The Longing for the Chef and Actor

It's really a mess.

Is this chapter confusing? Is there an editor in charge who will sort it out before posting it?

Don't blame me for being harsh, this book is like a running account😓 Happy New Year to the author, may you be well in the Year of the Rabbit

What's wrong? It's such a mess. I don't understand it.

I have been reading books for more than 20 years. From the time I started renting books to now, your book is the one that puzzles me the most. It is worse than a running account.

I'm drunk. I have read books for more than 20 years. From the time I first rented books to now, your book is the most popular one I have read.

The reception after the earthquake was a little weird, and I couldn't even check it up and down.

Why does it look so messy? What did you write?

I read this book in disarray and confusion. Didn't the author read it himself?

Chapter 8 What's going on? It's such a mess? ? ?

What is this mess? The last chapter was still supporting the disaster area, and the next chapter is directly going to the Mushroom House. What the hell is this writing?

If you change a person's name, many people will read it, but you will lose a lot of readers just with this name.

Not watery at all, very urgent. I feel like I've written a lot but I can't concentrate on reading.