The Sword Comes from Nine Heavens

The city of Wanli is broken and all grudges are gone, and the son in white is away from Jiutian, away from Jiutian! There is no sword in the scabbard, the sword is cold, the snow is startling the two flying swallows, the two flying swallows! Wuxing brings peace to all living beings in the world, but the monarch and his ministers are the most difficult to live with! Even if the sky is covered with white clothes, a jar of turbid wine will guard the Central Plains, guard the Central Plains! I have to say that the author's writing style is really good. I quite like the character of the protagonist. The feeling of a young man with high spirits and great aspirations is hidden in the author's ancient style of writing, which makes it quite interesting to read. The other supporting characters in the article also have their own merits. Although the number of words is not very large now, I think if it were written to several million words, it would definitely be a good article. Please improve.

Book review: Treat wine as a song, the scenery is picturesque, and we talk about life in front of flowers under the moon. The story begins with the prosperity of the dynasty in the scenic scenery. The young man drinks heavily and is drunk by the breeze, and shouts a wild and hearty war song. It is attractive and full of pictures. One man, one horse and one carefree, what kind of chapter will the heroic protagonist write? There are many songs and poems in this book, but they are not too obtrusive and are well integrated with the stories in the book. In the early stage, the character line progresses at a very good pace, and the writing style is more like a sword fight in the snow. Only based on seeing the updates as a criterion: Protagonist personality and characteristics: 8 points (10 points out of 10) Supporting character characterization: 7.5 Points (10 points out of 10 points) Story logic 8.5 Points (10 points out of 10 points) Writing style includes text delicacy, overall fluency, typos, etc.: 8.5 (1 0 Points is perfect) Plot rhythm control: 7.5 (10 Points is perfect) The tentative comprehensive score is 80 points (below 60 points are works that need to be improved, 60-80 are works that can be read in the book wasteland, 80-90 points are considered high-quality works, and 90 points and above are waiting to become gods) Follow-up expectation value (potential value) +8 to 12 points, the future can be expected. If the story echoes from beginning to end and is completed with high quality, it may become a god. This book is more suitable for friends who have a slower pace and like to immerse themselves in reading. The book builds a quite large world, which can be seen from the previous chapters. Suggestion: Rhythm conflict points can be appropriately strengthened. If there is no obvious conflict, some laughter points can be filled in, which can increase the reader's emotional ups and downs. It is easy to get tired of maintaining an emotion for a long time. Summary: Excellent seedlings, worth investing in 🌹

Wow, that great god condescended to do this! 🤭The gorgeous writing and the vivid plot really make us monks look up to it and feel overwhelmed. The article can be said to have been created by nature, and a good hand has to acquire it! Come on, author, I want to invest in you and give you all my recommendation votes. At the same time, please pay attention to taking care of yourself, updating is the second priority. [Cover the face][Cover the face]

Damn, it's really good. I want to ask, are you planning to sign a contract? I'm a student too and want to know.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Come on, keep updating every day.

Hope readers like this book

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Come on, keep updating every day.

I can't really write about fan fiction, it's not suitable for us. The purpose of writing a book is to write about your own feelings. As for whether it goes against the views of most people or is not popular, just write down what you feel in your heart. No need to care too much

I got it from my assistant. I finished it in one night. I just wanted to turn a thousand words into one awesome sentence. I haven't signed a contract for such brilliant writing yet, so I started to worry about whether I should continue writing ( Anyway, come on, I'm still waiting to see the follow-up👍

Give me more information to die ( ˶´⚰︎`˵ )

Let's just say that there is still a small problem, that is, the subject uses too many names of the protagonists, which makes it seem a bit monotonous. Some other personal pronouns can be used appropriately.

Hope: Save the manuscript appropriately and update it regularly. Updating once a week is not a big problem, but you still have to determine a fixed time for updating. After updating, you can save some manuscripts before that time to deal with unexpected situations!

It's a little strange that there are four consecutive paragraphs at the beginning. If I were to write it, I would change the protagonist's name in the second paragraph to him, write the third paragraph as the boy has not tied the horse, and omit the subject in the fourth paragraph, which will make the impression better. The writing style is not bad, but I can tell that I am a newbie in online writing

I planted a seed and hit Deidara

I am ashamed of the young man's bookish spirit.

I'm a little late today because I'm too busy. I give the author a thumbs up. This is a good book worth following up on.

What is supposed to come will come sooner or later. As long as the story is good and the number of words is enough, people will definitely read it.

One chapter a day, when can I finish it😂

Become an old fan just to catch up on updates.

I drank wine yesterday and am feeling dizzy now...

Must recommend😁😁😁

It's very artistically written, and the sadness in the boy's eyes is also sadness.

There are updates every day, which is very good

I've read a few chapters and I think it's quite good and has a bit of flavor. I'll give you a recommendation vote.

This book is very interesting. You are welcome to give it a try.

Is it possible to become a god with one million? If not, then become a god with tens of millions.

Do you want to wait for the opportunity to update more one day?

The author should update quickly, don't be lazy like me, and look forward to the success of the internal submission of the new work.