Xiaoao, Starting from Qingcheng

... To be honest, your first chapter is full of flaws... Let me tell you one by one. 1. Regarding the master-disciple relationship of the Qingcheng Sect, or the entire master-disciple relationship in Xiaoao, he is very strict. How can any disciple laugh at the master? That is called treason, bullying the master and destroying the ancestors, okay? 2. Regarding the naming of Qingcheng martial arts, although there are some things that Mr. Jin did not write, it can be seen that the naming is generally in line with the teachings of the sect (make sure it is doctrine and not morals, don't get confused). Huashan can be said to be a sect dominated by Confucianism, but the founder is Hao Datong of the Quanzhen Sect, so in China There are many Taoist things that can be seen in Shanwu Gong, such as Zixia Magic Kung Fu, Hunyuan Kung Fu, Yangwu Sword Technique in Sword Art, etc. But if you put it in Qingcheng, a place with strong Taoist ideas, why would it become Shadowless Kick? What the hell, I don't ask for being tall and lofty, cranes crow in the sky, clouds and dragons appear in the sky, but you shouldn't be so low. Judging by the name, it doesn't sound like a serious martial arts. 3. The following are some personal opinions. If the author agrees with it, use it. If you don't agree, just ignore it. Let's talk about Qingcheng Sect first. This should be called Songfeng Temple. This is just one of the many Taoist temples on Qingcheng Mountain. It is only because other Taoist temples are more focused on cultivating Taoism and do not participate in those battles that they are passed down. Qingcheng School, and then in terms of martial arts, the two most well-known ones are the Songfeng Sword Technique and the Heart-Destroying Palm Technique. One is a fragment of the Nine Yin Manual and the other is a sword technique that fits the scenery and artistic conception of Qingcheng Mountain. However, from a scientific perspective, since it is a set of martial arts, it must include sword moves, steps, body techniques and luck techniques. Similarly, the Heart-Destroying Palm also has a luck method and can be combined with some moves. Then I have a reasonable guess, if you take out the luck method of the Heart-Destroying Palm and combine it with fingering methods, can it become a heart-stimulating finger? And then add the steps and artistic conception of the sword movement of Songfeng Swordsmanship, will it become a more advanced fingering method? Of course, these are some of my personal imagination, but as a time traveler, may these ideas be less? Then why do you want to get Nao Shizi's evil sword technique now? Don't you first improve your own strength through these mental experiments, and then pass it on to your apprentices to improve your overall strength? When you are strong enough, it is up to you whether you want to use it or not? You just traveled through time without bringing it with you, right?

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I saw the author's self-recommendation from Shenzuo and took a look. I was addicted as soon as I read it. The author wrote about Yu Canghai without even reading the golden book? Don't let Lin Yuantu add to the drama, author, when did Lin Yuantu kill so many people in Qingcheng that they fell off their feet? Lin Yuantu and Chang Qingzi were still young when they fought. Pay attention to the timeline, brother. The serialized version clearly stated that the reason for going to the Fuwei Escort was that the Fuwei Escort personally sent someone to send a gift to ask Yu Canghai to send someone to the Fuwei Escort. The two parties concluded a cooperative alliance. The Qingcheng faction was one of the protective umbrellas of the Fuwei Escort, so they sent their son there. This also explains the BUG in the latter two versions. What does it mean to send your son to obtain the sword manual? The difficult thing about writing martial arts is that it accumulates. You have to be flexible and able to cite classics and understand where the different versions of the plot and settings come from. Otherwise, the author will not be able to figure out the timeline, add scenes arbitrarily, and then be found to be inconsistent with the original work at all. . Then the original book party reader -1, use a sentence from Six Monkeys, the changes are not nonsense. You use the Sunflower Universe Sutra, the basic foundation of the Zixia Magic Kung Fu, and the Sunflower Book of Perfection are all very good. The evil-fighting and Sunflower in the original serialization are originally the reverse training version of the Sunflower Kun Sutra. Yu Zhengnv Dongfang's practice of the Sunflower Book is actually the correct interpretation of the original serialized version, and it is not a fabrication. .

The protagonist has great martial arts skills. After ascending, he sees a beautiful woman. The first thing the beauty says is, Dalang, it's time to take medicine. The protagonist is dead.

It's too messy, author, you need a heroine like this to restrain you

When will the blacklist be released so that I can blacklist this author?

Read two chapters. . As a result, his apprentice's son laughed at him for being short. . . . . . Can't read. . . . .

I've read two chapters, "Poisonous," stop writing and go to the factory. In the beginning, both the apprentice and his son are making fun of their father's master's physical defects, so that they can express their close relationship?

Stop writing, go to the factory and screw the screws.

Looking at the introduction, a pig's foot less than five feet tall is clearly standing out among a group of nine-foot heroes hahahaha

After reading the first two chapters, it was extremely poisonous. The master and the apprentice were laughing and joking all day long. I guess the author has never read the original work. The second set is too serious.

The three golden chapters of this book have eliminated 60% of readers, bye bye

The Qingcheng sect is a well-known and upright sect, and Yu Canghai's martial arts must be good, otherwise he wouldn't be afraid of Yue Buqun! Many people speculate that this is not the case innately, and that it should be caused by misfires during practice or something like that! You can refer to Tianshan Tonglao!

If Qidian had a blacklist, I don't know how many authors would starve to death.

Good guy, in the original work Yu Canghai was about 1.41 Meters and 5.0 Meters tall, but now he is 1.1 Meters tall. The other men who appear on the show are only 9 feet tall at all times, and they are all 2.1 Meters tall. In ancient times, the etiquette of respect and inferiority was strict. When you are here, the apprentice dares to make fun of the master.

. . . . Just ask the dwarf eunuchs from all over the world. . .

I can't stand it. You don't understand martial arts or history. You're too lazy to talk about it. I won't watch it.

There are only two types of heights in the author's eyes. The others are all nine feet tall and close to 2.1 Meters tall. Only the male protagonist is five feet tall and less than 1.2 Meters tall.

The part of "No. 1 In the World" is written too casually. It also contains world map minerals. You think too well of others and expose the good things. You can control people's hearts. You have traveled through several lives and you don't have any tyrannical temperament at all.

As the saying goes, when a person is poor and short-tempered, his head is lowered. Although Yu Canghai is not more than five feet tall, he would make a person who is nine feet tall lower his head by half.

What kind of novel is this? ? ? ? You can still pass the pre-examination if you write randomly, but the starting point is getting more and more sloppy. . . . .

Obsessing with this setting is too poisonous

I hope the author can satisfy my hobbies and write the novels I like. Fans who are the same as me will like it. If you are not a fan like me, please ignore my articles and don't curse. Last time someone scolded me and I was banned for 3 months.

I'll try reading a few chapters of your big white picture first.

The ruler here is based on the ruler of the Qin Dynasty, and a nine-foot ruler is about 1.8 Meters. If converted to today's ruler, it would be 2.7 Meters.

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