
Douluo Starts from Awakening His Martial Soul Independently
斗罗从自主觉醒武魂开始
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- Completed
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- 775k Words
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- Light Novel
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- Male
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- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
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- Qidian
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It is recommended that you kill if you need to.
It is recommended that the author kill the characters when necessary and not forcefully retain the original characters for the sake of the original plot. For example, Zhao Wuji and Ma Hongjun Considering that he is the prince of Xingluo, Dai Mubai has many solutions, whether he is imprisoned or his soul power is destroyed, but if it doesn't work, he should seek refuge in Xue Qinghe before solving the problem, and accumulate strength to wait for the right time. After all, this is a world where people can kill people at will, and when it's time to eradicate the roots, eradicate the roots.
The author is also forcing soul beasts to die by writing this way. Originally, high-level and top-level soul beasts had difficulty in giving birth. From now on, high-level soul beasts are a luxury, especially those with low age. To put it bluntly, the inscription talent skill is not about killing the soul beast and looking at the soul ring lines. Looking at the soul ring patterns, I don't understand it here. The so-called internal power has a certain running route. The soul ring patterns you carve on the martial soul here have no connection with the meridians running route. ? Then when you go out and see someone with good soul skills, will you always stare at their soul rings and copy their skills? There will be no difference between your innate skills and your self-created soul skills. Furthermore, there are rules in the divine world that restrict soul masters from advancing. In addition, humans in ancient times did not have soul power and martial souls, and soul beasts did not have soul rings and soul bones after death. It was only after the death of the Dragon God that the god-level rules were changed, which was to lock down the conflict between humans and soul beasts.
The content of this novel is okay, but the protagonist's dog-licking attribute is really too strong. What the protagonist likes to do most is to give away his self-created soul skills and self-created exercises to people he doesn't know for free. If it is given to his own woman, he can reluctantly accept it, but why give it to some strangers? What makes me speechless the most is that the protagonist doesn't know the Qibao Glazed Sect at all, and directly gives the Qibao Glazed Sect's self-created soul skills and fairy grass for free. Licking Dog has reached this point and is really speechless. The plot of the protagonist giving Tang San a hundred thousand year soul ring for free is really disgusting to the extreme. If you like reading Dog Licking novels, you can read this novel.
The previous settings and everything are fine, but I don't know how you wrote the Yu Xiaogang part. Except for the names of the people, it has nothing to do with the original work. Whether it is to vent or to please some people, this plot is really like shit.
Actually, I don't think it's necessary to be so closely related to Huo Wu. There's no need to accept it. Seeing as there are too many people like you who can fuse martial souls, do you think they have to accept it? It would actually be better not to tear down some original CPs. Nowadays, there are too many ponies or too many harems in the fandom. Everyone is tired, and single female protagonists are not good at it, which will be regrettable, so I feel that it is better to include 2-3. There is no need for too many. Instead of writing too many female protagonists, it is better to focus on writing stories with the female protagonists to make them richer. Also, although the writing is light-hearted, it seems a bit too light-hearted at the moment.
Where is the author? What are you writing about? Is the protagonist mentally retarded? Send grass jelly everywhere and make enemies everywhere. You said you could kill the rabbit and get the soul bone early, but you still have to beep. The result? Sacrifice was given to Tang San, and he greatly attracted a wave of enemies. He was also targeted by Tang Hao, who was determined to kill him. There was a high chance that the protagonist would die, but a small chance that he would be seriously injured. What does the protagonist want to do? It's really hard to understand whether you go to Notting City just to be killed or seriously injured! The author please come out and answer the question! Please! ! !
If you can't write the style of a master in Tang Dynasty or Huang Yi's novels, don't write blindly. You are so high-profile. You are even more qualified than the supreme master Ling Donglai, and he is also innate. By the way, please take a look at Xiao Yan's journey through Tang San. Haha, the operation at least makes people think that Xiaoyan is very smart, but your protagonist has a lot of talents. Haha, it turns out that he is as good as a dog, and he is also innate? Where's your sister, Xiantian? Tang San, who practiced all the eight meridians and eight meridians, was banned from Kuaihun Douluo. He's not even Xiantian. You're a noob.
It's so mouth-watering that it makes you want to vomit. Damn it's not enough to give me the exercises when we meet for the first time, let's give her the grass jelly
I approved a layer of Douluo Continent, and then just scribbled a lot
Chapter 3: Qinglian, a mutated lotus. Is Qinglian not a lotus?
Another mouth-talking monster, Douluo Continent has such severe level suppression, how can you cultivate to innateness without having a martial soul or a soul ring! No matter what kind of fantasy sewer, you, a person who should be in the world of Chinese martial arts, can't break it!
As expected of a daily guide to poison, it's really poisonous. It's the same poison as the other book about Bibi Dong's martial arts.
Forcing conflicts and forcibly creating encounters
Yes, I suddenly remembered one thing. Why do we need to rely on others to awaken our martial soul? The third young master of the Tang family never thought of giving ordinary people a chance to get promoted from the beginning! No wonder I would write shit-like works like that later. . .
Don't get involved with the Qibao Glazed Sect. This sect has nothing to say, it's just rubbish. Sword Douluo goes to recruit the protagonist, and if the recruitment fails, he will definitely kill him. This is an old tradition. It can be seen from the original work that the Qibao Glazed Sect is not a good bird. The protagonist should use strong strength to repel it, or the two should be directly staggered.
The teacher does not look like a teacher. There is no one in Douluo Continent who can be a teacher. In fact, it is just an early investment. The one who can be a teacher has no martial arts heritage.
The author is afraid that the pigeons somewhere have become sperms, they are too pigeons😂
I feel bad reading this, rubbish novel, pure YY
I feel like the male protagonist is a little ignorant. Why are his twin martial arts exposed? Give others an incentive to deal with you? Even if you are strong and are not afraid of others dealing with you, what about Tianshui Academy behind you? Others have plenty of ways to deal with it, but with the principle of destroying it if the hypocrites of the Qibao Glazed Sect can't get it, can Tianshui College survive? If you don't do it right, it's impossible to wipe out the whole family!
Author, your writing is getting more and more clumsy, and I can't stand it anymore. There is nothing exciting at all.
Did you choose your own soul skill name? It comes with absorbing soul rings.