One Person's Game World

How should I put it? You can't find such pure martial arts in the martial arts category. Martial arts are all occupied by the infinite heavens and humans 🙂

Az, I currently don't see the use of writing about the protagonist traveling through online games. There is no advantage of being familiar with the plot, and there is no writing about the fourth natural disaster. On the contrary, it feels out of place. It would be better to directly write about the hero traveling from modern times to the world of martial arts. I feel that this will be better and more in line with your Renaissance style. Also, I can't see what's cool about it. I wrote a lot about it in the beginning, but I didn't write about the psychological process of the protagonist's journey into this world. I just outlined the background of the setting, and I didn't write about how the protagonist accepted the setting. Instead, it was like the protagonist's life from childhood to adulthood.

If you write this way of fighting, you will be drained sooner or later.

The writing is good, but it feels a bit fragmented. The writing has a bit of a martial arts style at the beginning, but once I started using it, I felt like I was watching a puppet show.

The writing, the plot is online, it is worth watching, the fairy grass seedlings.

⚆_⚆? Blizzard and NetEase have broken down, will all national servers be suspended? I lost my account and even bought OOW twice, although I haven't played much since then. But... Can I get my money back? Also, can I still play RPGs on the official battle platform?

I have just finished reading the latest chapter. This book has many advantages, such as smooth action logic, three-dimensional character creation, and reasonable plot arrangement. Although the fighting description has a thunderbolt style, the author's writing style is good and he has integrated this style into the book. As long as the current level is maintained, it will definitely have the potential to become a god in the martial arts area.                                                                    Then I will talk about the shortcomings that I think. Because the author wanted to write every character well, the result was that he could only refine the plot in various ways, and write independent chapters for different characters to enrich the character images and behavioral logic, which made the plot very bloated. An analogy is that the first plot point begins in Chapter 8, and the decisive battle begins in Chapter 70, which means that the chapters used for the early stage are 62 chapters, and then the climax of the plot arrives. Here, 2 chapters are used to write the decisive battle. Preparation, the official climax begins in Chapter 73, and the plot ends in Chapter 144. The chapters used to describe the climax are 71 chapters, which is more than the chapters used for preliminary preparation. There are limits to novels... Each character needs to be written in great detail. It is a script for filming rather than a novel. Even a TV series cannot say that it can take care of everyone. The protagonist is the protagonist, the supporting role is the supporting role, and the passers-by are passers-by. I hope the author can make good choices and streamline the chapters to make the whole book smoother.                                                                   Finally, let me talk about the personal character of the protagonist who is not very flattering. He is a romantic person who will use all kinds of methods to attract girls when he sees them, and then kill them or bury them. In the old days, there may not be any problem. Lu Xiaofeng is like this, but now it is 2023, and this character is still established. The typical example is that women are not regarded as human beings. All kinds of heroines are tools to carve out romantic characters. Due to the changes in the thinking of the times, the protagonist has become a scumbag in private ethics and a giant in public ethics. It seems a bit awkward, but maybe many people like this kind of person.

The writing is quite good, it shouldn't be a game, it should be a fantasy fantasy. There is no traffic, and the name cannot be deceived. It is recommended to change the name or change the district. Or to draw some attention, this book is very similar to the New Jin Yong. Come on, come on, come on.

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง I like this writing style so much, the original plot is also very good, Jin Gudu is badly written

Not very popular, but the work is pretty good

The plot, characters, and fighting of this work are pretty good. It's a pity that the character of the main character makes me sick. I believe this book will be popular, and I wish the author will become a god soon.