The Moon Magician's Journey to Survive

The writing style and vocabulary tend to be as complex as Japanese light novels. The multiple modifications and jumping descriptions of an entity or object seem even more obscure than orthodox Japanese. Although I haven't read Mushroom's early Shaping Moon series, I have also read the works of "El-Melloi Incident Book", "Strange Forgery", "Cang Yin" and "The Little Prince". If the description of beauty in the Twin Towers in El-Melloi's Incident Book is abstract enough, I can understand the meaning of the expression after reading that description over and over again. This book is really more abstract. The description of Aoko Aozaki's semen explosion in the amusement park is like how to describe it here and how to describe it in the next paragraph, but there is no connection in the middle. Reading the comments, it is said to be "a hard-to-gnaw compressed cookie." The shortcomings are these shortcomings, but there are still advantages. At least when you read this book, you will really feel the abstraction and style of the descriptions of those who are reading Mushrooms. The author is also very strict in the setting. Whether it is the existence of characters or magic spirits, it can be blended with the characters that appear in other works to serve the future plot. In the end, this is all my personal subjective opinion. I am just expounding my point of view. You also have yours. It is normal to say good things and bad things. If someone thinks it is not good or what I said is wrong, then you are right.

I feel it is well written, much better than others.

Happy, Mary is not the alien god but the alien god. The alien god is Chaldeas. Fujimaru Ritsuka is a drifter of the correct history, which means that he is not a native of the fgo world. So what is the fgo world? It is most likely a strange zone.

I don't know why, but it tastes like biscuits and is difficult to bite.

The author can copy the ritual of eternal destruction and use Avalon as the holy relic, hehe

There is a lot of foreshadowing in the beginning of "Magician Night", and it seems a bit uncomfortable to watch the jokes that are quite tired and far different from the tone. The originally urgent protagonist somehow has no pressure at all and plays a lot of house in school.

I feel like I haven't watched much of the plot, but a lot of narration…

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The protagonist is also too rare. There are several episodes where the protagonist never appears.

I don't want a eunuch (´△｀)

The writing is very good, but the word order is reversed, which makes it uncomfortable to read. You have to pause and think about it to understand a sentence, which greatly affects the viewing experience.

I understand, the protagonist is Mahou Soju, and his ability is to use dream summons to transform into a heroic spirit When will the author make character cards, I will put the label of Mahou Soju on it

It's very tiring to watch. It's like reading a first-person novel. There are too many explanations, too watery, and I'm jumping to find the plot.

Are these sparse sentence fragments and word order also translated from Japanese online texts?

Is it my problem or is it the same for everyone else? Why does it feel a bit confusing? I don't have enough brains when I look at it. I feel confused when I look at it. The more I look at it, the more strange it becomes. I understand the meaning when I read it alone, but when I read it together, it feels very confusing and I don't understand it. Also, is the author a water number or something? I keep calling the protagonist a white-haired magician, and all of a sudden Carol, just for a few more words for water? ? ? ? ?

Can anyone recommend other Xingyue fics that I can read?

It does have the flavor of a light novel. I don't know if the author intentionally omitted the subject to create this flavor or if he has read too many light novels and didn't feel like writing it like this.

I would like to ask if the author is a complete novice?

The plot direction is pretty good, but the writing has a big problem. It makes my head hurt when I read it. It's a pity.

It's been a year and a half, no more waiting, delete the book