
Sword Breaking Douluo
刀破斗罗
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 171k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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74Chapters
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If you expect Tang San to take a lot of fairy grass and then give you one. It's time to abandon the book
In Douluo there is fairy grass whale glue. As long as you're not a cripple. All talents can be improved
Why. Ice and fire practice golden body. Look through the autumn dew. I hope someone will give you one. It's better to see how other grassroots fans plot the fairy grass.
Why did you start writing from Tang San's perspective? Who is the protagonist? You really copied the original text 😒
Reading this book is confusing, most of it is copied directly from the original text. The protagonist's brain is still not working well, but he still thinks that Tang San can give you fairy grass? Mainly, he was writing about Tang San's bad things and that. He even licked his face. My writing is too good. To be honest, if it doesn't work, let's just go to the factory. Don't make it disgusting.
The main character is an ordinary person who travels through time. The author only gave Bo the basic pendant, the leading soul power mutated martial spirit, and nothing else. He doesn't have much brains, so why not write about muscles and veins! What Yu Xiaogang in Douluo can do is just a very short training method! Tang San didn't like it. This shows that there isn't much research on tendons and techniques in that world. You still attack the tendons? Where does your knowledge come from? The same applies to soul skills. Soul skills are all blessing type and have no special characteristics! The final storyline was to join Shrek, which didn't have any special features. The next few pictures were just pure plots. It seemed like they had changed, but in fact, nothing had changed. I wanted to hug Ning Rongrong but didn't help her. I was so confused. It was too homogeneous. There was nothing to watch, and there was no desire to seduce people. There was not even a conflict, and there was no merit! This book can be described in one sentence after writing this book. Traveling through Douluo, awakening the martial soul, joining Shrek, practicing to more than thirty levels, I want to hug you!
The protagonist is mentally ill. Even if you have foresight, you won't take advantage of it. I don't even know how to help myself grow. The 100,000-year-old Blue Silver Emperor's right leg bone. Eight Spider Spears. Grass jelly. Whale gum. Not calculating earlier. Let's play house with Tang San. The writing is average. The plot is also not engaging enough. What else is there to see? If the writing is not too strong. It's still a cool article. Withdraw🪖
You are stupid. You don't know those fairy grasses. If you don't get that opportunity, can't I build a bomb to blow it up? If you don't get it, destroy him completely, including the eight spears, and kill all the Man-Faced Demon Spiders before Tang San.
As long as you torture Xiao Zhan San and Yu Xiao An, we will be good brothers. It's best to have superficial friendship. Then he stabbed Tang San twice in the back. This is much better than the protagonist Long Aotian who fights against Tang San without any brains. It was as if Tang Hao didn't dare to crush him to death. 🙂
The protagonist is an ordinary person. When he was at a low level in the early stage, he relied on a few soul skills to defeat Tang San, which was not very convincing. Tang San's Xuantian Kung, Ghost Shadow, Xuan Jade Hand, and Purple Demon Eyes were really not for nothing.
I won't talk about other issues. You went to the same academy with Tang San and thought he would give you a piece of fairy grass? I want to eat shit. 1 You can't fit into their group, let alone be one of their gangsters. 2 Do you want you to give those self-created soul skills that he gave you? 3. Be independent all day long, and occasionally try to please. In the eyes of others, you will only show courtesy for nothing, and be either a traitor or a thief. The only Tang Sect martial arts he performed at that time was worth remembering. Think about the consequences. 4 You have hurt his Xiao Wu. Look at the consequences of the people who hurt his Xiao Wu in the whole book. Even if I really don't kill you for this, I won't be able to give you the fairy grass! So the conclusion is that not only is it impossible for you to give me grass jelly, but people like you who come into contact with purpose will definitely not have good results.
A huge trap for doujins, original heroine, your male and female protagonists are both original, why else do you want to read doujins?
This fic is a great read of "Douluo: Bright Fire"! If you are interested, you can go and take a look.
The more you look at it, the more boring it becomes. Since you don't like Shrek so much, you don't have to go. If you go, you're going against your will here, and you'll tolerate it there, so why bother?
Let's take a look at what colleagues write, the routine is too old.
There is no problem if the protagonist goes to form a group in the early stage. There is another opportunity in the early stage that the protagonist will not understand if he does not plan it. That is, Tang San comes to Shrek to sign up for the one hundred thousand year blue silver soul bone. . . .
Those in the comment section must have read too many old articles! I really believe in the feasibility of writing black articles! There is no shortage of brainless trolls in this era.
Regardless of whether he licks Tang San or opposes Tang San, he is blacklisted. The sight of Douluo makes him sick.
There is a book where the protagonist makes a protective suit to enter the poisonous circle. Ye Lingling is also good as the heroine. She is not afraid of getting hurt while exploring the veins.