Passing the Sword from One Person to the Next

Taiwu is less popular than one person, and Nuanxue is less popular than Taiwu. You know how to stack debuffs.

Isn't Xia He's outlook on things a bit shattered? According to what you said, he killed many people because of his miserable childhood. Why don't you save them all?

I read everyone's comments and found out that my writing skills are not good enough to attract everyone. After beating the Zhu family and opening the system that will be used later, I will just write it back to one person. I will update the chapter of Nuanxue in my spare time [extra].

I feel like I can play with some of Taiwu's schools, otherwise the techniques would be too complicated, such as Gu Zhenren, Counter-Injury Bastard, Xuanyin Finger, Hundred Flowers Needle, etc.

What's wrong with you? Writing a plot like this where going back to the past will affect the current timeline? Why don't you create a new timeline? No, do you really think you can control this butterfly effect plot that spans decades? I really admire you for having the guts to write this kind of thing that is meant for whoever writes it.

Some people don't quite understand whether girlfriends can also inherit. If it comes to marriage, and the male protagonist changes his body, the female protagonist will have to be intimate with different people. Although they know that the soul is the same person, the body and appearance are different, how can the relationship remain unchanged? It really feels too strange, it is better not to have a female protagonist.

When I clicked in, I was attracted by the Taiwu picture scroll system, the plot of Under One Person, and the recently played Nuan Xue. The main point is to see how the descendants of Taiwu can revitalize the characters in Under One Person. Liu Yanyan hopes that the protagonist will not lose his horse. By the way, can Qiyu travel to some unpopular martial arts game worlds?

How to say it. . . You are not telling a good story. Your work is like mistletoe growing on other people's works. If I had not read Under One Person, I would not know what story you are telling. The protagonist's motivation is also very disordered. At first, he wants to become stronger and fight against the heavenly master, but then he wants a perfect ending. I think the character you wrote is okay, but why is it so confusing?

The writing is good, but it's not that exciting. After practicing the skills, he doesn't show that he has become stronger. Whoever he fights is injured first. Everyone is stronger than the protagonist at every turn, and then the protagonist wins inexplicably. There is no description of the fact that the protagonist has become stronger. Everyone thinks that the protagonist is not simple, but they all think that he is weak. The Taiwu sword hilt spirit is equivalent to a protagonist cheating, but it is not shown at all. The fact of cheating, what are the enhancements of those skills, what special effects do they have, what are the differences from one person's skills, what are the special places, what are the advantages that are equivalent to cheating, just like if you write about Naruto system and go to Pirates, you have to write about the place where ninjutsu is the symbol and personality of the protagonist, the superiority of ninjutsu, the special role of this otherworldly power in pirates, the ability to tread water and control water, etc. When going to Naruto in the Pirate System, you have to write about how evil Haki is and how cool and powerful Devil Fruit is. So it's better to study how to write it more comfortably.

The part about Luo Tianda's dip was not well written, and the feeling of tearing was too strong. Regardless of the content, the front foot followed Liu Yanyan's mortal flow, and the back foot danced with Sister Bao'er as a great fairy. Both ways of writing were fine. The mortal flow was not much and said that it was much more fun on the day. Dancing with the great god was also okay. After all, the protagonist is a sword. When the truth was revealed in the later stage, it was okay to say that the protagonist was a sword. It was enough to re-cultivate and meet Sister Bao'er, but the two styles were very speechless when they appeared together, and the sense of tearing was too strong.

How should I put it? This is a self-entertainment novel by the author. The plot is basically written to make up for what the author thinks is the regret of being alone, so don't read it with your brain.

The plot is a bit weird. Is the author excited about it? Is Liu Yanyan beginning or ending? I still don't know what the main plot is.

Abandoned in Chapter 13, because from here on it is inexplicably too powerful.

The style of painting he wears doesn't even match it. The martial arts themes like Nuan Xue, which is based on fantasy and horror, can barely be considered. What's the point of wearing Elden? The old thief Miyazaki has such a distinctive style. Even the Elden fanfic author cannot grasp the mess of the entire story. You still have one person and Daigo as the basic world view. Elden has such an obscure plot, rough characters, and completely different three-dimensional themes and world settings. This is SpongeBob SquarePants and Ghost in the Shell teaming up. What kind of content can be written with completely mismatched painting styles? A circle does not have to be rigidly integrated! What about online articles such as Jin Yong, Gu Long, Huang Yi, Hong Kong Comics, Fengyun, Lin Zhengying's zombie series, Even in the Snow, and Jiang Ye, at least the style of painting is similar? I beg the author to choose a copy of Yangjian!

Elden is indeed not related. This combat power is not easy to balance. The dragon clan can feel it is okay and cannot kill randomly but it is useful. In fact, there is no need to upgrade Taiwu's combat power. Just write something similar and difficult to upgrade.,,

It feels too thin, the article has no depth, and the author's writing skills are still too shallow. You can read the story of "One person next door, both lives are saved." I personally feel that this book is not bad. I hope the author can write better articles. After all, there are too few to read now.

The creativity is very good, the writing is average, and the plot is not too slow But the main character is actually a sword hilt, and the author has written emotional dramas and heroines. Also, the protagonist is a soul-transporter, and before he has any memory, he was still a bad guy, although he hasn't done anything wrong yet. I am a little tired of this kind of plot promotion method. I think it is very clever, but it is very cliché... Because there are too many, and the writing does not feel exciting... Well, that's it.

As we all know What matters in soul travel is one's identity and innocence What serious crime must be suffered on behalf of others Isn't this an injustice?

I couldn't hold back after reading the first chapter. The protagonist's name: Yi Xiangshu (Yixiangshu) is the hilt of the Fuyu Sword! The subject matter is unpopular, and the imagination is really big! If the Taiwu clan has a spirit in the sky, it must be...

After reading ten chapters, I felt sick. One moment a martial skill or something popped up, and there was no explanation of where it was learned or when. The next moment it was related to Quan Xing, and there was no explanation of how it was related. It was incomprehensible and the reader had to guess for himself.

Why not write unlimited streaming? The setting is suitable for people who want to live in an unlimited flow and seize various worlds. It's a good book about The Eunuch.

I can't stand it anymore. What have I been writing lately?

Just cut it, writing it again is a waste of time.

Is there anyone else writing the Taiwu system of the same type?

I've never played Taiwu and I can't understand the protagonist's cheats.

I can't understand and don't know what I'm writing.

I have a question to ask. I have never played the game, so I want to know if the male protagonist is a time traveler, or that a time traveler first traveled through time and became a sword, or that he first chose a certain character to travel through, and became that character and took that character's things and traveled to a world under one person.

Nuanxue, either you don't want to write, or you can write a few pages about what I'm reading? I just came in when I saw Nuanxue.

Is this going to kill you? If the author writes a new book, please let me know.

I've sent it now. I was ready to order all of it. You told me that you won't write anymore. Forget it and wait for the next one. Author, you have to be strong.