Martial Arts Myth: a Perfect Way to Start

... They are so ridiculous that they are such an embarrassing group. They know clearly that outsiders are unreliable, yet they deliberately irritate them, and then scream, why don't they shed some blood and tears? 😰 Deleted, poisonous

In order to make Pig's trotters become a lonely man, it's a trick that has been used for many years, but it's still used. Pig's trotters become stronger, which is useless. Even if they chase after them and save Xiaohua, why are they chasing after them? Going to a funeral.

Here I am again, with the last extravagant hope of becoming a benevolent person if I don't succeed, I set a goal and try to write five million words: The Taoist Witness, and the post will be the proof!

What kind of ridiculous plot is this? Since you want to write from the humble beginning, then you still want to have it all. Even though you know it's time to moisten, you still want to protect a wretched old man. Laughed. In the end, all your so-called family members died?       ，，，， This is so cool, but you still want to tell him that everything is fine, but we need to moisturize. 🥵What a beast.

Because Chapter 21 of the gathering to persuade people to quit The plot is poisonous, the relationship is poisonous Either let the people around the protagonist be safe Or let the protagonist go out of his way As a result, you wrote about Wang Dachui's brotherly relationship for more than ten years, and Chapter 21 wrote about his whole family to death There is also digging in the front. I wrote several chapters, going to a brothel to dig out, eating to dig out, and then putting it in fried chicken. Who is the author trying to disgust? As for the brothel, the protagonist is as impulsive as if he has never seen a woman before. When he comes to this area, who would be impulsive when passing by a ktv foot washing shop?

The mother and sister of Sledgehammer died, and Sledgehammer was taken away. I saw that this is really poisonous. It's not that he can't die, but it's completely meaningless. There is no turning point for the protagonist. I'm just disgusting readers.

Before Chapter 20, it had always felt natural, including getting along with my brothers and practicing. Until his brother was taken away and his brother's sister and mother were killed. At this point, he really couldn't stand it any longer. It was quite smooth at first, but now it feels very deliberate. The description of the protagonist's reaction to this incident also seems very unclear. If the front paving is good enough. So it's not unacceptable for this kind of incident to happen. The problem is that after writing about ten chapters, the emotional lines of several people are not well laid out. Then the main character is heartbroken It really makes me dream back to ten years ago.

Readers of online novels don't accept this trick, and only express their sorrows in order to compose poems. The reason why predecessors wrote well is not because they wrote about so-and-so who died. What the predecessors wrote about was human nature, reality, and tragedy. What did you write? Do the emotions between people resonate? Have you written about family affection? Did you write that the protagonist's efforts are beyond help? Have you written about society's crushing of individuals? No, you just wrote about an ordinary person who died in the general trend, and you know that readers don't want to read it, but you think it looks good. You write too much and you write too little. There is no convincing at all. Do you think readers will think that the protagonist's transformation is natural? Laughing, modern people's accumulation of philosophy of human nature has completely crushed the ancient people. In the eyes of readers, this awareness is simply superfluous. Otherwise, why would you give the protagonist a golden finger? Why are you still writing a book at Qidian?

What you need to pay attention to when reading this book is that the author likes to feed you poison.

After reading more than twenty chapters, I gave up. First of all, the plot arrangement is not good, and the affairs of the Sledgehammer family are pulled back and forth. As readers, we don't care at all about the life or death of a minor supporting character's family, and the conflict is so poorly arranged. Secondly, the writing is not that good either. It is a novel with dialogues. It keeps talking and talking. It is as talkative as a great teacher. He can say a few words about anything. Two or three characters, three or four characters are just one comma. It shows that the author lacks the ability to write long sentences. The plot of a book is not good, and the writing style is not good either. If the Golden Finger article is not enjoyable, what can it be worth seeing?

A pig? ? 3,000 Taels? ? The protagonist only earns 2 taels per month, and you, the price of things, were written by a primary school student, right? ?

I just read the second chapter and I started to suppress the protagonist👍. You are a great author. You can just be a eunuch. Stop writing. It's too poisonous.

The strong primary school students are so scary 🙏

This is still a level 5 author. Are the readers on this platform stupid, or did you buy it with your account?

This is a start that will scare readers away without any clues. Three golden chapters.

I've seen people looking for parents, and I've seen people looking for wives. It was the first time I saw a heartbreaking cry for the neighbor next door brother.

What is the early stage, middle stage, and late stage peak and perfection? It's disgusting.

My mother, I have never seen such a vicious plot before, so I quit.

The plot between Wang Dachui's mother and sister is really poisonous. Not to mention that they left early and were dragged to death. There was no portrayal of the mother and daughter and the interaction between the protagonists, and then they were so sensationalized after they died. Where did the resonance come from? If you find it touching, readers will just say it's ridiculous and so damn good. If you add two chapters with the happy plot of Wang Dachui and his family, it won't make the death of mother and daughter so embarrassing. One piece of mouse droppings spoils the whole pot of porridge.

He was directly poisoned to death by Wang Dachui and his family.

What does the editor of Qidian do? Why publish this kind of book? 200,000 Copies completed!

I'm here again, with the last extravagant hope of becoming a benevolent person if I don't succeed, trying to write five million words: The Taoist Witness, and the post is a proof!

The content of the book is okay, but, e, the conflict is a bit too intense. It was quite enjoyable to read it in one go. It felt a bit like watching previous TV series. Come on💪

The protagonist has an aura of wisdom. He can obviously jump out of Jiangjiabao, watch the fire from the other side, and reap the benefits, but he has to jump in and take action himself, which is poisonous

I saw the latest chapter in a row, it's not bad, keep it up, I will definitely subscribe when it is released

Why does this character's dialogue look like it was written by a newbie ten years ago?

Don't talk about whether your perfection method is the best in the world. If it is not the top in this world, it is not called the perfection method. It is even said that a breath and a fist full of magic can last a lifetime. The premise is that in this world, if defense and the like cannot kill the protagonist until the world is destroyed.

If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write them. Who is disgusting?

Well, it's a rare fairy grass. As soon as I discovered it today, I hurriedly read it in one go. Make a comment here. I hope the author can see it and improve it. Also hoping to attract other readers who come in a little bit. 1. Advantages. The biggest advantage of this book is about martial arts innovation. In my opinion, it can be said to be the starting point, which is unprecedented so far. Chapter 49, the protagonist creates his own martial arts. The original martial art is Thousand Waves - use all your strength on the first sword. Then the 234th knife stacks up to 1.5 Times each time. After the improvement is. The first knife has only 70% power. Then overlay them one after another. From here I can see that the author put his heart into it. After all, according to reality. It's easy to swing the knife with full force. But after swinging the sword with all your strength, it is not easy to control. Chapter 60. I have seen the "shaving" trick a lot in various light novels and fanfics. But only in this book did I see its further explanation and application. "Shaving" means stomping in place quickly. In the novel, doing this would only create a big hole. If you think about it carefully, this method of stamping your feet quickly in place is not advisable. But the protagonist (the author) thought that this was actually using the power of the counter-shock to transmit his own power to the earth, and then resonate with the returning power. After all, it happened in reality. Dozens of people walked on the bridge and then it collapsed. In addition, the book is logically self-consistent and has no poisonous points. The protagonist's IQ is online. The author can also wipe it without turning it yellow. There are both serious and improper ones. And all of you who like to read serious or non-serious books can come and take a look. 2. Disadvantages. In chronological order, that is, the order of chapters in the novel. Point 1. The protagonist has no explanation at all before he turns 18. In other words, too little was explained. After all, it was mentioned in Chapter 1 at the beginning that the protagonist was born through pregnancy. It is equivalent to having adult consciousness as a child. What's more, as a modern person, the protagonist traveled to ancient times, how could he not have any ideas? I think this aspect should be mentioned more. Point 2. Chapter 1 mentioned that when the protagonist did not awaken the system before the age of 18, he was already in the middle stage of the body-building mirror. And he wasn't satisfied yet. Think this is not enough. Just a little genius. It's equivalent to being number one in a small town in reality, but you can only take two exams in the future. He also said that he would climb to the top of martial arts in the future. I still think it's a bit unreasonable here. For example, before the awakening system existed, the protagonist needed talent but not talent, and background but not background. How come you have the dream of reaching the top of martial arts? Point 3. The emotional line, or the heroine. Push forward more than ten chapters from the 76 chapters that have been updated so far. The protagonist already has three confidantes. Although they haven't had a relationship yet, there is a high probability that this trend will continue. Too fast. If it's a cool article, it doesn't matter. But I personally hope that the author can write more carefully. Rather than simply having fun for the sake of having fun. Point 4. Future development. Let's break it into two points. The first point is the power system. In Chapter 75, the protagonist is already able to cultivate to the Heaven Realm and kill several Xiantian Realm masters at once. Although the protagonist's Qi Sea has reached an unprecedented 100 feet. Much stronger than those ordinary people who are only four or five feet tall. But after all, there are still some signs of instability in the power system. Point 2. In my opinion, the power of an individual is not as great as that of the collective. It is right for the protagonist to concentrate on martial arts. But development forces are also indispensable. Of course this is not a drawback. It's just that I personally prefer hegemony articles, and I hope the author can write about them in the future. Finally. The above are just some of my thoughts. There may be inaccuracies or inadequacies. I hope readers can understand.  🙂🙂🙂🙂

Is that it?