Swordsman and Swordsman

It's very well written, with a lot of words, but not many people read it, but it doesn't matter, I have a way to help you get more readers, Hewei wjwjwj990

I read the postscript first. I don't know why I feel a resonance. I have been writing it intermittently for many years. I don't know if it will be finished in the Year of the Monkey. But the author can persevere and I admire him greatly 😆😆

After reading it, the plot is a bit difficult, so I won't comment. The main thing is the names of the people in the writing. Can you pronounce it without reading it? Shi Yu is written as Qin Yue, and Bai Xilin is written as Qin Yuntian. It looks weird 🙂🙂

Is the protagonist a big fool? He is not even as good as the supporting character.

No wonder, if it's your first time to write a book, it's not your fault if you don't write well, it's your fault that you weren't prepared! The circle is small, and the protagonist has no opinion and emotional chaos, which is worse than the supporting role. The mind, heart, and perseverance are not as good as those of the supporting characters. If the supporting characters weren't written as bad guys by you, it might be better to swap the two. Typos are also a big no-no.