Xiao Liang Emperor Industry

I would like to make a comment. In the article, please make a distinction between the protagonist's inner thoughts and his spoken words. It sounds a bit awkward to read now.

The author's writing style is very good, but his thinking is a bit off-topic. For example, Li Dongyang said something on page 2, and the protagonist did not answer this sentence until page 7. As a result, the reader completely forgot what Li Dongyang said and had to go back and read what he said. This caused a bad effect: the information conveyed by the author was discontinuous, and the information received by the reader was very confusing. The three golden chapters are very important. They determine the life and death of web articles to a large extent. The average reader does not have the time or patience to comb through and taste the content of the article. Once he feels that the online article is a bit confusing, he will quit the next one, so the author should pay attention to it. I wish the book will get better results!

Is this the Northern and Southern Dynasty Liang? Isn't the founding monarch Xiao Yan? Is this a fictional article?

I can't tell the difference between what I'm thinking and what I'm saying. Once I read it too fast, I'll get confused.

There has been no update for a month. Is it a eunuch?

King Nankang was originally the title of Xiao Yan's fourth son Xiao Ji, why was he given to the ninth son?

Xiao Yan was Liang Gaozu, and Taizu posthumously granted the title to his father Xiao Shunzhi.

Prince Zhaoming Xiao Tong expressed his disapproval. Isn't there his "Selected Works of Zhaoming"? For Tao Yuanming to be where he is today, Prince Zhaoming and his "Selected Works of Zhaoming" are indispensable!

Does this book have a space general?

Why doesn't Baidu have Xiao Shaoyu? Added by the author?

Why isn't it on the shelves yet? 😰

Is this an imaginary way to add martial arts elements?

The author's writing style is delicate, but he doesn't tell the story well. In the first ten chapters, the protagonist appears very rarely, and there is a lot of dialogue between other people. And after writing for a long time, it's actually not a big deal, it's just water. And the kind of people who like to make shocking remarks, but end up losing baggage that they can't pick up. Writing an event, a relatively difficult task is given to the protagonist, and the protagonist pretends to be resourceful and resourceful. Naturally, I am curious to see how the protagonist solves the problem. As a result, after ten chapters, the protagonist still has nothing to do. He is trapped by the villain and led by the villain... All the martial arts masters have appeared to fight and transformed into martial arts novels, but the protagonist still has no performance... It's hard to comment... Abandoned, abandoned.

Two fans, brother, you must be a eunuch 👍