Douluo: Endless Blade at the Beginning, Critical Strike with the Sword

It's too watery. Originally, the reward was a watery one, but in the end, it still had to deal with internal drama. The protagonist would be in a daze at every turn, thinking about a lot of irrelevant things. Then someone would call the protagonist, and the protagonist would react and enter Shrek Academy. From chapter 50 to the eighty chapter I saw, he didn't even start fighting Zhao Wuji. I was really convinced.

It's a pity that it would have been better if it was Kai Dad. As soon as Shura's Soul Immortal Demonic Body is opened and coupled with endless critical strikes, the sword will go down 🪖

Nothing else, it's just too clumsy, with too many inner dramas. Basically, 7 out of 10 chapters have a cliché word count. Tang San and Yu Xiaogang are not that censorious. Let's take a look at how other well-written fanfics tortured Tang San. I gave up.

Is Xiao Wu a harem? Is it a harem story?

The author can get into Shrek, it seems that we are not the same people with three views

Well, in the introduction, Tang Hao's ring is an explosive ring, not a melting ring.

Come to the author and read with me. I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author, and coding is my bounden duty!

The protagonist has too much inner drama! There's a lot of nonsense!

Author, you are really good at writing. Most of the pictures from 44 to 81 are psychological descriptions. Why do you write such bad things?

Power, real power will never belong to a guy who is naturally strong, agile, or smart, never. He will only belong to those who are willing to do whatever it takes to achieve their goals.             ，，，

It feels like a purely emotional drama, but the Tangshan family in it are honest and honest, a little thoughtful, but have no aggressive character. No more feeling