Rebirth in the Fiery Years, Let the Passion Burn

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Memory of the times

Well written and full of sense of the times, it reminded me of my grandfather telling me about his time in childhood.

The first few chapters have the flavor of a chronology, but you can't read it when you move to the Siheyuan. Moreover, the author even got it wrong about whose wife Yu Li is. Yu Li is Yan Jiecheng's wife, not Yan Jiefang's. Please, if you have watched the TV series before writing, you can just write a chronology directly. Your previous chapters of chronology are very good.

The beginning of the story is pretty good, but as soon as you enter the courtyard, something feels wrong. I feel like it might be better if I write about Siheyuan.

Ha tui😤 At that time, who dared to scold rural people in front of others? What the hell did you write?

Travelers have a system. The elders in the family are the big leaders. If you go to the courtyard to be a loser and lick the dog, you are a loser. You can just play Darkness.

Most authors of the Siheyuan fandom don't actually know that the vast majority of readers actually don't like the plot of the Siheyuan. So the copy of Siheyuan is like an old lady's foot-binding cloth, which is long and "watery" and has a strong smell.

It's okay, but I feel like it's going to be overwhelming. If you don't rely on the system in the early stage, you don't have to write the system. In fact, everyone suffers in that environment. If you don't give the protagonist something, you can't play.

Congratulations on opening the book, the six claws will be on fire.

It's Qin Huairu again, he was almost fucked to death by the time traveler. Author, can you have your own writing style? Don't bite the courtyard! Write a chronicle!

When writing a book about the Siheyuan, just paint the skin, please don't carve it into the bones.

Zhenyouqian

When the author writes about Qinman Siheyuan, many people will definitely abandon the book.

This book was a very good period novel before I entered the Siheyuan. Once I entered the Siheyuan, it was written in such a way that people would be bullied in various ways. The way to fight back was to use inner drama to put a hat on the bully. Pure Thirteen Points

In those days, wasn't pursuing such reforms a way to seek death?

I don't need a backer, I'll be slapped in the face and abused by others every day

Is the plot of Siheyuan nonsense? The author wanted to write a plot that was different from others, so he changed the characters here and there. That makes no sense.

Come visit me with your work "The Witcher Begins in America" ​​and thank you! Added to favorites, great imagination, and the author's writing style is very good.