Starting from Defecting to Konoha Village

I can't help but complain, you said you traveled through time, do you know this word? You know how to use the Beiming Divine Art. How can there be so many things that are taken for granted? Just say, you studied ancient Chinese in your previous life and had a hobby of reading ancient Chinese. You are not the brainless Shuangwen brother you used to be.

The male protagonist is brainless, and these little bastards in the Naruto world are not good people. . The whole world is like a layer of hell. The author doesn't understand Naruto at all.

What are you writing about? Can you stand it yourself?

The beginning was not written well. A time traveler who knew the plot could actually be deceived by Hiruzen Sarutobi's appearance?

It feels like a beginner's book, but at least it's not a studio novel. I really hate most studio novels. Come on, although there are quite a lot of poisonous points, it will be much better if you pay more attention to it. Let me talk about what I think is poisonous: 1. I have too much imagination and don't pay attention to details. Beiming's magical skill of absorbing life force is a bit outrageous, and it is not the powerful method of absorbing energy from Tietan Shenhou. I can make up a more reasonable reason so that it is not so inconsistent. 2. The protagonist who suffers a lot and has deep hatred is actually ridiculously kind. If you don't use it yourself, give it to someone else, and this person can't even follow you. Giving Ice Silkworm to Wang Yuyan is equivalent to exchanging resources for 0 returns. If you have to give it to her, you have to make up a reason to make the ice silkworm useless. 3. Although we know the original work: Flying Thunder God + Dragon Vein = traveling through parallel worlds. But Flying Thunder God + Vitality = Traveling to Another World, this is buggy. Vitality＜Dragon Veins, Difficulty of Traveling to Another World ≥ Traveling to Parallel Worlds. It's best to add some time travel settings. 4. Combat power setting. The Wooden Dungeon can crush the Heavenly Dragon. The Wooden Dungeon is as big as thousands of hands, and the Sweeping Monk is really nothing. 5. The energy is different. Chakra was brought by Kaguya Otsutsuki. Wang Yuyan has no chakra. Using ice escape is outrageous. The settings need to be supplemented.

Just reading the introduction put me off.

Just the resume of the book persuaded people to quit!

You don't know that chakra is something from the sacred tree. You still give it to others. What do you say? Do people believe it? How many people can survive with one big move? Stop writing. That's bullshit.

This writing is so mindless. He actually has a master-disciple relationship with a foreigner. Moreover, he was an egoist before and suddenly turned into a good person who sacrifices himself for others? When these books were written, didn't they always describe foreigners as bad people and despise Chinese people as,, human beings? Wouldn't it be enough to send a clone?

Traveling across the world by flying thunder gods? There are so many people in the universe who understand space and even time, who play with the world at their fingertips.

What's wrong with the authors nowadays? They all become children and grandchildren in other countries. What's even more frightening is that a while ago, there was a person who traveled to Konoha to be a dog. They were real dogs. There are many ways to express their love for something, but they don't want to be someone else's dog.

Guess why the third generation cleaned up the house and almost executed Orochimaru on the spot?

Martial arts and Naruto are both incompatible...

It's better not to write it. It's a waste of time.

You said that if I traveled through time to other Japanese comics, I would still be able to read them, but it turned out that traveling through time to a costume drama would have nothing to do with it, okay?

I have no brains. If I should use the clone, I should not use it. If I should use the Flying Thunder God, I should resist it forcefully and force the plot to lower my intelligence.

What I admire most is that I can understand the peerless magical skills after traveling to the world of martial arts! You can still practice!