A Mortal's Story of Immortality: Extras

I think "Mortal" is a very good IP. It's a pity that Wangda didn't develop it deeply, but opened a new system. Take a look at Mr. Jin Yong's series of novels. They are all in the same system and have many connections. If Wangda opens a new system, it means giving up a large number of mortal fans. Why can't we always use the same system? For the same plot, don't always think about innovation. Innovation does not necessarily mean success. The Chong Xiu and Puppet that were abandoned in the middle and late stages of "Mortal" can be used to open two new books. As long as the characters and plots are well designed and related to mortals, just like the Jin Yong series of novels, they can attract a large number of mortal fans. In fact, the main thing to read in a book is the plot and story, and Wangda is very capable of telling stories and designing plots.

This author's book is not worth reading. When I reached more than 50 chapters, I commented in the comments that I suspected that the first 40 chapters were written by me, but the rest were not written by me. As a result, I mentioned that I had been banned for fifty years. I finally understood why there were so few bad reviews.

I may not read immortals, but I will definitely read fanfics written by mortals. I think Mortal is a good IP. Dayan Holy Land, Li Feiyu, Xiang Zhili, and many other aspects can be published as separate books. Or write about the mortal world millions of years from now. Or write about Han Li's family or descendants. Or apprentice. Just like Douluo Dalu, you can write a lot in one series. The mortal's cultivation system is deeply rooted in people's hearts. Eighty or ninety percent of the immortality novels on the market use levels based on mortals. There is really no need to bother reopening the book. There is no need to even have anything to do with Han Li. You can write about a stranger in the mortal world or the spiritual world, and someone will read it. It doesn't matter as long as they're in the same universe. Even if you don't practice immortality, just write about the life of an ordinary person doing business and practicing martial arts like his uncle.

There is no extra story, I only hope to rewrite the fairyland chapter 😭

The Immortal World Chapter is a mess, and the logic and IQ are worrying. Rewrite it! The Immortal World chapter ruins mortals!

Make up for the three hundred years when Han Li first entered the immortal world.

Stop writing immortals, fill in some of the pitfalls in the biography of mortals cultivating immortals, and then rewrite the chapter on the immortal world. Isn't this faster than earning money from immortals?

After the collapse of the fairy world, I am speechless again

Wangyu now only has his skin, and he is the same as before. He has gradually become like Jiangnan.

I, Yin Yue, didn't even mention the fairyland with more than four million words, which is outrageous 😭

Silver Moon, what's the ending of the crying soul😭😭😭

Isn't that right? Nowadays, there are many people watching it and paying to watch it. Don't you think it's too bad?🤔 In fact, I've only finished the cultivating immortality series as a mortal, and I've watched it three times. I really don't want to continue reading it, so I'm going to read the fanfic I think Wangda is a little shameless. I'm sorry, but I'm having a hard time with my friends Come back soon, we won't laugh at you unless you can't help it😡

The Wuhu platinum title is gone I don't know how much Tomato paid I feel like I made a lot of money. Haven't earned enough yet

Wangyu returns to his original work: Immortal is currently being serialized, please come and catch up.

1 Don't you mention whether the crying soul right in front of you is dead or alive? 2. Why didn't the golden boy mention it even if he was alive? 3 He went to great lengths to get Yuan Yao up, no matter what Yin Yue meant? Yin Yue, who has been helping you and following you for so long, is not as good as a woman who just lets you help. Wang Pang, you are so happy to watch people take a bath, right?

Damn it, why is Wangyu's platinum gone?

Don't worry about your immortal, hurry up and finish Li Feiyu

Didn't any of Han Laomo's apprentices ascend? None of the apprentices in the human world or the spirit world ascended. I really want to see what happened to the apprentices after they ascended, and then they met the story of Han Laomo, the master.

Chapter of Fairyland: Give me back my silver moon~~

Mortal is really good-looking, the characters are cautious, wise and realistic, the content is rigorous, the concept is clever, and the plot is compact. I stayed up late to watch it and wanted to follow it. It's a pity that I can't keep up with the next few books even if I bite the bullet. Similar in form but absent in spirit

Do you think it's possible to film a spiritual chapter in a mortal anime? As a book fan, I feel that the animation production is particularly good, and the adaptation is also very good, surpassing the original work.

What should I do with the animation of the Immortal World chapter? 😡😡😡

I really can't understand this Li Feiyu! This was an inconspicuous supporting character in the human world. Han Li didn't care much about him at all back then. Han Li never went to see him before he passed away. As a result, the author deliberately set aside a lot of close-ups in the finale to describe Li Feiyu's reincarnation and ascension, making the two of them seem to be close friends in life and death. This time, he also added an extra chapter Then the fairyland chapter of the old friend who had been with Han Li for thousands of years in the spiritual world was completely marginalized. Silver Moon and Bingfeng, who shared hardships along the way, were directly forgotten by the author. A lot of foreshadowing was not recycled, and the extra chapter did not make up for it. I was speechless.

The big dreamer couldn't stand it anymore. This is not Bai Jin's writing style and conception. It should not have been written by me.

Why is there no directory?

Self-promotion

I have published a fan novel on Qidian, "The Master of the Thunder Array". I welcome corrections and I hope it will suit your taste. There are currently more than 20,000 words

The character design fits the original work, not OOC! It's more female-oriented and has a slower rhythm in the early stages. There are still investment quotas, and fellow Taoists are welcome to invest and follow up. A must-read!

Da Luo advanced quickly to Dao Ancestor! It's not enough. The setting in the opening chapter where Han Li was beaten by Fang Pan and lost his memory for three hundred years was really good!