After Handing in the System, I Became a National Treasure by Grabbing Supplies.

After reading ten chapters, let me talk about the points that I can't stand at the moment The plot is too serious for the sake of the plot First of all, the more people enter the system, the luckier the heroine gets. The heroine will encounter wild beasts within five minutes of leaving. However, when the heroine shows her ability to the leader, she will see a piece of grass as soon as she enters the system. Picking some grass will give you more than ten kilograms of food... So you can pick it. He just ran away, and he wouldn't be so hungry at all. I understand that he turned it in to the system for the sake of justice, but I really can't understand it because he was so hungry that he couldn't live anymore Secondly, there is no reasonable explanation for how the heroine got the call from the leader in the first place Furthermore, regarding the issue of real and fake daughters, the heroine's family is so cowardly that they regard the person who failed the plastic surgery as their own daughter, and let Ye Ji control the Luo family? The high-level superpowers are in Area A, the rich people are in Area B, and the others are in Area C, which shows that the rich people are living a good life. Ye Ji is not the only one with superpowers in the entire base. He can definitely ask other superpowers to help with supplies Finally, regarding Ye Ji's attack on the heroine in the team, are the others blind, and is the heroine mute? Don't you have a long mouth and can't speak? Since the leader found out that the heroine is the daughter of the Luo family, he must have also found out how the heroine got to the slums, and he actually dared to put Ye Ji into the team This is only ten chapters, oh my god 💀 Finally, let's complain about the setting of the heroine, she has the perseverance, coldness and ruthlessness of the king of soldiers... Then she did not dare to enter the system to find food, Ye Jiyin also remained silent

When I read the introduction, I really thought it was a unity-type article, and then when I looked at the content, I found that the real and fake daughter in ancient times, there is also the legendary long mouth but it is of no use, the heroine is set to be very powerful, but the author wrote the heroine and White Lotus. There is no difference. I have to describe it. For a moment, I thought I saw Fu Wenpei... I felt so deeply in love with Yi Ping inside the rainy sky. That is, I feel wronged but I don't say it. Maybe others can see my difficulty. My mouth is not a mouth, it is just a decoration.

I watched the beginning and it was disgusting. The author is determined to be a man but also writes the female protagonist, and writes the female protagonist with a man's funny thoughts. Nausea

This book is very good. A system can feed a country. It is very intelligent and randomly drops materials, so that people who cannot reach the base temporarily can survive. And if the heroine informs the base of the existence of the system, more elites will help her complete the task. This system is really a big treasure! It is simply the golden finger of the entire flower gardening family.

I've read a hundred chapters, and there are a lot of flaws, but I kept reading because of the subject matter. The heroine couldn't establish herself, and she kept talking about how determined she was, but most of the time she acted like a wimp, and she was really incompetent.

I don't know what the writing is about, it makes people angry.

There are too many flaws to watch.

The system has been upgraded g The country has obtained food and technology Where is the heroine? Why is the heroine always an ordinary person?

The heroine said at the beginning that he could not resist the end of the world with his own strength. Why did he suddenly feel that he could survive alone in his current situation? I feel like the writing is a bit stripped down! I don't know if I saw it wrong or understood it wrong.

The setting of this book is quite novel! I have never seen one that can be turned over to the state after being bound to the system. The world inside is also quite good, especially the generous things! It can feed the whole country. No wonder it takes the efforts of the whole country to complete the task. I feel like this should be a good read, because I only read a few chapters (sorry), but I couldn't stand that disgusting person Ye Ji, so I had to reluctantly give up. I wonder if the author can let this person get his lunch earlier🍱. The novel is still relatively compact now, so I'll wait for Ye Ji to read it when I can still remember this book.

I think the subject matter is good, but unfortunately the plot is a bit childish and illogical.

I think it looks pretty good, but there are very few updates.

Which chapter is about revenge? Is this cowardice worthy of perseverance? Comparing with special forces? It's okay to hand it over to the state, but what do you get? Even if it means pulling out all the people who bullied you in the past and giving them a beating to vent their anger? In other words, we don't seek equal dialogue, we don't seek immortality, we don't get anything out of it, we don't work hard, we don't make progress, we can just be a useless person who eats, drinks, has fun and doesn't have to worry about being raised. Is this your only nuclear weapon still causing you to fight and be bullied without protection? Would you like to take a look at the comment section? Can the exchange eldest lady who failed in plastic surgery continue to do so? When everyone is blind, if there is no condition for a paternity test, one can always identify the parent with blood, right?

The plot description in the first few chapters is a bit awkward, but the later chapters are quite interesting. I recommend 😍

There is a recent book shortage. Do you have any good novels to recommend? In addition to this book on my bookshelf now, I also read "The Mortal's Story of Immortality" and "The Monk's Family". As everyone knows, "The Monk's Family" is almost 3 million words, and I feel it's okay. The author's writing is very exciting, and the adventures are one after another. Looking at the later stages, the articles are not messy, and there are more than a thousand chapters now, with a lot of foreshadowing, and the map is getting bigger and bigger. I just like this kind of grand world view setting. What is commendable is that as the map becomes larger and larger, the author has also made the various supporting characters very fleshed out. It tells a family story, probably a novel about a group of cultivators. I think this is more difficult to grasp than a novel with a single protagonist. It is not easy to get all the way to this point. I thought it would be a trap at first, but so far, the plot constructed by the author is very rich and the reading is very smooth. The character descriptions are just right, including demeanor, dialogue, appearance, etc. The copy tasks of the article and the main tasks switch naturally. A small problem is that in some chapters, the family ranks are inconsistent. The author can make these basic settings a dynamic item, so that there will be no differences as the context goes. In short, the writing is very good, the setting is grand, the plot is ups and downs, the characters are full, and the reading is smooth and natural. I recommend it.

There are so many typos, so I won't read it.

Very pretty! Like it very much. Why doesn't the author update it? Don't be fooled

Damn it, it's only been a few chapters, how did this B Ye Ji join the team? The country lacks him a superpower? He can also approach and threaten the protagonist in front of the soldiers.

You still keep it secret, what the hell?