Start Cultivating Immortality with the Golden Light Curse

To be honest, writing a book is a delicate job. The writing style, real scenes, and conception all need to be logical. To put it bluntly, this book is just a novice composition. Why does the Chinese teacher ask the author to read it himself every time he writes a composition? Some of the things you want to write well are nonsense. This book has three indicators All of them are not up to standard, even if the basics are very poor, it is difficult to become a god without supervision. It is good. If you can find someone to help you polish your pen, you can at least become a platinum writer. First, the writing of this book is not good, and the wording is extremely uncomfortable. It is like a foreigner writing Chinese homework. You will know the author after reading it once. Secondly, there are no realistic descriptions at all. There are no characters, scenes, or real scenes in the story world. From the beginning, it is the inner monologue of the protagonist. Don't you think this story is like a story? It is like a novel. It only describes the name of this county and that prefecture, and then Zhang San and Li Si mention it in one stroke. All the positive and negative characters are described with the same code name. Who knows the characteristics of the characters, and what other worlds look like. There are mountains, water, and somewhere. I don't believe that this book will be exciting. Simplicity does not mean simply describing everything. If the number of words is not enough, you can make it up realistically. Third, the idea is illogical. If there is a problem, would you just pick someone up on the street to look at the problem? Moreover, when you come to another world, you first need to settle down and solve the problem of food and clothing. Anyway, it is messy and the idea is simple and lacks normal logic. If the beginning is not written well, it will be difficult to have the desire to continue reading. This is also my opinion. It doesn't matter whether the author approves it or not. Maybe the author just does it to entertain himself in his spare time.

It's awesome that the protagonist can understand the language of another world.

You said that you have been writing online articles for more than ten years. I guess it is not a profession. Who can write this book in ten years?

The COS king also gave a golden light spell?

If the whole world speaks Mandarin, it would be better to start over as a baby with memories. Started chanting mantras and upgraded since he was two years old.

Is the protagonist a curse cultivator? I haven't seen this kind of system in more than ten years.

The essence of the Jin Guang Mantra seems to be the same as the power given by the gods in the Western Fantasy Church. When you recite the mantra, the gods will give you blessings and power to protect you. The more you recite it, the more blessings you will receive.

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If the whole world speaks Mandarin, it would be better to start over as a baby with memories. Started chanting mantras and upgraded since he was two years old.

The King of Cos didn't even say that he had to give Tai Chi to Fenghou Qimen. What's the point of giving a golden light spell?