The Senior Is Still Here, Senior Sister, Please Respect Yourself

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Shangguan Qi

In the new book issue, there is no follow-up reading or even recommendation. Brothers, please support me more! I really need to keep reading and let the author live on, thank you!

Su Han Su Mei

The first part looks good, but the second part is really hard to describe. I feel like it has completely deviated from the original outline!

How about this little fish?

I'm here to read urban literature. What do you mean by cultivating immortality?

Su Mei Su Han

Fish Young Wei

Sun Yan

This book looks okay, but there are still some contents that need to be mentioned. First of all, this book is a system rebirth article related to entertainment, so there will be a very embarrassing content. There is no business war content, and the protagonist does not have much money. This leads to a lot of content in the middle of pretending to be a cup and slap in the face, which feels very old. Secondly, it may be to foreshadow the content of pretending to be a cup and slap in the face, which leads to some content in the book. It's very blunt. When the protagonist and Su Mei go home, I feel that the protagonist's emotional intelligence is a bit low. Grandpa Su's family asks the protagonist if he can play chess. Although the protagonist does not know how to play chess, there is a 50-50 system. You can be humble and say that you know a few things, and then write it in a gentle, cheerful and polite way, so that readers will not be too disgusted when reading the subsequent cup content. It seems to be a matter of course. If the writing is too blunt, it will be a bit uncomfortable to read, but both the description of the emotional line and the description of driving are pretty good in the book, especially the photos at the end of the article are very comfortable to look at, so I would like to give some personal opinions. By the way, although this is an entertainment article, you can actually write some content about business war and opening an entertainment company. However, it depends on whether the author is sure about it. If not, write about entertainment as usual. The content of the book is also good. The second thing is that whether it is the title or the acceptance, it is actually more about writing about feelings. Don't let the protagonist participate in competitions and get cups because of the 55-open system. I remember a book I read a long time ago about being reborn to make a movie or something. After writing it, the protagonist became a protagonist running around participating in various activities and competitions to get cups, and then it collapsed. I hope this book will not be like this.

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I've been depressed recently for too long, it's not exciting at all, it's too toxic

You bet me money and you've got 4 chapters, but I'm too lazy to read 😅. If you keep doing this, I will cancel the automatic subscription

There is so much water in the back, why are you in such a hurry? Are you in a hurry to return the computer because you borrowed it?😅

In a good urban novel, do you have too many plots about cultivating immortality?

It seems that it has been sent completely. Come over and offer some incense...

I have a bad idea. I think this book will be popular. It has a good pace and is very refreshing. Let's see when it will be in the top three of the new book list.

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Senior [Book title] Senior is still here, please respect yourself [Author] We are all thieves [Label] Rebirth, system, city, multiple female protagonists, King of Cars [Status] Serialized with 400,000 words [Recommendation index] 5 stars Synopsis: In the last life, I had outstanding abilities but was framed and exploited by others. My pearl was covered in dust, I missed my beauty, and my family was ruined. Unexpectedly, Xiao Zhang was reborn in the past and awakened the "arrogance" system. As its name suggests, it exudes charming arrogance deep in his bones. "This feeling can be remembered later, but it was already at a loss." In this life, I want to be domineering, suppress the enemies, pursue the most beautiful women, and so on, hiss~Senior, slow down, hiss~Recommendation reason: Goldfinger is an "arrogance system", which can learn the skills of others and double the effect. To predict the type of book, just look at the author's name. No need to say more, no more hiding, those who like to travel around the world in Qiu Mingshan, and want to buy osmanthus flowers to drink with them, must not miss this fairy grass. This book mainly writes the love story between the heroine and the man. Many of the heroines have distinct and diverse personalities, and are beautiful, straightforward and attractive. There are "green tea" who are fresh and pure on the surface, but have a succubus nature behind them. Some are cold in front of others, while others are arrogant and arrogant in the back. A treasure of strong gentleness... In line with the principle of driving to the sky, through the ingenious use of five thousand years of Chinese culture, the exciting points are directly thrown in front of the readers. With vivid descriptions, vivid writing, and resistance to censorship, this article will kill all the moderators! Although this is the first time for the author to get involved in urban writing, he has grasped the cool points very well, there is no stomachache, nothing is left out, and I accept all the orders. Friends who like this type can read it. Attached is a word count for the article (an imaginary world, unrelated to reality) "Haha, haha, the plan should be implemented." Liu Xuan dragged his tired body towards the "elevator", preparing to return to the dungeon. The breath he exhaled condensed into water droplets on his mask, making it difficult for him to see the road ahead, just as he couldn't see the hope of mankind. Before entering the "elevator", he looked back one last time. The sun was setting in the dust all over the sky. He wondered whether it would be able to light up the world again tomorrow. The sky turns purple, and endless despair envelopes the earth. I don't know whether there is clarity at the end of the road outside the fog, the dawn of dawn, or the final nothingness of all things. The door slowly closed, carrying humanity's last hope and sailing to the depths of the earth... Since the three wars of the last century, many places on the earth's surface have been contaminated by nuclear weapons, making the surface like purgatory. This forced the surviving humans to immigrate to the underground cities in large numbers. Because the population is growing too fast and the average life span of humans has exceeded 200, the underground city plan was implemented before the Third World War. It was just built and the environment was not yet perfect. The technology was far inferior to that on the ground. This was unacceptable to many people, so only a small number of the first few batches chose to immigrate underground. The period before the Third World War can be said to be the most prosperous period in human history. People's living standards were so high that they could only dream of before. Artificial intelligence helped humans save a lot of trouble, allowing the economy, technology and other aspects to develop rapidly. However, people who were intoxicated with comfort were so numb that they could not notice the slow growth of greed. (The underground city and the surface society are considered independent and autonomous) Gradually, the powerful countries were not satisfied with the status quo and broke the peace treaty, ending the nearly hundred years of peace. Excessive comfort, endless greed, and blind confidence brought about by the rapid development of technology made some powerful countries at that time feel that they could deal with the possible negative impacts of high-tech wars, and that they should rule the world. At the beginning of the war, under the inertia of a hundred years of peace, people were still very restrained and did not directly use advanced weapons. As the war spreads, the battlefield becomes larger and larger, more and more countries are forced to participate in the war, and the weapons invested gradually become stronger. Later, due to a misjudgment of artificial intelligence, a certain country used nuclear weapons, which was the most destructive weapon even in that most technologically advanced era. Watching the more powerful nuclear bomb blooming again in the world after a hundred years, the fire rose symbolizing death and destruction, human beings began to feel deep fear for the first time since the beginning of the war, the kind of tremor that comes from the depths of the bone marrow! However, the nuclear war has begun and the general trend is sweeping the world. The opposition and protests of countless scientists can only be done by the mantis. Nuclear bombs exploded one after another in the battlefield, and mushroom clouds one after another were like the smiling face of Satan. He was opening the door to hell to the world! At the end of the Third World War, if not prepared in advance, the resources on the surface will be destroyed, but even so, about 3/5 of the surface area cannot support human survival, and fresh water can only rely on the circulation system. Those small countries that surrendered early, coupled with the advanced technology at the time, barely left some space for survival. Although the underground city had "reserve forces" left by the big powers in advance, for the still huge population at that time, the underground city could not accommodate all the survivors. Only half of the people still live in safe areas on the ground. This war ended early thanks to the scientists who chose to enter the underground city in advance. Although they believed that the development of science was necessary, they also believed that people at that time relied too much on artificial intelligence, so they decided to develop underground.

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In fact, the taste after being put on the shelves is almost the same as before it was put on the shelves. The difference may be that the pace is a bit slower. I have kept it for a while to see the taste before it is put on the shelves. I think it is not as good as the one before it is put on the shelves. You can keep it for a while and then check it out.

I have read all the opinions you have posted in the circle and have given feedback to the author. Thank you for your valuable suggestions and your companionship along the way. I also hope that everyone will give this book a little more time. When the author is finished with this period of time and has adapted to urban writing, the updates will get better and better! ! !

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