The Immortal Fetus of the Holy Spirit Covering the Sky

That's it, he's just a fucking dog licker waiting for Ye Fan to rise, isn't it interesting? Isn't it interesting that nine out of ten books are all this way?

The Divine Phoenix is ​​Immortal, this is a Holy Spirit novel. Everything else is written very poorly. Let's write about the Holy Spirit in the novel At least don't lick Ye Fan.

Messy, self-righteous, the more I write, the crazier I get.

I give this novel a chance to win 1. 1:1. You write fantasy and return to reality as a dream. I'm afraid you didn't wake up. If you are writing a science fiction and supernatural short story, this ending is fine. How to write a novel like this? Who sees it? Who doesn't feel disgusted? Only those before the time travel were lovers? Where do you put the life-and-death friendships, love and family ties after time travel? Why did you poop it out as shit?

Is the author planning to write this in the end: It turns out that this is just a dream that a poor man had before he died in a car accident. As a result, all Taoist friends' Taoist hearts collapsed, their golden elixirs shattered, and blood flowed all over the sky.

The Holy Spirit became the Emperor without striking the Stone Emperor who killed himself, but he was forced to self-destruct and both died, which was also very impressive.

Why doesn't anyone write well about the Holy Spirit?

The idea is very good. It has nothing to do with writing it down. It's just a dream. You can't wake up on your own? Relying on the character in the dream to wake up? What is the meaning of this dream? Just work as a nanny for others, and then you can quit after completing the task?

Can you die without Mark? Without him, you can't go to the immortal realm and become an immortal? Even if the fw mentality gives you strength, you won't be able to become an Immortal Emperor in the end.

Recommend "The Divine Phoenix Immortal that Shrouds the Sky" is a holy book, don't lick the dog

The writing is too messy and I can't understand it.

I can only say that your writing is messy.

I didn't understand what was written in such a mess.

When the Holy Spirit becomes enlightened and is killed by the unsublimated Stone Emperor, it is also 666. Let me tell you about the overwhelming combat power. The quasi-nine great saints ≤ the quasi-nine great holy bodies = the quasi-nine great saint bodies = normal alternative enlightenment = normal self-destruction supreme (Xiaoyao's strongest self-destruction supreme does not count, the stone emperor is self-destruction supreme) Among them, it is considered the best) <Alternative Holy Body = Alternative Hegemonic Body ≤ Sublimation Supreme <Circuit-Breaking Holy Body (such as the Martian Holy Body) = Normal Great Emperor, the Holy Spirit's enlightened combat power is even stronger than that of the normal Great Emperor. What kind of rotten fish are you, the protagonist? It's something that lowers the lower limit of the Great Emperor's combat power. It's so poisonous.

What can I say? I feel like the first few chapters are just a running account and I have no motivation to read on.

Brothers, Chapter 30 takes off. Some of the setting prefaces written earlier can be ignored directly.