Perfect World: Starting from the Middle Ages of Chaos

The writing is so bad, the imagination is bad, and the writing of fan fiction is so bad.

Two chapters a day is fine. The author keeps working hard so that we can enjoy reading it. As a reader, I am very happy even if I spend money. Unlike the author of Battle of the Sky who keeps updating one chapter a day intermittently.

I feel like the writing behind it is pretty cool. Liu Shen is almost an epoch old and he hasn't won it yet! 😰

The writing is a bit messy and a bit confusing. I didn't write the opening sentence well. I don't know why I stopped reading after reading one or two chapters 😭

First

What I hate most is describing the talents you are born with as external forces. Even what you are born with is an external force, so why are you absorbing spiritual energy? Isn't that even more an external force?

Ever since I watched the Perfect World episode. I feel like it's not okay for a fandom to play with the main character. There is no solution to the power above the sacrificial path. I can't even touch it if I write about it.

I didn't look like a human being when I checked in the middle of the night, so I put down my phone and felt panicked. Do not use Taojun's positive energy, only the poisonous chicken soup that harms people. Poisonous Chicken Soup is so wonderful, it is harmful to both heaven and earth and to young people. The cigarette is lit on the left, and the power bank is plugged in on the right. Stifling laughter while posting jokes, and sighing in comments below: Damn it, it's been another night, and the rooster is crowing before dawn!

Let's talk about the heroine. The heroine Liu Shen, this is my regret from the last book, so even if I am criticized, I still want Liu Shen. As for how to become a heroine, it is definitely not easy. After all, I have lived so long and haven't seen anything. So it is possible to keep up with the strength and stay together. But maybe Liu Ma narrowed her eyes in anger, and hundreds of thousands of years would have passed. As for how to be with Liu Shen, I definitely won't be like other fanfics. Liu Shen's character will not change, her character will remain the same. I don't know whether it's a single heroine or a double heroine. Luo is also pretty good.

This kind of difference is that the girl who appears first is also the heroine. This kind of unknown girl is brought in to be the heroine, which kind of lowers the protagonist.

Does the protagonist just like to mutter to himself? I've only read less than 10 chapters now, but almost every chapter contains a lot of soliloquies, as if others don't know the protagonist's secrets.

When writing fan fiction, you must study the original work carefully. Don't just write whatever you want, and modify the settings at will. If you are so cheating, why should you write fan fiction? Just write a new one. Don't say it is a second set. You must also be reasonable in the second set. It will become chaotic at every turn. If you want to reap the dividends of fan fiction, then you must respect the original work, pick up the bowl to eat, and put down the bowl to curse.

I don't understand the point of this kind of book exemption? To waste a coupon?

I just read a few chapters, but I really couldn't stand it. This logic is too far-fetched. The Supreme Being is going through a tribulation, sitting there unable to move, and he just stole the Supreme's belongings? What about that martial arts novel? You can't move during practice? 🤧🤧🤧

,,, There are too many funny elements mixed in,,, and why is the Immortal Gold that covers the sky in it? The Immortal Gold that covers the sky and the perfect one are two completely different things. The perfect one can be used to make the Immortal King's Weapon, which is not comparable to the Immortal Gold that covers the sky.,,,,,, And there are too many funny elements, which makes the protagonist a bit funny,

Author: How do you get into the realm of infinite exaggeration in fan fiction? The highest level of moving blood is 108,000 kilograms. How much is this for you?

The author is serious, that weapon is not as good as directly using the ancient Zhuxian 4 swords. You originally carved the killing array in the 10 caves. Later, you synthesized the Zhuxian sword array and killed it. As a result, you made a fan for the sake of coolness. What the hell, the killing array was put together, and it turned out to be a compass. This is not the same. Well, you put it together to form a big killing array diagram. How did you change it from the killing array to a deduced compass? This function is irrelevant.

The metaphysical is called the Tao, and the metaphysical is called the tool. Using a fan as a tool to prove the Tao is just a forced arrangement for the sake of looking cool. And now there are still people who think that using a fan is cool? When the protagonist proves that the Immortal Emperor is fighting, grab a fan and don't make the weird clan laugh to death.

The heroine Liu Shen gave up decisively. Needless to say, another mindless novel

Do you dare to run to the cave to experience it? Even Huang is not that outrageous. They are all venerables. What's the point of carving more formations in your cave?

What are you writing about? A bunch of typos, did you graduate from kindergarten?

After reading Chapter 11, I really can't hold on anymore. I'm here to read serious cultivation articles, not nonsense. The perfect world has been written as nonsense. I'm really speechless😳

When I saw the fan being used as a Taoist tool, I immediately lost my feeling.

Wang Changsheng's original name was not Wang Changsheng. He changed his name after being exposed to the disaster of immortality and fused with the bones of immortality. The original Wang Changsheng seemed to be a grassroots practitioner. The same is true for Qin Changsheng, the Immortal Lord. The difference with Wang Changsheng is that Qin Changsheng took out the bones of immortality when he escaped to the first realm, and did not become a supreme being.

I really don't understand, what is the point of this kind of limited exemption book?

Is anyone still writing perfect fan fiction now? After the completion of Shengxu, a group of people have been watching for a long time, how are you going to complete this?

It's a bit ridiculous, the realm is lacking, it's a bit outrageous, it's too easy to mention the realm, Shi Hao, who is Ying Jie, doesn't dare to do this, it's a bit embarrassing to watch😅

It's not very good-looking. The protagonist's master is the guide for cultivating immortality, and his wife has helped so much. After the two died, they said they would be resurrected, but in the end they were invincible and did not even resurrect.

Brother, please write me another book to cover the sky. I'm dying. Please, brother. I feel like there are ants crawling on me. I feel like I'm shaking all over. I can't breathe. Please, brother, just write me another book. Just write one. Please, brother, really, just one. I swear I will I touched this thing later, I really can't stand it anymore 😭, I'm tossing and turning now and can't sleep, brother, I beg you, just write another book, and never ask you to write about reincarnation or anything else, just not the system and the heavens, please, brother, you are really my brother (screaming) (distorted) (dark crawling) (crawling) (twisting) (squirming darkly) (rolling) (crawling violently) (twisting) (tilting head) (sitting still) (slowly)

A mess of 4, there are a lot of typos, sometimes the names of the protagonist and Meng Zhengtian are wrongly written, and other people's names suddenly appear, what the hell, please reopen it quickly