Man Becomes a Saint While Wearing a Vest on Death Row

Books were still in their infancy, and I have followed them till now. The part about changing reality is really amazing, but there are actually some failures later on. I think the biggest problem is that there are too many settings and it doesn't look organized and fun enough. So far, there are Cthulhu, group running, character creation, game upgrades, two different vests (plus three protagonists), the protagonist's own power, court battles, martial arts, original upgrade systems, and sequences... The problem is that there are too many. My understanding is not bad, but I already feel that I can't remember it clearly. Especially after the reality is changed, the protagonist is the only constant element, and the reader's sense of involvement suddenly decreases. For example, I liked the original protagonist's god-sister, but if the god-sister changed in reality and her memory was different, I might not like it. For example, if I liked the good character in the previous episode, I still want the good character to appear, and I also don't like the scenes in which the evil character appears, so I just want to skip them. Everyone follows the plot of the novel, and the interactions between the previous characters and the deepening of emotions are also highlights. But too many vests mean that readers already know the character of the supporting character, but the protagonist has to get to know him again. When the supporting character faces this different protagonist and expresses himself once... He will feel tempted to skip the plot because there is no freshness. My personal suggestion is to cut off part of the settings, or simplify them. All abilities are different branches of the same trunk. Every time the reality is changed, the supporting character's attitude towards the protagonist should change with the change of memory, which can be seen at a glance, and use this change to reveal part of the supporting character's settings, maintaining a sense of freshness and making the supporting character more three-dimensional. Personal opinion, we will see you again when the children's vest comes off the production line...

Great book. I haven't seen such an interesting book in a long time. I saw that the three of them had just published a cannibal painting. Other books I read on weekdays are like eating fast food, standardized, and the taste is okay, but I forget about it after eating it This book is like eating in a private restaurant, with unique taste and unstable quality control of the dishes, but if you chew it carefully, you will have some aftertaste However, there are still some small flaws. For example, sometimes the dialogue of the characters is stiff and the background of the story is not clear. , This is a macroscopic shortcoming Secondly, I don't know if it is a bug or a pitfall. The protagonist explains that he has time traveled and integrated into his own world at the beginning, but when he enters the cannibal painting, he has a double standard. In fact, he can evade the important point at the beginning and say that Zheng Xiu is just the richest man, and then reveal his identity as a time traveler at the end of the novel. Isn't this Super O. Henry!

I am still optimistic about this book, but I just need to read it slowly. If I read it too quickly, the plot will be a bit confusing.

Immersive simulator + board game I hope there will be more meat pigeon elements, which will make me feel better later (the index value will expand and snowball) After you have a career and a career, you can then fall in love. Now is the period of growth, don't be dragged down by feelings! Thank you for waiting for the update.

None of the other books I follow have such a low monthly fee like this one, so it's like robbing the rich and giving to the poor.

Sighing a farewell song, sighing that the ending has no solution, If you can't help fate, why listen to God. 🎶

We are recruiting, the salary is good, time travel, rebirth and delivery system are included. Due to the excessive number of new small worlds, there is a serious shortage of time travellers, so time travelers are now being recruited, regardless of gender, old or young, on a first-come, first-served basis. If you like it, you will get the system. (Try them all, it's free anyway)

Some people seem to have just 91 fans for a new book, but in fact there are four cute protagonists and two butlers🤏

It's incomprehensible to read, and it has a sense of instantaneous suturing, and most readers must be confused about the systematic classification of the heavenly stems and earthly branches like me. You should open a new chapter and instruct your intelligence system to carefully sort out the training system. Otherwise, a new word will appear in a while and you will not be able to understand it. The most important thing is that the way the chapters are written is completely incomprehensible to the main line.

Brothers who haven't read this book yet, although the name of this book is really vulgar, the content is not as impressive as the title gives people. Let me talk about my feelings first First of all, this book is not about doing business in ancient times. Becoming the Richest Man 😥 (Don't ask why I mentioned this, it definitely wasn't because I first saw the alias "Wait until you become the richest man, Golden Finger" and thought it was some kind of business-version invincible article) Even by the end of Feng Bei's chapter, I didn't see the difference between this book and What is the close connection between doing business? In my opinion, the identity of the richest man is to promote the plot in many places and reveal the world view Secondly, the early plot of the book seems to be the routine of Xiaobai Shuangwen, but it does have a lot of secrets buried in it. The hidden threads range from the origin and significance of the protagonist's golden finger, to the backgrounds and life experiences of the people around the protagonist, to the turbulent waves that gradually emerge with the changes in history in this seemingly ordinary ancient world, and the ancient puzzles buried in these turbulent waves. Following the perspective of the protagonist, the intertwined clues in different timelines gradually made me feel an ancient world that is exciting and full of unknowns. All kinds of people have their own stories. Carefully read the stories of seemingly hateful people, and the position changes, and it seems that I understand the sorrow and powerlessness in their hearts in an instant. I can't tell whether they are right or wrong, as if I am just seeing one. The interweaving of each position Then let me talk about some of the differences between this book and Natural Disaster in my eyes, no, it is now called Infinite Goddess. There should be no dispute that this book is much better than the beginning of the previous book. Bai Yi's writing style and writing skills at the beginning of this book are undoubtedly much higher than before. Personal feelings, in this book, I seem to be better able to understand and accept the core or what Bai Yi wants to express. It's the love, hatred and thoughts of different characters And I think there has been a lot of progress in character creation. To be honest, when I closed my eyes after reading the second volume that night, one second was the strange spirit of Xieluohe, and the next second was the appearance of Xieluohe's collapse when I first went to the former dynasty's national division treasure house. But I'll just give my personal opinion. Maybe I didn't read it thoroughly enough. Thinking of the way Xie Luohe struggled to prove his existence and the last time he said goodbye, I actually can't accept that the so-called Feng Bei suffering from Xie Luohe's inner demon is the last and the first awakening Feng Bei is a simple person. Is it the sentence at the end of Volume 2 or the beginning of Volume 3 "You can't tell" "I can't tell either" "But I still think about why, "Thinking about who I am" In my opinion, this is both a problem that Feng Bei and the protagonist have to face, and a question that the author throws to the readers (by the way, the pace of this book is a bit slow in the later period. I don't know if I didn't notice the foreshadowing. I feel that there is a lot of preparation to push the readers' emotions at the end, but the actual feelings it gave me are a bit redundant. Personally, I feel that my emotions have been brewed for about 200 chapters. In many parts of the following article, the jar full of emotions is a little spilled) Okay, let's not discuss the plot here. I originally said that I would give brothers who have not watched it or just watched it a reason to have a taste. Returning to the original topic, some brothers may not be able to accept it when they first see the element of group running, but in fact, as someone who has run and led groups, I don't say that I understand it very well, at least I can say that I still understand it. I'm familiar with running groups, but I couldn't remember the elements of running groups when I saw it later (otherwise, I wouldn't have mentioned it here 😵). The author really filtered out the elements of running groups enough to allow people who have never been exposed to running groups to continue reading without affecting the experience. Putting aside this, there may be some brothers who don't like this kind of novel, but to be honest, I think it is a good novel, after reading it deeply The proportion of the subject matter itself will be reduced, replaced by deeper thinking, and you will even fall in love with a subject matter that you once disliked. For me, this book undoubtedly meets this requirement Finally, give Baiyi a thumbs up, this book is really well written👍, better results will come sooner or later, everyone is looking forward to the story behind Zheng Dashan

I wonder if the protagonist has become a member of the Zheng family? He is his own father, his own son, and his own cousin. I am afraid that he is actually the only one in the entire family.

It feels like the author made a lot of plot obscene, but omitted them all. And the short story doesn't have any special highlights. The first story Feng Bei wrote makes people don't know what to write. It was only introduced after the dungeon ended. It turned out to be the alien setting. Changed the past. However, the setting should have felt very unfair, but it felt very bland and abrupt. Gongsun Mo's Cannibal Picture Scroll really takes boredom to the extreme. If I don't have the writing power, I have to spend a lot of time writing this kind of story where the protagonist is changed.

This book is a bit confusing, I can't understand it, I can't understand it

I just read the second chapter, which is a bit poisonous... Muscle strength: strong and powerful, physique: strong and strong, and then the physique turns out to be: weak and sickly? How do you calculate this, and then use loyalty and firmness to quantify willpower? This……

How can I put it this way? The book is a good book, but it's too taxing on the brain. Working at work is already mentally taxing. The author is also a riddler all the time. It's very tiring to read.

I feel that the plot experience after the change of history is a bit worse... It is good to introduce new situations, but the transition is too harsh. When I read the book, I was as confused as Boss Zheng. Moreover, the previous sense of familiarity with the story has completely disappeared. The timeline is different. After the characters start the plot with different timelines, this character is essentially two people. I think Bai Yi really likes this kind of gameplay of being in the same position in different timelines. Personal opinion on Zheng E's vest... I don't like it. I have no sympathy for brats with bad personalities, let alone bringing them in. Although I know that the pilots are all Boss Zheng, but the aircraft are different, these few plots really made my impression worse. Compared to macho painters, brats are really not lovable. I believe in Bai Yi's characterization, but the relationship between Zheng Shan and Zheng Shan is okay. Zheng E is both his son and his cousin. It feels really confusing... Save up and read it again. It will be better to read it in one go after saving up a hundred or two hundred chapters.

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How could strength and frailty appear in one person at the same time?

This book is okay, and the money spent is well worth it. The author's logic is smooth. The author is very fast. It's a good book. Unfortunately, I really don't have the desire to read the name. I clicked on the last book when I was flipping through the list.

The score of this book should be much worse than that of Infinite Goddess. . . I think this way, since you can't write a book full-time for the time being, your time allocation must be tight. In fact, it will be kinder to you to bring in some fandom or infinite flow settings, because you don't have to conceive the plot from scratch, and both the author and the reader can use the existing world view without being obtrusive. . . On this basis, add some of your own ideas to build plot conflicts and exciting points, and then add a central idea with a relatively high intention and finally sublimate it, and the Infinite Goddess will come out. . . There's no guarantee it will explode, but it certainly won't pounce. . . This book feels like it wants to open up a lot of imagination, but the preparation of some things cannot be done overnight, but the amount of updates every day cannot be laid out in a short time. As a result, some people feel that it is procrastinating, and then it is speeded up and simplified, unable to write the desired feeling, and it makes people feel abrupt. . . In short, since Infinite Goddess is relatively successful, there is actually no need to challenge yourself in a part-time job. To use the popular saying of video playing nowadays, I think it is better to cultivate fans in the comfort zone at this stage. I can write a few similar books, but it is good to have some new ideas in each book. Let's solve the problem of survival first. I feel that if there are two more similar books after Infinite Goddess, it will basically be full-time. After full-time and one more stable book, then there will be more support for making some self-breakthroughs, both in terms of material and qualifications. I feel that if I had written the story of Sainthood at that time, it would have been a more exciting story than it is now.

I read it for a long time because I was in school, and it probably has more than 200 chapters. Now that I finally have time to read it, I read it all in one go. I have to say that it is really enjoyable. In today's fast-food world, I think this is definitely a good book worth chewing slowly. The novel subject matter, brilliant ideas and puzzles, warm daily life and description of the emotions between the characters are all very touching. Because I am a book reader, I am not stuck with the long plot of Cannibal Painting like those who have been reading it. Instead, I can read this plot in one go, which makes me sigh. It is indeed the Baiyi I am familiar with, and it is still so stable. Speaking of natural disasters, oh no, it should be called the God's Throne now. I have been reading Bai Yi's books for several years now, and I have to say that Bai Yi's writing style, plot and foreshadowing are all top-notch. Just like I said when I finished the book, I hope to find a good book many years later and find out that the author of this book is Bai Yi. Now it seems that I don't have to bother myself so much. I have switched from pink and white books to pink and white books. From now on, I will definitely follow any book written by white clothes. The above is my personal evaluation of Bai Yi and this book. In addition, regarding the comments from some book friends, I think there are different opinions. Some people like this work, and some don't like it. This is normal. It's just that I think I am also a bookworm with more than ten years of reading experience. I have read many good works and also fast-food works. The so-called Shuangwen and others cannot be confused with this work. I think Shuangwen gives people more of a sense of substitution that satisfies beautiful fantasies and conflicts with dissatisfaction in reality. Satisfaction, but Bai Yi's works are not. When I read the works of outstanding authors like Bai Yi, I will not have that sense of immersion. Instead, I will be attracted by the characters, moved by their world and stories, curious about the beginning of their stories, looking forward to their experiences, and reluctant and relieved at the end of their stories. I think if it can make me feel like this, this is already a good work. As for some book friends, they may really have read too many good works, their tastes have become too sophisticated, and they can't tolerate any sand in their eyes. I can only say that life is not easy, so there is no need to struggle with yourself. If you don't like it, why force yourself? Or, do you really have the patience to read every work worth reading? When you used fast food to evaluate the main meal, it was normal for the taste to be unsatisfactory. I think, when you are criticizing just for the sake of criticizing, why not relax your mind and let others go and let yourself go? After all, you can't get anything of practical significance from it. When you criticize because you really like it and can't tolerate the flaws, I think, since that's the case, why not give it more time, maybe it will bloom the flowers you want? Finally, I have something to say to Bai Yi. Bai Yi, you just need to be yourself. You don't need to change yourself for anyone's opinions or words. Life is not easy for everyone. Your creations bring happiness to many people, which deserves our sincere gratitude. I just hope that you can keep your original intention and share the story in your heart with everyone. If you can persist on this path, I think this is the most worthy of praise. I also hope that Bai Yi can win fame and fame with his work and return with a young heart.

This book is obviously a bit silly It's both a waistcoat and a saint It's well written But the title is too rubbish It's like an invincible novel I don't want to click on it

The beginning of the story was good, but when it came to the so-called heroine Fengbei, it became uninteresting. I sincerely recommend that authors who don't know how to write emotional dramas should not forcefully write emotional dramas. I don't know where the sudden deep affection and deep love came from.

I'm very curious as to why the protagonist who opened up the world to the extraordinary still only opened one door. The timeline overlapped and nothing was given to the protagonist. Zheng Shan's vest didn't become stronger. He had to continue to upgrade from scratch, from the ninth door to the first door, to do a traditional monster-fighting upgrade. After the timelines overlapped, the protagonist, who was originally in control of the extraordinary, successfully transformed into a younger brother, relying on the relationship between the waistcoat and his thighs to pretend to be the superior. The timeline has changed many people in the world, but the protagonist has to start as a soldier. Obviously you can make the protagonist stronger, but you have to merge the timelines and continue to fight monsters and upgrade, opening the door bit by bit. Everything that escapes can only be exerted after reaching higher ground through other paths, right? I'm not happy after reading more than 60 chapters. The previous book was quite good. I remembered the author, so I clicked in to read it. The first script was not bad, but once the timelines were merged, the protagonist's inexplicable intelligence was very strange.

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Let's make an alliance and become familiar with each other😄

I spent more than 60 yuan to read it in two days. I just want to say you pay me back 😆. I skipped a few things in the middle and at the end and didn't book all of it. The cannibal painting seems to have been written for a volume and a half, and the look and feel is completely bad. I know that this copy is to patch up the relationship between the protagonist and Feng Bei, but there is no need to write it so long. The copy in Beiman was very painful to read. I know it is important, but the length is a bit painful. The ending looked like a deus ex machina and I jumped straight away. It felt like it tasted delicious at first, but the more I ate, the more something went wrong, and finally I realized it was swill 🤡

You haven't released a new book yet. Do you want to finish writing Black Myth Wukong?

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The writing gets worse and worse, and the cannibal paintings are even worse.