Arcane Emperor

In fact, I quite like this type, but what can I say? There are two aspects of this book that make me feel awkward. One is the number issue, and the other is the names of the subordinates. The author's way of converting numbers and words makes me feel a bit out of control. For example, one person and one person, your team or eight of you. There are too many numbers in the expression, and the whole article is full of text. Do you feel that it is awkward when a number appears? Data and text are not well written. There are many novels of this type. This is the only novel that I feel a bit awkward about. Also, the name of the subordinates is "transforming people". This is very science fiction. I feel that as I write it, genetic warriors are coming out. This is a Western fantasy type. It is very annoying. I don't know if I still have the patience to read it. .

! Flood? It's better for you 23/

After listening to more than a dozen chapters carefully, I felt that the protagonist was really a saint. He gave rewards to soldiers, and then the soldiers lied about their military merits. I found out that there was no punishment at all except a little deduction of money. Even those who deserted and used teammates to block the gun were simply deprived of their freedom for a year. They did not have the majesty of a leader at all. I felt uncomfortable and ran away first.

The author does not understand the value of the Time Dragon at all. The ancient Time Dragon is more powerful than the great gods. It is a legend when it is born. It is stronger than ordinary true gods as an adult. It is invincible in the main material plane.

The title of the book and the synopsis do not match; the title of the book requires a calm personality in order to achieve success, but looking at the synopsis, the character of the protagonist makes people feel that he is happy and funny; it would be best if the synopsis could be changed.

I really can't help complaining about the currency system. The protagonist is very generous when spending money. The main character is a rich man. He sells things at cost price and buys things at a premium. The monthly income of the territory is 100,000, and he must spend 200,000 a month. Don't be too much. This does not include the benefits for the territorial guards. A person gets 500 gold coins. The hostile family. The Carlisle family has accumulated hundreds of years of accumulation. It only costs 20 gold coins to raise 200 elite cavalry. The carefully selected mounts only cost 20 gold coins. The equipment is estimated to be less than 100 gold coins, which is not as good as a soldier that the protagonist randomly shows up.

Sometimes I talk about Taiji, the goddess of fate, and sometimes I'm speechless about Tymora, the goddess of luck. And bloodline. The Western worldview has created a candle dragon bloodline, which keeps developing its territory and personal strength. It's a bunch of speechless people. 😒

This really means not treating money as money. Capturing a troll costs 50 gold coins, which is three times higher than other places. You are a poor man now and you still give such a good reward. One bar higher than the people of that era means mercy. Two bars higher than you are a madman. Three bars higher than you are SB. This is not how you attract people. I think it is very high if it is 50% higher than the market price. And your own soldiers every You need to be paid every month, and you still get money for not killing an enemy. The soldiers you train are not mercenaries, and they can be given good treatment, but they are not paid like this. I have read about 130 chapters. It was okay at the beginning, but it became worse as it went on. Now the author has written about 680 chapters, and there are only 71 comments. I don't know if there are not many people reading this book or the author has deleted most of the comments.

After reading the previous part, I finally understand why so few people have read this book. The protagonist's ideal is an out-of-date falsehood, relying on collective strength in the context of a great arcanist who has great power concentrated in an individual, or even a god? When a legendary arcanist encounters low-level mages and civilian soldiers, he will be crushed. What's more, there are so many great arcanists in the empire. How is the protagonist going to defeat these great arcanists with collective strength?

The logical rationality of this book is very poor, and the description of money makes prices very unreasonable. There is also a description of the blood moon. It is so powerful that there is no way to survive in the apocalyptic world. There are tens of millions of trolls in a single area, and there is no introduction to the size of this area. The worldview has collapsed. Just read it when you are short of books, but I don't recommend it.

The first chapter said that the protagonist was in NY129. At this time, Nether still had Karsus? Karsus was born in NY3163. I would like to ask where did Karsus in NY129 come from? -A person who is over 3,000 years old, right? Also, the protagonist's father is a Grand Arcanist? NY139 was still during the reign of the Witch-King Nesser, where did the great arcanist come from? The elves taught the Netherese people magic around NY58, and the Netherese Scroll was discovered in NY326. In NY364, Congenio, the first great arcanist of Netherese, was just born. His father was a great arcanist in NY139? It's a bit outrageous😅

This book has at least 1 million words. It keeps repeating how good the Gulf Territory is. They have plenty to eat, get paid for their work, are good to the mercenaries, and are good to the Territory citizens. If you see this kind of description later, just skip it, otherwise you will easily get sleepy.

You have to fight hard to control the level, fight with fireballs back and forth, Master Lan Tiao in DND plays like a warlock, the economic system is also very broken, a specially customized carriage that may not be able to withstand a fireball costs 9000 gold, how much does a higher-level spell cost?

It is judged that it was written by the studio or the author using AI. Currently, I have found a lot of foreshadowing. I have not filled out hundreds of pages, and many chapters have no beginning or end. One second I am fighting, and the next second I switch to another perspective. The change is very sudden and there is no transition. If you have no book to read or if you are bored, you can read it.

I always feel that the excitement is getting less and less, and I also feel that the protagonist always has the attitude of watching a show. During the battle, he always stands there and directs, saying it is for training troops, but the protagonist never takes action, which makes me feel lonely. I have been looking forward to the protagonist using modern memory to combine modern thermal weapons with magic, but after more than 2.5 Million words, there are still dwarf muskets, artillery, and crossbows, and battleships are still bombarding each other with solid bullets. Is this a magical world or medieval Europe? I've been looking forward to it for so long, but it just won't come out. I keep pushing for strength and progress. The plot moves here and there, and new maps are constantly opened, but the protagonist's strength has not improved much. Looking at the plot description, it is said that it is to grow quietly and not attract attention, but the plot is written about participating in the elf war, what else is hidden? But it still overwhelms the protagonist's strength. Describing the development speed of the Gulf Territory, gold coin revenue and expenditure can be written and ignored logic, why do you try so hard to develop by strength? I understand that I want to write more words, but it is already two million and a half million words, and it is still not enough. A local war can be written in tens of thousands of words. Boring shield defense and crossbow shooting, and cold weapon battles, do not seem interesting at all. It's okay to say that the protagonist doesn't take action in order to gain the power of destiny, but it should always make us readers feel better, right? As a result, every battle is a cold-weapon battle between territorial warriors. Even if I write more than two million words and the protagonist starts to take action, I just use the protagonist as a warrior, holding a knife to chop there. The protagonist is an arcanist. I want to see him use magic to overwhelm the enemies. I want to see the protagonist's invincible posture, I want to see a devastating battle, and I don't want to see the cold-weapon battle of those territorial warriors. Don't talk about group portraits, always describe the fighting process of individual soldiers. At least I, a reader, don't like to read it at all. Occasionally, it's okay to have such plots, but it's always annoying to write plots about individual people that are divorced from the description of the protagonist. It makes me want to waste money on subscribing. I feel that the most important thing is that, except for Yaya, the impression of other characters is very vague. It takes me a long time to know who this character is, so I don't care about the plot or story of these characters at all. But the author just likes to write like this, which makes me uncomfortable to read. In addition, I am listening to the book, not reading. I really want to scold you, the author. You have to add a long list of character attributes every few chapters, which makes me extremely annoyed. If I were reading, I would just flip through it. Even if I think you are trying to make up the word count, I won't mind as a support, but this situation is a kind of torture for me who listens to the book. I want to ask, how many readers will seriously study the attribute list of a certain character? Don't we all need to get a rough idea of ​​how strong he is and what special skills he has? Do you need to post them all? Can't you just write what was added and ignore those numerical attributes? If you really want to make up the word count, why not just write more plots about territorial life? We are still willing to read these if they are easy to write. The book is a good book, and it doesn't have any major bad points, but it is precisely because you like it that you have more expectations. When you don't respond to these expectations of our readers, our support will become less and less, and we will become less and less patient. We hope that the author can consider it a little and write better and better.

To build socialism in a place where the gap between individual knowledge and power is huge

I've never played the game, but I think the prices are very low.

Although it has been said many times, it still needs to be said: young literary authors are not worthy of writing novels

I don't know what I thought, but at the beginning I just played a simple time travel game (I don't know if it is a holographic game or not), but the result was like the rebirth of a strong man. Tianbeng started as steadily as an old dog, not panicking at all, and there was still time to shout. No one would persuade them to quit at the beginning.

The author's problem, the timeline is confusing. This is the most obvious proof

Wearing the skin of DND, selling monster-killing and upgrading novels,

The economic collapse is really ridiculous. Expenditures exceed incomes by many times! This is only one hundred chapters!

Let's not talk about other things like Eastern Empire. Just write about Western fantasy. You have to insert Eastern Empire.

Always talking about the floating city. I think the focus should be on interstellar battleships, and the floating city should be used as an interstellar flagship or mothership. You can't dispatch aerospace ships every time you fight, it will be too tiring, and too much energy, manpower and material resources will be consumed.

The writing is very good. For the sake of the monthly ticket, I will write more chapters! ! ! Be more refined ^O^

Cathay invited Kislev, the dwarves, the Knights of Baator and the imperial nobles to visit the Great Wall and drink and talk together. Chendan boasted: "With this Great Wall, we can defend Chaos from outside the country." Then he asked the other four people, do you have anything similar over there? Mrs. Kisri burst out laughing when she heard this, and said: "Resisting Chaos only requires courage, flesh and blood, and the motherland." The dwarf also laughed: "Resisting Chaos requires spirits, ores, and a battle ax in your hand." Knight Baatar said: "Resisting Chaos requires gods, knights, and old farmers who pay 90% of taxes!" The imperial people did not speak. So the Cathayans asked curiously: "So what do you use to resist Chaos?" The Imperials scratched their heads and stammered: "Steel, gunpowder, faith and loyalty..." Mrs. Kislev Ha He laughed and said: "Your steel is not as good as the dwarves, your gunpowder is not as good as Cathay, your faith is not as good as Baator, and your loyalty is not as good as the old farmers. The empire often has traitors. Even the main god Sigmar you believe in is a traitor who came from the Ulric religion and destroyed Ulric!" Everyone laughed. "There is no place for traitors in our empire!" Archaon, the furious Sigmar loyalist, overturned the table.

Give me another ticket

All modifications, how many attributes will be added after the modifications are completed?

Boss, please improve

It looks good, brothers. I watched the beginning and it feels good.