional one is very dramatic. I can't stand it anymore. If the god disappears in the future, book friends, please tell me and I will subscribe again.

I gave up After a bit of talk, James has stayed with the Cavaliers for 10 years. Can you believe it? Big Smart and James have nothing in common James is such a shrewd and profit-seeking person, do you think he doesn't know the consequences of running away? Why run away? My ambition and the promotion of the capital behind me maximize my interests. The protagonist and Lao Zhan have no personal relationship before and lack a foundation of trust. Why do they let Lao Zhan stay in Cleveland after just talking? Does the capital behind him agree? Haha, it's really funny.

I suggest you stop fussing and just play ball. It will drive readers away. By now readers are tired of Smart's capriciousness. Very unhappy

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Writing does require talent. I can finish two or three times of "Ghost of Basketball" which was finished next door and has been completed for a long time. I can't even make it through the first ten chapters of this book... Goldfinger's system really doesn't make people want to read it. The setting of Ghost of Basketball is that as long as the protagonist shoots a three-pointer with standard movements, and the posture is not deformed, the three-pointer will be scored 100% of the time. If the posture is disrupted, the scoring rate will decrease. Goldfinger is not exaggerated to the point of being invincible, but it is not lacking in excitement. During the blacksmithing time, we talked trash to each other, and all kinds of diving, independent golden roosters, and elbow bumps (fun). Even a cloud fan like me can read it with great interest. Later, the coaching staff developed the elevator door tactic around the protagonist's three-pointers. After the elevator door tactic was restricted, they developed dual cores and used the protagonist to attract firepower, allowing the protagonist to pass the ball to allow teammates to score. It's okay for the protagonist of the basketball novel to have a golden finger, but when I saw the system, I lost all desire to click on it. After reading that book, I realized that this subject matter is not so boring. There are too many stars in the NBA with characteristics and stories. Combining their personal experiences and personalities, and then the protagonist's team confronts them, and write out the opponent's tactics and how the protagonist's team resolves them. There are wins and losses in the middle, but it doesn't make readers think there is anything wrong with losing (it's too ridiculous to win all the time) In the middle, there are interspersed grievances between stars, such as the story of the Shark and the Black Mamba, and the Iron-blooded Wolf King furiously beating his teammates. NBA star's fighting ability and Kardashian. I feel that there is nothing to write about basketball-themed books. If you are serious about writing, writing a long book will not be a problem.

The idea is very good, and the rhythm is a bit slow. However, I thought it was a business protagonist, and he fell into a cliche when he became a head coach. However, in fact, the fine for losing is not much. If you scold the referee a few times, the fine can cover the entire season. The team's performance is not that important. If you want the team to go bankrupt, you need to find a more reliable management method. The plan to build a stadium is very good. It can be described as an important main line. It is a pity that the protagonist only focuses on the thousands of dollars to win or lose the team, and he does not know how to spend money.

I feel that the author may be stuck on the next plot. Let me sort out my thoughts and express my own opinions. I think the core selling point of this book is still as a book about a high-quality coach/general manager. The selling point is that everyone wants to see Curry, Harden, Leonard, Pickle, Randolph, Gasol and other outstanding players can play together and create a dynasty. In other words, this book is essentially a high-quality coach/general manager article. Dihua is a very interesting idea. It makes the writing style of this book interesting and humorous, but it is estimated that the author has reached a dead end because of this. The protagonist wants to lose, but what we want to see is win, keep winning, and let different future all-stars join the team. Being a behind-the-scenes godfather controlling the entire league is a very good idea. On the other hand, it can satisfy readers' excitement of forming a space team, but being defeated is not a good idea. This is already the third season of Big Fool in this article. They lost in the Western Conference Finals last season. In theory, they should win the championship this season. But the author really handled it poorly when it came to winning the championship. It is best for the protagonist to have a situation where he has to win, or he thinks about losing but in fact he will definitely win in all aspects. Don't pass on negative emotions to readers like before. It feels like the protagonist deliberately wants to destroy the Clippers in the book. The author really handled it very poorly. Originally, basketball articles are mixed with the love of various fans and fans and cloud viewers for players. It is not acceptable for someone to make trouble purely. Why does the protagonist have to be emotionally sticky? I like to read everything. You wrote several books about a female character, made them ambiguous and then threw them away What do you mean? Want to write something green but don't dare? Still want to write about the harem but dare not? Anyway, I support the harem. The above is probably my idea, which is a bit messy. The author should not change it drastically because of this. He should keep his idea, but fine-tune or modify the following plot in terms of details and ideas.

I thought it was interesting at the beginning, but the more I watched, the more uncomfortable I became. I really wanted to watch the national football team lose and go directly to the national football team. It was a waste of money. Say goodbye.

That sucks. Bye bye. How can this be recommended?

Damn it, looking at the current situation this year, any team facing the Lakers will have to face the power of three referees. The Nuggets were originally crushing the game, but it was a bit suspenseful. If James didn't get sick again, it would be hard to say. In his later years, Jordan and Kobe did not receive treatment. Xiao Hua was really James' godfather.

This is not so much an NBA sports article as it is an NBA business article. The protagonist's class faces different affairs. As a professional manager (the actual controller of a team), he cannot only focus on the field or the players. He needs to improve the team's market value, resources and voice in the league from more aspects, so descriptions off the field are essential. This is the difference and contradiction between this novel and traditional NBA novels. These subtle descriptions that are not explosive can easily be called water, but they are indispensable, so it is really difficult to grasp. I hope those who like this book will be a little more tolerant to Mr. Sheep, but you can still send in razor blades. Finally, love & peace.

The biggest difference between the protagonist of this book and Mr. Pei's book is that Mr. Pei's actions not only do not arouse everyone's disgust, but also make everyone look forward to the appearance of such a person. In this book, everything the protagonist does is very disgusting.

Finish the Silver Empire, ball ball. To be honest, Forrest Gump and Danzi have been fighting for 13 years. Forrest Gump has lost and won. In the final battle between them in 1998, I can understand and accept whether the Sun King finally defeated God, changed his fate against the will of heaven, or was a hero who was finally unable to defeat fate. But you can't hold back and not write, understand?

To be honest, the first season was quite fun to watch, but the rebellion and separation after the start of the second season were so strong that I couldn't stand it anymore.

Compared to the previous ones, this one is terrible, as bad as logic.

The standard has dropped, and a review article on "Rice" only lasted three and a half chapters. Who wants to read such boring things? Mr. Yang, what are you doing?

How did this kind of novel end up with more than 700 chapters and no eunuchs?

Write a football book. What you wrote about basketball is already number one, no need to surpass it.

The ending is really disgusting. All I can say is that I would rather feed the money I spent reading this novel to dogs.

Now that it's over, let's go back and continue writing The King of Poems 😭

It's a bit outrageous that Kaman can only be traded but not Randolph and Curry. Isn't this system's freedom designed to allow the protagonists to compete for the championship?

I read it in 3 days during the Spring Festival. It is a very interesting basketball article. Basketball plus counter-loss routines, very innovative writing methods In the early stage, it was very funny to watch Da Smart struggle all the way and get stabbed in the back. The turning point in the middle is a bit blunt, but this routine is really difficult to write in the middle period The ending I think is actually very good. The basketball article writes a lot about players and coaches, but I have never seen anyone who can write about entering the league as an official and finally becoming the president This kind of deduction is actually very interesting, but too much writing about league affairs will make it too lengthy, so it ends quickly and neatly Reading it is like watching the great wisdom of the parallel world tossing all the way, watching the stars grow and mature, and then they say goodbye and continue their legend.