Hogwarts Savior

All I can say is that this novel is very good-looking, with a unique and novel subject matter, and the author's writing style is also very good. It is not like most other novels of the same type, which have disgusting values ​​​​and the same process over and over again. It is good-looking and at the same time makes this work original, not empty and unable to delve into the plot. It's beautiful, I really recommend watching it! ps. It is recommended that the author change the name or introduction. I clicked on the novel because I didn't quite understand what the introduction was supposed to express, and I found out that this novel is very interesting. In fact, only boys are beaten, not boys, which sounds a bit strange to read, but it doesn't hinder it, it's just my personal opinion. Come on! :⁠P

I have continued to read it. The writing is very good. The style of this article is very different. It breaks the stereotype of all Harry Potter fans. The subject matter and style are novel. It feels like a book when reading. The writing is sharp. The momentum created is so exciting, the black line, you made me sleepless when I saw the update in the middle of the night, you know. You probably learned this fragment from Qidian. When I saw the introduction to The Two Saviors at the beginning, I was a bit dissuaded. I accidentally turned into a thunderbolt, but I clicked in because there was no book to read. At the beginning, the protagonist acted bravely, and seeing that he was a foreigner, it was a bit interesting, and it had a bit of that flavor. The processing of the Dursleys and others is a bit deliberate, but it is very touching. I thought it was just like fighting the boss with the old man. The plot changes very decisively later, breaking the inherent routine. Other books can only cover two or three chapters. I like this kind of condensed plot. It is overwhelming. Keep this style and you can look forward to it. I especially want to say that the author is a bit cunning. Good intentions are easy to get into trouble, but when you put life on the other side of the scale, the writing style becomes serious. You really dare to write... I admire you.

Very good The large span of the setting will cause discomfort in the first dozen chapters. But fortunately, the author's writing power is sufficient, and the ideological core and plot development of the article are obviously controlled by the author. It is a rare hp writer who writes very well. The words "people" or "fans" are not very accurate. It's more like the author's mind world and the celestial sphere of the HP world intersect. Kable. There is too little content as of November 22, so I don't recommend following it. Ps I suggest the author to swipe his paws faster.

It's great. It makes me feel like my classmates were Voldemort.

The book is a good book, but there are still so few people reading it

This reading is worrying, I feel like it will cut off 😭

Author, really don't try to change the title of the book? To be honest, if it weren't for the shortage of books, I really wouldn't have clicked in. The title of savior. The appeal is too low. The adjective "savior" refers to too broad a scope, and is there a savior in Harry Potter? It is easy to think of whether the protagonist wants to compete with Harry Potter, etc. The theme of this book is closer to the elders' tolerance and teaching of the younger ones, and mutual growth. This is not reflected in the introduction. When I first saw the introduction as a passerby, I thought it was the protagonist who came to this world and brought another darkness, rather than the growth of darkness that brought the protagonist the light. Well, the author compares the protagonist to moonlight in the book. You can write it as the sun under the moonlight or something like that.

You can read it after the author has finished writing. There are too many commas. Many times, I suddenly pause while reading and feel uncomfortable😭. Maybe my reading habits are different.

Why is it not updated? The author has also joined the new crown positive army?

Harry opened his eyes and jumped up from the bed excitedly. Today was his birthday. It was a day he had never looked forward to. It became wonderful because he had family, friends and elders who loved him. Will everyone give me a gift? Harry thought anxiously. No one had ever cared about his birthday when he was at the Dursleys. Will anyone care now? Harry ran out of the room and bumped into Antalis. Before Antalis could speak, Harry said in an excited and cautious voice: "Anita, today..." Antalis laughed and felt his heart aching. He hugged Harry tenderly. "Happy birthday, Harry." Seeing Harry's eyes suddenly light up, with happiness written all over his face, Antalis couldn't help but feel lucky. Fortunately, he, Remus and Hermione resolutely rejected everyone's suggestion of giving Harry a birthday surprise. _____________ "How about we prepare a birthday surprise for Harry!" Sirius said enthusiastically, "We can pretend to forget Harry's birthday, then prepare a birthday party, then call him over, and finally say 'Happy' birthday! '..." "No! ! !" Two voices sounded at the same time. Antalis glanced at Hermione and said firmly: "This is a terrible idea. Harry is very sensitive. It will make him sad if we pretend to forget his birthday. We should let Harry spend his birthday happily." During this period, Ron tried to express his opinions, but was ruthlessly suppressed by Hermione. He could only mutter in a low voice: "Is Harry that sensitive? He is not a girl." The next second, Hermione's sharp eyes pierced all his incomprehension back to his stomach. Sirius also expressed his dissatisfaction on the opposite side, and Remus suppressed his dissatisfaction with a smile: "Sirius, Harry is not James. He will not like this kind of surprise. We should be more frank. Or should Sirius only say happy birthday through pranks?" In the case of 3 to 2, anything else is obviously useless, and birthdays should indeed be celebrated happily. It should be sweet so that when Harry thinks of his birthday in the future, he will be happy and happy today, instead of the sad and envious birthdays of more than ten years ago. It should be sweeter than the bitterness of the past, and it should be sweeter than Dudley's birthday. Everyone sincerely hopes that Harry will be able to carry candy with him every day and be safe and happy. ______________ Antalis took Harry downstairs and looked at Harry surrounded by everyone in the center. His smile was more vibrant than the morning sun, like he was soaking in a sugar bowl. He also felt extremely happy. He stood with everyone, the sunshine was gentle, as if dyeing the world into a dream, beautiful and eternal. ______________ Harry stood at the door and asked seriously and pleasantly: "Really, Anita? I will have a big surprise at night?" Antalis said helplessly but connivingly: "Of course, Harry, we need to arrange it now, and you will see it at night." Harry reluctantly turned around and left, walked a few steps, and turned back to ask Antalis. Antalis answered seriously over and over again, watching Harry leave. ______________ Harry had been looking forward to it all day long, and finally waited for Antalis to pick him up. Harry thought excitedly and uneasily, what would be the surprise? What should I do if I don't like everyone's surprise or gift? What should I do? He suddenly felt Antalis let go of his hand. He quickly pulled himself out of his thoughts and looked at Antalis doubtfully: "Anita?" Antalis smiled at him comfortingly and said, "Harry, go in, don't worry, you just need to be responsible and happy." Harry looked at the door, then looked at Antalis, took a deep breath, opened the door and walked in. The yard has changed a lot. Gentle colored lights are hanging in the air, giving the whole yard a dreamy color. The winding paths lead to nowhere. The wooden signs at the intersections have words written on them, and they are still changing colors and shapes mischievously. Harry stepped forward to identify them, and the words stopped obediently and gave him a heart sign. Harry laughed, feeling sweet in his heart. He walked along the path and saw many gifts. On the wooden sign, he also specifically marked the person who sent it and the birthday wishes for him. When he touched it, the gift flew up, drew a heart crookedly, and then flew left and right into the house. He even saw Ron's gift almost hit the wall. Harry saw the twins. Their two gifts performed a prank, then grew wings and flew into the house. He saw Luna's gift, as she was immersed in her own world, drew a heart that was not very visible, and floated into the house. Seeing Ginny's gift, her gift kept shaking, Harry worriedly stretched out his hand to help it, but it shook even more, drew a three-dimensional heart, and then moved up and down into the house. He even saw Draco's, whose gift was as noble as his master's, with his imperfect heart and perfect etiquette. Everything about Hermione's gifts was perfect. He admired Hermione's mastery of magic. She was worthy of being number one in her grade. Antalis surrounded Harry with his gift, and even kissed Harry. Finally after looking at all the gifts, the sky turned from dim light to the faint glow of the moon. Harry looked at the door, his heart pounding. He took a deep breath, stabilized his trembling hands, and opened the door. The light poured in and rolled him into a warm embrace. The colorful ribbons swirled and fell. The huge cheers and laughter broke through the barrier of the night, and the blessing sounded: HAPPY BIRTHDAY! ! ! HARRY! ! ! 11111111111111111111111111111111111111 Happy birthday to you, Harry. I wish you peace and joy, a bright future, and eternal happiness. I wish the people you love and the people who love you will always be by your side. Happy birthday, Harry❤️

Who is Voldemort in Chapter 7? He should be a remnant soul floating in Albania now